FF- DEEWANGEE: Ch18 'Its 8 pm on pg 55

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Ramona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: tukun2009

amazing pls continue soon👏 thanks a lot..

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Ramona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Sunaha6
hai ramona.....dear i am happy that jagat got dialogues atleast in your FF....🤣🤣🤣
nicely written....do continue...... darling whr were you?? Missed you so much.. anyway thanks

Luv,
$un@h@ luv you too 😳

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Ramona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: laxmi73
Very interesting..Par yeh hamare Avi toh nahin...

achha nahi laga kya?? 😔

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shahbara

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

Superb Ramona! Thanks for the long and beautiful chapter!⭐️⭐️⭐️.... i like the gorgeous Arpi and her passionate lover !......I like in a romance where the hero who is very much in love with the heroine will do anything to get her! provided he is not violent...he should make her feel safe and secure. Good debut Ramona!....eagerly waiting for your next update! 👏👏👏

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Komal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Hey Ramona,

nice chapter, avi is completely different, I m curious for the next chap.

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sharan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

oyeeeeeee ramonaaaaaaaaaa

this is awesomeeee

avi in new avtarrrrrrr

toooooo gooooooooooooood

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super_boy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

M loving it...........AVITA's characters r different frm d show n interesting....... waiting 4 d next part 👏👏

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Sidda

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

Kriya thanks for the FF update. You are wonderfully portraying Avi's character as you said before as a rich spoiled male. Regardless, all of his bravado and cockiness will vanish when he realizes that he loves Arpi. But I'm surprised that the girls hadn't noticed Avi's entering, I would have imagined his entrance to be as striking and powerful as a blazing sun. Maybe I'm just crazy about Avi like any girl. He has that power on all girls whether he is a gunda or a wealth professional.