jungle main mangal........OS on Avitha

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Posted: 14 years ago
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JUNGLE MAIN MANGAL....šŸ¤£šŸ˜†

Hiyeeeeeeeee avitians...tnx a ton for liking my ff...Trust me, I wanted to place avitha in a similar situation...but the cv...s had done it..So I had to re- edit my FF...Anyways, I thought, I will give it as a OS.

Do tell me how it was............

Escaping RV...s tight security, Arpitha escorts her dear love and manages to protect him from the cops.But her tough luck, they were soon spotted and chased.Rv was determined to end up Awdesh...s story.Awdesh was equally determined to ensure his freedom.

Seeing that awdesh is getting away,Rv shot a bullet, that punctured the tyre and awdesh lost balance. avitha fall off the bike and roll down the edge into the dense forest.

Controlling the speed, awdesh balances and helps Arpitha stand back...They run far off into the forest.

Awdesh...s wound is hurting him.The bullet was removed, but the wound was still fresh.Blood flowed out, causing much pain.

Arpitha(sobbing)--"Awdeshji..."

Not able to walk further, awdesh falls on the ground...Arpitha helps supporting him, but it goes in vain.

Arpitha--"God.Please help…Awdeshji…nothing will happen to you.I ..i..will protect you…"

Arpitha held him in her lap and touched his forehead, gently, as if it would reduce his pain…

She could hear the noise of water splashing against the rocks.

Arpitha..."Awdeshji...I ...ll get you some water.nothing will happen to you."

Arpitha leaves him there and runs in the direction of water.She finds a stream of fresh water flowing down from the hill.Luckily, there is a small shelter along the shore.It was just a flat plank of wood, supported on three legs and the plank sliding to the fourth edge.

Arpitha soaks her sari in the water and hurries back to awdesh.She squeezes the water in his mouth.then gently, wipes his forehead with her wet hand. Awdesh comes back into reality. Arpitha supports him, to stand back on his feet

Arpitha--"Awdeshji…come…its becoming dark…I found a hideout for us"

Awdesh looks at her…Her concern, care and love moves him to the core…He moves with her…

They reach the small roof, they found for themselves…Arpitha helps awdesh sit on the ground and the night slowly crawls in…

Awdesh--"All this troubles and worries…all this you have to bear and tolerate…just because of me"

Arpitha--"In your love, I...ll face the hardest of situation with least pain…all that I need is your love and the feeling of you being mine…"

Awdesh is moved to her love...He hugs her...Arpitha allows the hug by coming closer...

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Awdesh gets tired and falls asleep...Arpitha allows him to sleep in her lap...She caringly, moves her hand, on his forehead...watching him rest in peace, she feels better...The moon showered all his light, which reflected in the stream nearby...A firefly came that way and saw Arpitha taking care of awdesh...

Firefly--"Buzz........buzzzzzzzz"

Human translation--(Lovers.....Hehehehe)

The firefly decided to add to the scene...it went near Arpitha and tried to drag her attention...Arpitha eventually saw the firefly and smiled...Achieving its primary goal, the firefly went buzzing nearer to Awdesh's face...Arpitha noticed him in the light the firefly tried to eject...His dense eyebrows...Unshaved beard...light brown complexion...

She bent a little and placed a gentle kiss on his forehead...without a blink, she started starring at him...Her act caused awdesh to wake up...still laying in her lap, he slowly opened up his eyes...he also started to watch her...

Arpitha smiles...

Arpitha..."Are you still feeling week..."

Awdesh doesn't answer...He is taken aback by his wife's beauty...His wife looked much prettier than the moon...He was now in a total trance...Catching awdesh stare at her, Arpitha moves a bit, causing, awdesh to sit back...She quickly stands up and moves a distance facing away from awdesh...

Awdesh(Lovingly)--"Arpitha..."

His voice made her feel restless...She moved a step ahead and stood in the water, which touched just her feet...and flowed away. Awdesh moved in her direction and caught her waist from behind and came closer to her...

Her heart beat increased...

He kissed her on her neck...

Arpitha closes her eyes in sheer happiness...

Awdesh walked past her and now stood in front of her in the water...

The air around them sensed the intimacy...It started to blow gently...causing the hair to dance on its tunes...

Awdesh lifted her chin and examined her broad little eyes...that fitted well in her perfectly carved face...He came forward and planted a warm kiss on her cheek bone...

Arpitha blushed in happiness and hugged him...

Awdesh opened up his arms, allowing the hug to accomplish...

Awdesh--"I love you Arpitha..."

Arpitha--"I love you too awdeshji..."

Finding solace in each others hug, they stood there in between of the jungle, in the water touching their feet...Awdesh moved behind and placed his hand on arpitha...s cheek and tried to kiss her on her lips...Arpitha moved away shyly...

Awdesh caught her hand and pulled her back...

Awdesh--"Was i doing something wrong...."

Arpitha nods her head in a no....

Awdesh holds her chin up and presses his lips onto hers...She delights and places her hands around his neck and kisses him back.....Their shadow falling in the stream water......

The moment is treasured by another person there.....

Watching all this from a distance, the firefly buzzed again...

Firefly..."buzz...buzz"

Human translation..."Eternal love..."ā¤ļø

i actually edited it, keeping in mind the pratigya part.......šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

Soooooooooo, how was it.....😃

Edited by Sunaha6 - 14 years ago

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yoga23priya thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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way to go sunaha.........congo dear.....love it small gift from your number 1 fanšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ priya...........Ice cream...........now roses............girl you got my weaknesss now..........🤣

loved it ra...............šŸ¤—

iam literally dancing...........dinchak dinchak dinchak........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh my
i forgot this was sort of fan fiction

i thought i watched this on tv just now..

too good too good

well purna brahmcharya pratigya it was

and now its half brahmcharya

hehehhaha


wow again

now really hoping something like we wud get to see on tv

too good sunaha

just one curiosity

what the hell is OS
I MEAN FULL FORM
Suhana6 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: chatterbox

oh my
i forgot this was sort of fan fiction

i thought i watched this on tv just now..

too good too good

well purna brahmcharya pratigya it was

and now its half brahmcharya

hehehhaha


wow again

now really hoping something like we wud get to see on tv

too good sunaha

just one curiosity

what the hell is OS
I MEAN FULL FORM



os--one shot di.....

Hehehehe...I actually edited a lot of the scene....Yup fingers crossed.....Cvs plz yaar............
Edited by Sunaha6 - 14 years ago
chatterbox thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
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oh it means one shot

so many short forms

and i m totally clueless

u girls hv to make glossary for me i guess

hehee
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: chatterbox

oh my
i forgot this was sort of fan fiction

i thought i watched this on tv just now..

too good too good

well purna brahmcharya pratigya it was

and now its half brahmcharya

hehehhaha


wow again

now really hoping something like we wud get to see on tv

too good sunaha

just one curiosity

what the hell is OS
I MEAN FULL FORM

good answer di......love it
Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Sunaha,
Your OS is pretty romantic and fact full hopefully something similar happens to themšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hiiieee sweetie... Oh gosh! i was literally imagining it....šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜
well done sunahašŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
i was blushing when i was reading ā˜ŗļøā˜ŗļøā˜ŗļøā˜ŗļøā˜ŗļø
thnk u dear.....it was beautiful..
i hope it happens....
cv's are u listening???
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shwetha85

Hi Sunaha,
Your OS is pretty romantic and fact full hopefully something similar happens to themšŸ˜‰




Hopefullllllllyyyyyyyyyy swetha........😊

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