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Suhana6

@Suhana6

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: chatterbox
hey loved this yaar

i thought i had commented here on the fifth part
guess i forgot

keep them cming

heyiiiiiiii di......no probs di.......just want your comments and likes.....😉
it feels great that my work is liked.....😊😃

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Suhana6

@Suhana6

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: cupidstrike23
ohh sunaha.. just temme 1 thing.. wat r u doin here...???
dat was soo gud nd i actly felt like im reading updates of any serial's epi....
tooooooooooooooooo gud ra... nuvvu asal ek dum keka ra... fulltoo dinchestunnavu...!!!👏👏👏
thanx 4 dis ra..

@ bold.............hehehehehe.....trying to droolll over awi........🤣🤣

loved your emos swati..............😊

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Suhana6

@Suhana6

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Posted: 14 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: yoga23priya
Sunaha ice cream gift neku.......

yummmmmmmmmmmmmyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.........wooooooooow priya..........strawberry, vanila, choclate, rasberry,.......all flavors at a time..............

yummmmy.....

luv you priya for such a wonderful gift........

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Suhana6

@Suhana6

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: prash_t
oyyyee hoyyeeee😳😳😳

wooow sunaha..

tht was mindblowing!!!!!!!!!!!

muaaaaaahhhh sunaha...

i looooooooooved it😳😳

ohhhhhhhhh sweetiiiiiiiiiiiii😳😳i am blushing for the kiss now.........😆
😳

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Suhana6

@Suhana6

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#115

Okieeeeeeees here comes the next part....Guyssss, please bear with my spellings, if spelled wrong....ms-word is not working properly in my system......
Happppppppy reading................😊😉😃

Part 6

Chulbul'"Bhaiyaji'What did bhabi say after you gave her the flowers? Was she happy'? "
Awdesh listens to him silently, concentrating on the driving'
Chulbul (little excitedly)'"Did you tell her how you felt?"

Awdesh stopped the vehicle with a sudden brake'Chulbul knew, by this time that awdesh was angry and would kick him any moment now'He made up his mind'

Chulbul'"Bah'.Bhaiyaji'I was'was'just being curious'"

Awdesh turns to him'Awdesh watches him for a moment'

Awdesh'"I am not meant for her'She deserves much more'She deserves a life filled with happiness and comfort'not life of tensions and worries'"

Chulbul'"What did you mean by I am not meant for her'? "

Before he could continue, Awdesh's phone rang'

The man'"Bhaiyaji'He is towards the north side of the jungle'Pappu and his men are residing in a small wood cottage there'He is planning something'I am not sure but, its certainly regarding you'He planned to break you down, but I am not sure how???"

Awdesh'"good sarwana'I am coming'"

Awdesh speeds to the area sarwana, just told him'All the way driving, he thought of her'He cannot put her in danger, for the sake of his love'He knew his life very well'His life, surrounded with crime'He himself didn't know, where he is heading in life'All that he aims for now, is lal Singh's death, in his hands'

The cottage surrounded by dense forest, was a beautiful place'Men came in, with a girl being dragged by her hands, while she lay unconscious'

Pappu lifts her chin up and examines her in her motionless state'
Pappu'"Put her in'She is mine'"

Pappu leaves the cottage, ordering his men to guard the cottage and girl'and he would return in a few hours'
Awdesh reaches the spot'Pappu was lucky enough that he exits, just before Awdesh's arrival'

Awdesh examines the place...He orders his men to surround the place and prepare for an attack...
He finds Pappu's men moving around freely and 2 of them guarding the cottage...
Awdesh--"He must be inside..."
Awdesh signals his men for a quick attack...The men attack the place and gain control over the place in no time...Awdesh heads towards the cottage...He hits the door, hard with his leg, causing it to break open...
He looks around...There is no one around...

Awdesh(shouts aloud in wrath)--"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh"

Awdesh comes out of the cottage and stands disappointed...
Chulbul--"Bhaiyaji...That Pappu, left just before we came in..."
Awdesh determines to leave and chase him...suddenly he hears, the sounds...The sound of someone's anklets...It was coming from the cottage...
He gets in to see a girl blind-folded and her hands and legs tied up, with her mouth plastered...It was arpitha...hitting her legs hard on the ground...
Awdesh is in a shock to find her in the cottage...he visited her that very morning and how did she land up here...

Awdesh hurried near her...He tried to unfold her hands first, but, she moved away in fear...Awdesh, Forcefully untied the knots behind her and let her hands and legs free...and then he carefully, removed the plaster from her mouth...

Gasping for breath Arpitha moved back and removed the cloth, that was tied tight...to her eyes...

Arpitha coudn't believe her eyes...It was him again to save him...She ran towards him and hugged him tight in fear...

Awdesh held her in his arms and tried to comfort her...

Awdesh--"Arpitha...Iam here...I am with you...It's fine...Stop crying...no one can harm you now...I am with you...calm down..."

Moving his hand on her hair, he tries to settle her down, while arpitha is still sobbing...

Awdesh--"But, how come you are here...?"
Awdesh moves back a bit, facing her, still holding her in his hug...
Arpitha--"I don't know...I was home...In my room...Suddenly, some one from behind...And...And...I don't remember...Then i found myself here tied up..."
Awdesh sights tears rolling down her cheek...He gently, wipes them out and nods his head in a no...asking her not to cry...

Chulbul comes in to find out, why bhaiyaji hasn't come out yet...

Chulbul--"Bhayajiiiiii(his tone lowers)iiiiiiii"

Watching them, he hurries back...Awdesh breaks the hug...Arpitha finds it quite embarrasing...moving back, She sets her hair back, behind her ear...

Awdesh--"Chulbul...arrange the vehicle, and send arpitha ji, back home..."

Arpitha watches him...his concern for her...Wiping out the left out tears, she follows him outside the cottage...

Awdesh too was unable to find a proper reason for her, being bought in there...He was sure Pappu did this...But why??? What enimity does she have with him?

Awdesh escorts arpitha to the vehicle...

Chulbul comes in with a goon of Pappu--"Bhayaji...This man will surely know, where pappu is..."

Awdesh turns to him...

Awdesh(with heroistic attitude)--"Listen...It will be good for you, if you yourself will straight away tell where Pappu is...And why was Arpitha bought here..."

The man(already beaten up badly)--"Please...Please let me go...i don't know where Pappu is...He just told me to bring her here and safe guard her...bcoz...bcoz..."

Awdesh(stern)--"WHY?"

The Man--"Because, Pappu thinks you loved her...And your visit, to her confirmed his suspect...Disgracing her, he thought, would break you down and at the same time satisfy his desires..."

Awdesh grew ferocious...He coudn't even think of it...He punched the man with a strong blow, causing him to fall on the ground unconsious...

Awdesh turned back and looked at arpitha...She already fell asleep...She might have gone through a lot of worry...

Awdesh started the vehicle, and drove back into the town...He watched her, sleeping...Her swollen eyes, due to continous crying...Her untidy clothes...It was just that morning, he was assured that she is safe...And now its her, in this state...He cursed himself for being responsible...He woudn't spare anyone for causing even a little pain to her and here its him, who brought in all the problem...If Pappu woudn't suspect, that he cared for her, he would never, come in to harm her...Now she was his responsibility...Her security and well being, is in his hands...

He turned the vehicle and headed towards the haveli...

Chalo....Pasandh agayi tho likewa button bha bhai dio.....Tanikh sunliyo.....Sharmana nahi....Comment bhi khar dho..............

Please feel free to comment...it can be anything...even if you want to point out to spelling mistakes, i am open to accept......

Edited by Sunaha6 - 14 years ago

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Yoga priya

@yoga23priya

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#116

WOW..........

nenu ni number fan ra

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Suhana6

@Suhana6

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#117

@ priyaa.........Ohhhhh its feeling great..........❤️🤗
I am glad you liked it..........what should i say now.............yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😳

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Yoga priya

@yoga23priya

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: Sunaha6
@ priyaa.........Ohhhhh its feeling great..........❤️🤗
I am glad you liked it..........what should i say now.............yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😳

just accept this from me