Arpi's Story: Of Dolls, wardrobe and Shiv-Parvati

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Vistaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: joliefille
👏obviously seetiyan ,and words for praise would seems less in front of ur writing,seriously i always wait for ur posts so keep on posting these kind of explenations of charecter's inner soul it increase our intrest in story,n when u discribe her thoughts over her mother's stat it remind me some lines of a novel""god made us women ,he don't want us to ask questions ,if he wants he don't made us women,"" well onc again awsome , terefic n mind blowing writing hats of to u👍🏼

Hola Jollie,

Thanks so much dear for your kind words😳😊

What novel is that? Would love to read it.....😊 Yes, I think her mother's position in the family and the ill-treatment that she receives from her father is the single most importan contributing factor to Arpi's nature and attitude.

Thanks again.

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Vistaa

@Vistaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Dreamygal301
Vista,👏👏

very nice!!...is this a one of a kind or will you write FF for Avita?

coming late to the party...I see talks of blogs...do u have one?😊

Thanks Dreamy

. Happy that you liked it.

Originally, I had wanted to write a two part: one Arpi's story and the other Avi's..........but with just a few days to go, not sure I will able to swing the other part ...at least until the next week. There is only one time that I wrote FF.....for a most beloved couple....the show got shut down abruptly and then the forum was locked up still more abruptly but oh well...let's talk of happier times😆

I don't have one, but CB insists that I should seriously consider

She is a darling😳

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Vistaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: emina
Oh Vista its beautiful🤗😳.. Please continue so that we can read lots more from you👍🏼👏

Oh Thank you Emina🤗

I do hope to write one on Avi too....let's see when I am able to😉

Thanks

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PrashT

@PrashT

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Vista Di.......

this is fr u....

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

ur essay made me speechless..i was abt to cry....

the dolls, the dreams and shattering of dreams.....nd words wch u used to express it...beautiful di...😳

u r sweetheart di..excellent..no words to express more

thnk u fr such a lovely post..i juz lovd it..

i think suggestions abt blog by cb di , ashu and all..its a great idea..

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remosalsa

@remosalsa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Vista😳, finally i read it & understood it too😉😆😆 Its really amazing 👏👏 U have put down the words so brilliantly U should get a Actually, i never liked literature but, urs was very easy to understand it😳😳

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Vistaa

@Vistaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: prash_t
Vista Di.......
this is fr u....

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

ur essay made me speechless..i was abt to cry....

the dolls, the dreams and shattering of dreams.....nd words wch u used to express it...beautiful di...😳

u r sweetheart di..excellent..no words to express more

thnk u fr such a lovely post..i juz lovd it..

i think suggestions abt blog by cb di , ashu and all..its a great idea..

Oh Hi Prash🤗.....I had been waiting for you😳

Thanks so much , really appreciate your kind words😳

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Vistaa

@Vistaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: remosalsa
Vista😳, finally i read it & understood it too😉😆😆 Its really amazing 👏👏 U have put down the words so brilliantly U should get a Actually, i never liked literature but, urs was very easy to understand it😳😳

Oh Ashu, Ashu 😃😆😆....aapka hum kya karen?.........oh gosh, you really are the best in the business👏👏

🤣

Seriously, seriously funny

Luvved each one of them, specially the dozing one🤣

Thanks so much for finally reading😉😆 and commenting....am so glad that liked it.

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PrashT

@PrashT

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: vista90pro

Oh Hi Prash🤗.....I had been waiting for you😳

Thanks so much , really appreciate your kind words😳

hiee di....🤗🤗 so sweet di.😳

u r most welcum😊

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remosalsa

@remosalsa

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: vista90pro

Oh Ashu, Ashu 😃😆😆....aapka hum kya karen?.........oh gosh, you really are the best in the business👏👏

🤣

Seriously, seriously funny

Luvved each one of them, specially the dozing one🤣

Thanks so much for finally reading😉😆 and commenting....am so glad that liked it.