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Jessie

@jes_jade

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

Okk..really sorry...this part got boring...I had nice ideas about Avi-Chirag convo...but now I am not able to get any humour...Plzz someone add hilarious dialogues for Avi-chirag scenes...

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Vistaa

@Vistaa

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: -Cwezy_Manoola-
@Cupid :heheheh updated Pg 1 😉 Check the 1st post 😆 tomorz as much we write, I'll Open a Thread for the much we wrote 😉 so tht Every1 could read it 😆

Hmmm, cough, cough....great job Manal, posting the story till now on page 1.....but😛 don't you think the author credits are missing someone...?🤣🤣...It was a small part, maybe that's why😉....

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yasmin

@javeria19

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#53

really guys ur doing very well yaar i loved ur post keep going and thanxxxx for making our weekend special love u all guys

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MannMeRamBasale

@DamRyeong

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#54

guys plz updt ur story...do cont..im still online..just to read ur OS....
kaidar gaye mitro.....

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Vistaa

@Vistaa

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: akki-rockstar
guys plz updt ur story...do cont..im still online..just to read ur OS....
kaidar gaye mitro.....

OK, will be back with something shortly...kahin jaayiyo mat😆

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Suraya

@Ruya

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#56

Hey guys ur story is going great I was thinking of doing a scene or 2 but after reading ur posts I don't think i will embarrass myself plz keep the scenes coming specially romantic 1's I'm gonna go 2 sleep now will check it in d morning
Bye 🤗

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Vistaa

@Vistaa

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: jes_jade
Avi & Arpi are returning from Moti Mahal...Arpi is silent...
Avi: Aap itni shaant kyun ho gayi??
Arpi: Nahi...wo...hum soch rahe the...ki...
Avi: Aap hum se kyun darr rahi hain...bol dijiye jo bolna ho...
Arpi: Woh hume maa ki yaad aa rahi hai..hum ek baar milna chahte the..
Avi: Bas itni si baat....par agar engineer wahaan hua toh woh bewajah humse maar kha jaayega..
Arpi: Nahi abhi ghar par papa nahi hote...
Avi: Phir theek hai..

AVITA reach the home...Her mom opens the door..
Arpi & Mom get really happy....Both Avi-Arpi enter..
Chirag is as usual sitting on dining table & munching..Avi speaks to him..
Avi: Aur Pranam saale sahab
C: Aur boliye jija ji..
Avi smiles on hearing Jija ji
C: aur aapne toh bade filmy tareeke se entry maari aur humari behen ko utha le gayye...waah..hume bhi aapki tarah banana hai..kuch gyaan batayenge..

All right, here we go:

Avi smiles his half-smile, looks down and then saunters over to where C is lounging in a chair. Putting a hard hand on C's shoulder that makes him cough, Avi says:

"Aree saale sahab, ab isma koi degree thode hi liyen hai hum jo aapko gyaan baatenge....baaki, ee jaroor hai ki abhi talak humne kaune hero aeesa nahin dekha hai jiske baal aapke jitne laambe hon............woh ka hai ki, baalon ki lambaayi utni hi honu chaahi jitna ki aurat marad ka pharak boojha ja sake............."

C is listening with bated breath and his expression change from rapt attention to embarrassment to acute discomfort.

C: "Woh Jijaji...woh ...arre, yeh to aajkal ka fashion hai..."

Avi: "Faison...........yeh kaeesa faeeson........"

C: Are usko jaani dijeye aap....hero banne ke aur kuch tareeke bataayi"

Avi:" Phir wahi....aapki to lagi hai jaise recordwa par sooyiye hi atak gawi hai....." he smiles and pauses then goes on. "Asli hero apne aas paas kabhi koi atyachaar nahi hone deta.....apne se kamjor aoor ablaon ki sada raksa karta hai.....apni sakti ka istamaal hamesa nyay ke liye karta hai.................samjhe aap, saale saab.....hum to suni raha ki aapke ghar mein bhor-sanjh atyachaar hot rahe............par ab aapke rehte aur nahin hona chaahi,,,,aoor kabhi jo aapko laagi ko baat aapke samjh se baahar hai...to aap humen batana, haina?" Avi puts his hand on C's shoulder and gives him a very significant, stern look.

C nods, too scared to do anything else.

Edited by vista90pro - 15 years ago

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Vistaa

@Vistaa

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#58

Arre bhai, kahan gaye aap sab? Ek bhi comment nahi....😭

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yasmin

@javeria19

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#59

mean time in the house manjari comes to arpi house and arpi introduces manjari to avi than
manjari tells avi-meine hi aap dono ko mil waya hai agar mein woh letter aap k ghar nhi lati toh aap mandap pe kaise aate
avi-sukriya salih saheba
manjari-koi baat nhi jijaji arpi k liye kuch bhi kar sakti hun manjari got an idea than
manjari tell avi-jijaji chaliye aap ko ek cheez dikhani hai
Avi-kya salih saheba
arpi-kya dikhana hain?
manjari-chaliye toh
arpi-kahan ? (surprisingly)

Edited by javeria19 - 15 years ago

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aleena1

@aleena1

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#60

Awesome guys😃

I tried to do this on Pratigya forum where every1 contributes to the ff... but no-one did😡........... In the end I did the ff instead and its still outstanding........ cant be bothered to carry on........

GKD members are rocking😎 keep it up dudes........ thanx for contribution.......

Hmmmmmm I would like to contribute......... but Knowing myself I will end up making a silly spoof me cant do romantic stories😆...... manal and others know what Im like😆

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