FF: Do Lafzon mein ye bayaan na ho paaye Ch39Pg120 - Page 61

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sauris

Prachu superb chappi,lagta hai kesar will find out gulalsplan through her dairy.jaldi se update kar

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: KesarGulaal123

⭐️OMG prachurya.🤗.I am just lubbing it👏 you are truely amazing i have no words to describeanyways its too late im off to bed 🥱

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Prachu - first on take a hug for the longer update 🤗ahhh jhappi pa le🤗 while you can never write a part that leaves me feeling, ok this was enough - the days you churn out longer chapters are like treat days 😃My pleasure ji😊


I'm really liking the way Kesar had some very reasonable questions to pose to Gulaal - even if she countered him with hurt and hate and spite for now. In her defense, even though Kesar is not selfish - her line of argument of how he has sidelined her perspective and position does stand some logic. But unlike him, she's unrelenting of having made any mistake - so well, that's his edge. Logical Kesuda always rocks!

Talli just makes me rolls eyes, shake head - or best of all, look through like she's transparent and I can't tell her presence. 🥱 I also hate writing abt her so don't write details abt her feelings and stuff I guess cvs hav done it enuf🥱

I have a feeling reading Gulaal's diary will serve the kind of reality check to Kesar as Talli's counter on the show did - where in his own words (from the show) he will realize that pyaar dene ka naam hai... I trust him, somehow, to not acquiesce to Gulaal's condition of 'moving on' himself - but I suppose it will pave path, for now, of him taking a decision to officially set her free. Lets see wat happens😳Then really, she will have no way to take him down on any account or impose Talli on him on any obligatory grounds. I do do really do hope he goes and has one sound conversation with MB/PB about this. About what's happening in his head, why he's taking decisions like he is. The show had its compulsions to keep PM off scene - but here, I feel like it would such a difference - read: keep away the prospect of Sudhi's further evil planning Oh ya! I forgot abt her- Kalaakaris shall make an appearance again!😆

Okay, that's my prediction ramble - I have the post to write up, and look at me, reading and reviewing the chapter first! That's how stuck I am on this story... sigh! I loved ur write up- waiting for the 2nd part

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JZee

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

omg so finally gulaal is in his room so sweet and she has to be galool acussing the poor soul kesar was so hurt with the accusations Bechara ladka kisse pyaar kr baitha dats why MB had warned him in the previous chappi dat this one is gonna be difficult😆 and i loved the excercise scene and where she was caught staring him pakadi gayi bachi Gullu k mann mein chhiii😛and sweet smile scene was awesome and kesar here is still so calm and cute ..

and tell talli to shoo offkaash ki usse bhagana itna asaan hota

.now even i want to read the diary plz update soon😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
Unres kiya😳 upar dekho pg 80😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

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Oh I so missed everyone.😭.Prachu superb chappis yaar.👏OMG Gullu pagal hai kya...She is a big ostrich.😡.use kuch bhi nahi samajh ata..Oh BTW this is a common comment for my missed chappis.😛Aarey fulltoo okay hai yaar I am just glad that I can see ur red fonts again!

Aur pls Talli aur sudhi ko kahin bhaga do😡Haan kucch karenge unka😊The exercise scene was too good..👏Reminded of JA.😆Haila! Meri chori pakdi gayi😛.Oye prachu I just lubb the way you recreate the magic of the original scenes⭐️.Just superb is the word.👏Pls update soon prachu..🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

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Wow Prachu👏kya superb chappi ayaSacchi accha laga na???😕..Talli ko laga jhatka.😆Pata nahi kya soch rahi hogi😉.and Gullu all shy shy.😳..OMG the ostrich Gullu loves him so much.😳.par kya kare Great wall of talsgra todne k liye Kesu ko mehnat karni padegi.😆Correct he chose a difficult person😆.Lights chali gayi aur ahem ahem scene bhi aya.☺️aarey yaar kucch hua bhi nahi😛.Prachu I am sending a chocolate cakeAarey waah I love cake and dat to chocolate..Update jaldi karo na please😳dekh pehle main cake khaungi den I will think of the next chappie toh late ho jayega



Thank u so much for liking the chapter and of course the cake! Luv Ya, Piyu!
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Posted: 14 years ago
chapter 22-26:
Prachu..first of all sorry for d chotu comment..last week I was too busy..so couldn't reply to all d chappie..posted ..but was reading all of them..😊
chapter 22:
So,again gullu shuru hoagyi..with laagav n bhram..😆but loved h kesu..didn't taken his words back..he was confident to answer all her q's..n glad ki MB wahan aaye the..n then PB's realization was good..😃so, MB hit d target..y she had broken d relationship with dushty..loved d chappie.prachu,,😳

chapter 23:-
Loved FB..n h kesu was re-collecting dat moments..😃n then gullu's jhaap..ki bhram thodungi..😳..n what kind of species are talli n sudhi..still wanting to be kesar's wifey..😡upar se gullu ka promise bhi.😭..n then Gullu finally agayi.kesu ke home pe..😛Loved d chappie..prachu..😊

chapter 24:
Again..loved d confrontation between kes-gul..reminded me d birth of d word CHII from kesu..😆n then talli rani..sunliya ye convo..😡n then loved h kesu doesn't give a damn to talli..loved d chappie..😊

chappie..25:
so..kesu was out of his room..n then gullu..ne usko waapis nahin bulaya.n upar se saying ki..maine bahar jane ko nahin kahan.😲ye bhi kuch jyada hi..tensioniya..le rahi hai..talli ke liye..😡..n then talli rani chai layi.🤢n ye dono..bhook se the..😭n then h can gullu say ki he didn't thought about her..😲kiske liye usse shaadi kiya..kesu ne..ye ostrich gullu kab badlegi..😕n then kesu in gullu's room..😃loved chappie..😳

chappie 26:
Ahan..shuru hogayi na..push n pull..😆so..kesu read d diary n know what is gullu's pareshani..😛loved d lil moment in d room..😳😳but talli kyun ayi..😡n sahin kahan kesu ne..she should get hell out from there..😡but hehe talli thought gullu cheated her..😕n gullu is all shy-why..😳😳loved d chappie..prachu..😛waiting for d next..😍


Edited by chweetu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
updated my comments in pg-79
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh wow oh wow what a beautiful chapii i superlike this chapii starting was emotional so kesar finally found the diary and he knows gulaal is doing for the sake of his family now start the push and pull loved the conversation between kesar and gulaal too close to the show but sensible and much needed one...powercut kesar falling on gulaal is so blush blsuh mera chii aa gaya i so love chii ki bhavna😉 and yeh talli y she came i wanna kill her😡
lovely chappii parchu and waiting for the next

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