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@SlingShooter

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Geeshani

Ab kya karungi tu Aarti???...🤣I can't hold my laugh...

Bhye tum logon ne shair- o -shayaari nahin karni toh bahir ja ke khelo. 😡

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EXOL

@EXOL

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#72

IF ki galiyon mai batak rahi hu akeli
koi saath do baat karne waala nehi
isi gham main wapas karti hu shuru shayari
kaha hai tu meri geeshani ...

Edited by nneeiill - 14 years ago

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Geeshu

@Geeshu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: nneeiill
IF ki galiyon mai batak rahi hu akeli
koi saath do baat karne waala nehi
isi gham main wapas karti hu shuru shayari
kaha hai tu meri geeshani ...

Ohh Nithya ...🤗...Main yaaha hoon...

Oo ab tho mere haal bhi tere jaise bangai

koi dost nahi online mere saath baat karne mein

ab tho daar lagtha hai mujhe iss bad shair karne mein

kabhi tho kabhi mei tho chappal shop open karenge...🤔

aarti ji aarti ji good morning arti ji

piu ji chaitu ji ab tumari baari hai

yasho oo yasho dekho kya mere haal hai

sab patha chali mere weakness ke baare mein...😭

ha ha yaar main maangai mei tho bad shayar hai...🤡

mera hindi bhi karab aur shair bhi likh nahi sakk thi

I don't wanna be a shayar but wanna see arti's new chapppi

ab mei chali gai bahir new game kehel ne keliye...😊

Edited by Geeshani - 14 years ago

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Keithuu

@Keithuu

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Oh my geeshu..tu subah subah shuru...
tu hui emotional..main kya karu.
kitna dhoonda maine tujhe kal raat..
ab kehti hai koi nahi karne baat.
bakwaas pe bakwaas main likh rahi hoon...
mujhe aur koi kaam nahi,so yeh kar rahi hoon.

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Yash141

@Yash141

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Kya sab ghatiya shair likhna band kiya...
Main feeling lonely to thread me chala aaya..
Without u all main hu ek seeta bina Rama.. 😳
Last line ko kya hogi Saat nibhana Saasu ma.. Kya?? 😕

Geeshu meri Geeshu teri shair abhi bi ghatiya..
Piu tu to Keats ki tarha good n not so ghatiya..
Nitya teriko kya hogaya re likdo shaayar fatafat..
Chaitu Kesu pad raha hai House instead of Biobook..

Hi Kiethu..meri nanni si pyaari si piglet..
Derahi hai shairi like a mirchi ki chat pat..

Edited by Yash141 - 14 years ago