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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: alanta

Dear friends,
I started this thread almost 4 months before just to write some random scenes based on the show GULAAL,and was/is for the first time I wrote some thing on a tv show and I am some what sure it never happen again but as soon as the show ended fortunately or unfortunately it took the shape of a series...and this point of time I extend my love and sincere gratitude towards all those who encouraged and inspired me all through out and whom insisted me to start the second series..on which I tried to tie the loose ends left by the show and by now you have to decide whether it became successful..and for a last time I request u all to read the last update of my DS series..I swear it is for the last time and will never repeat so please please please..
Thank you once again
with love.
Alanta


Thank u so much for entertaining us with ur beautifully written scenes. hav been followin the thread since Gulaal was on air. I loved how u tied up all the ends maintaining the essence of the show- it just looked like a continuation. I hope u share ur creativeness with us! You are a wonderfully talented writer, Atlanta! I loved each and every scene! But bechara Dushy margaya😭...i seriously loved the ending lines! Once again thanx, Atlanta!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: JZephyr

alanta - sorry for all my absence here, but this is turning out to be a mysterious unfolding of an otherwise sweet love story! Duggu certainly deserved a better closure than time allowed for the show - so its interesting to see where you're taking it now. I hope sure as hell Kesar is going to be alright - but I suppose that's a given... I can imagine him having some bad encounter though, and giving life to Gulaal's inner scare - only for all to be well eventually. All chapters need a formal firm closing, especially the bad ones.

Jzee, I could see your presence here in the form of 'like' even if you didnt comment..😳 when I thought of starting a second series on this, Durgesh was there in the cards..yeah totally agree with you @ bold
Thanks a lot dear...the final chapter updated...so visit just for a last time..again I wont disturb you in the name of this DS😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: minizz

Atlanta,loved it .It was nice and romantic with some cute moments between Kesar and Gulaal😳I loved the scene with Gulaal and the sindoor.very sweet.Kesar teasing Gulaal-very nice.I loved the way you wrote their romance-very classy.But what is this abshagun happening?I hope nothing happens to Kesar.Durgesh,Gulaal will not leave you if you do any harm to Kesar.so beware😡wonderful read Atlanta👏.Please update soon😃.
thanks for the heads up😊

Thank u so much mini...I am not so heartless dear to cause Kesar any harm..hope you read the update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: prachurya

Atlanta, I just love how u write the GK scenes- they r so romantic and emotional! So, Durgesh has planned something bad for Kesar now, I hope nothing happens to him! Waiting for ur next update.

Thank u so much dear prachu..hope you read the update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MR21

Alanta...such a lovely update...

Durgesh is planning something against kesar...ohh god...please save hamara kesar...
loved loved the scenes between kesar n gulaal at night and also the morning scene with sindoor...love this teasing kesar...its so claasy...
apshagun hogaya n gulaal didnot realised it...ab kya hoga...
Me waiting desperately for next part..please update soon yaar...

Thank you so much dear remya
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Alanta.🤗.very beautiful.😳.and very romantic.😳.OMG Gulaal with sindoor and kesu in dream mode.😍.shooo cute...ab duggu kuch karing kya.😭.Alanta .👏..I really like your style and it is so subtle yet romantic.😳.it was beautiful.👏.dear...👏pls update soon😳

THank u so much for ur compliments and for liking the update dear🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Keithuu

res...me late...😭

res???abhi thak nahin khula???next update also has come😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NivRen_1

Thanks for the update

I loved the kesgul scenes they are so cute
I can't wait for your update especially with Durgesh and the broken bangle hope kes gul stay safe and together

Thank u so much Chanda..updated
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Posted: 13 years ago
ek aur res😲 kab kholne waala hein ab??this is for the last time kirthi😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MR21

res res


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Alanta...very well written yaar...so dushy is dead😭.there was no other way dear ..but the last words were bang on👏thank u so much...loved keasr n gulaal conversation n the way he asks her to accompany him when she reminds hi of his promise...ohh they are always like this.exactly..
Would love if you start a new one...i always enjoyed reading your updates...

Thank u dear...thank u so much..your comments have always inspired me..

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