Akshan ff:sirf mera part 1 updated

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It’s a super natural story Where( guddan died how I will tell later)

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Akshat was his room sleeping his sleep get broked with a tudddd.....sound aj woke up he saw his guddan photo on floor he shocked he pick it with hand he felt hurt it’s hurt last memories and it also hlget broken he try to take it when a glass piece make his hand bleed

Aj:ouch ab yeh bhi he try to stop blood he saw blood in guddu’s frame near eyes he wip and took that frame with and he put it on cabord

Aj:kal mei ise teek karugi

And he lay on his bed thinking about his guddan a war of the fact that till also blood coming out from that frame guddu was cring for her jindal saab she sys app sirf hamara hu Sirf mera...........


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Continue soon luved it 😍😘

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Posted: 5 years ago
#3

Different concept..pls update soon..

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Interesting concept

Continue soon

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Part 1

At morning

Aj woke up and goes downstairs for breakfast everyone greeted him Lakshmi Durga serving breakfast dadi also hear dadi sys lalla kal pandit ji ko bulana aj felt pain thinking about his guddan yesterday is the day guddu left him for ever

Aj:ha maa

He left with kishore vardan for office

Lakshmi:2 saab hogaya sasuma ko hame chidkar jakar fir bhi unki yadein nahi jarahi haina durga di

Durga:teek kaha tum Lakshmi ajj bhi sasuma ki perfume ki smell aj ki room de atha hai

Lakshmi:kyun hame chod kar cahli gayi vo

Antra enters guddan ki jatha huyi ithni saab hogaya tumloga ka guddan puran nahi gayi mar chuki hai vo vapas nahi augi ab tumara saas is gar ka Mallon mei hu

Durga:na tum aj ki pathni hu na hamara saas guddan sasu ma ko mar kar tumne unki saru property tumara naam kiya vo din for nahi hai jab aj ko tumare kilaf saboot mile thab tum jail par hogi

Antra kabhi nahi milugi or agar mila tho tum log muje kuch nahi karugi guddan tho Gaya uski behen ki zindagi meri hath mei hai aj kabhi vo barbad nahi karna chahugi she left

Next day

It’s guddan barsy dadi call bushan kaushalya Revathi also came with her husband akash

Bushan:kaise hu beta

Aj:zinda hu apki beti ke bina kaise jeessakthi hu

Pundit doing pooja when a storm came it’s distroying all pooja properties guddu ki photo grime vali hai aj pakadtha hai

Dai:yeh kya horahi hai pundit ji....

Pundit ji:ap shakun kuch tho tufaan ane vala hai is parivar par before dadi ask anything main door get open everyone look at there what they saw make shocked aj:guddaaannnn

She came running and hug him he also hug he not thinking about anything his guddan is back he just want that

Antra:how’s this possible noo aisa nahi hoga

Dadi:yeh sach nahi hosaktha yeh guddan nahi

Cut by aj yeh meri guddan hai maa aplogo ko uski swagad karna chahiye or app shak kar rahi hu

Everyone didn’t believe because they all saw guddan’s body they don her last results how’s this possible but aj didn’t want to think about logic he is happy he get his guddan back aj guddan ko apni kamre mei lekar jatha hai

Edited by Kanishnishant - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Interesting update..waiting for next part..

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice update

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 2

Aj hug guddan

Aj:guddan tum teek huna

Guddu:jindal saab hum bilcul teek hai

Aj:guddan ab tum muje chidkar nahi jaugi na

Guddu:kabhi nahi jindal saab

At downstairs

Dadi:kya vo meri guddan hu hai

Durga:dadi yeh sab

Pandit:apshakun

Dadi:pandit ji kya hua

Pandit:is par najar rakna or muje bulana mei chalthi hu

Kisi kuch samaj mei nahi atha

Aj or guddan bahar atha hai

Guddu:dadi aplog muje dekkar kush nahi hu

Dadi:kush hu beta she hug bushan

Guddu:papa aplog hairan kyun hu hum apki guddan hai

Guddu:cahlo saath mei kana jatha hai they eat dinner together

Guddu and aj in room

Aj hug her

Guddan :jindal saab ap muje miss kiya

Aj :bahuth aj kiss her they consummate their relationship

Guddu mv:jindal saab hame bahuth dard horahi hai ab par apkeliye sari dard ko hum bulathi hai hum apko lekar jaugi jindal saab ap sirf hamara hu

Aj sleep hugging her

Next morning guddan came downstairs

Duffy:durga bahu kana banaya

Durga:ji sasuma

Antra came she don’t know how this happened

Guddan sys in her ear:muje mar kar kush thi haina???tumari zindagi ka akiri pal bacha hai ab

Antra get shocked

Edited by Kanishnishant - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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it was very good dear. i thlnk ye guddu ki aatma hai na. plz continue sooon.

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