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Posted: 6 years ago
[QUOTE=Mishti24]

very much😊

[/QUOTE ] promise to make u more happy in the furtger updates...will cont soon❤️

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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Yup vo v bahut❤️

will always make u happy and blush by further updates...stay tuned.....will cont super soon❤️
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Originally posted by: Viditian1

will always make u happy and blush by further updates...stay tuned.....will cont super soon❤️

Will be waiting

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Posted: 6 years ago

Hey everyone....lets move to the chapter..

CHAPTER 14

(JINDAL BHAVAN)

(NIGHT)

BUM CHIK CHIK BUM,

CHIK CHIK BUM..(×2)

EK DUSRE SE KRTE HAIN PYAAR HUM,

EK DUSRE K LIYE BEKARAAR HUM.(×2)

"Dadi..aapke haathon mei na sach mei jaadu h..itni achi champi na aajtak hmari kisi ne nhi ki.." Said guddan relax her head by the massage dadi was giving her..

"Sasu maa..jadu to akpe haatho mei bi km nhi h..meri mahino ki thakan nikal gai.." Lakshmi was impressed by guddans talent of champi.

"Kitna acha lgta h ..saas bahu saath nei ek saath hasi khushi se time bita rhi h..kaash ye baat shanti didi ko bi samjah aa jati..to aaj mera parivar ek saath hota" Oh god!! Dadi again got emotional..but y fear when guddan is here..

"Dadi..hmne kitni baar kaha h ki aapke iss hasseen chehre pr hme dukh k aassoo ache nhi lgte.." Said guddan.

"Dekhna hm apni iss dosti se hr jung jeet lenge" Said lakshmi supporting guddan and motivating dadi..

Oh! How cutie they were...the strong bond between saas-bahu relation was actually unbreakable..

The strong guddan was busy motivating dadi..when something else caught her attention.

"Lakshmi ji ..hme bi btayiye na kya khichri pakk rhi h aapke fone mei.." Said guddan mischieviously.

"Av av ..kuch ni sasu maa..av vo vardaan ji ka mssg tha" Said lakshmi blushing..on reading the romantic shayri sent by her husband.

"Haan to pati h aapke...HAKK banta h ROMANTIC hone ka" Said guddan in order to tease lakshmi..buttt..

"Haan...sasu maa...PATI H ......HAKK TO BANTA HAI"guddan cursed herslef why she opted to tease lakshmi..well what lakshmi said wasnt at all helping her to hide her blush..as she couldnt help but to remember the end no.of encounters with her jindal saab..well this wasnt a gud idea. She had to run fast else she couldnt hide her blush fir long.

"Dadi hum haatb dhokar aatei h" Guddan just ran away. Leaving a giggling saas-bahu behind.seeing her dadi just prayed.

"Hey kanha mere lalla ur guddan ki is dosti ko jldi hi pyaar mei badal de" How naive she was..well if she would had any idea about the 'DOSTI'of akshan ... She wouldnt have prayed this but.."hey kanha..meri guddan aur lalla k bache guddan pr hi ho na ki lalla pr ..ubalti chai jaise dimaag ke". She would even have started knitting sweaters for the pota or poti .

"Dadi..dadi mere pass ek idea h...hmko un dono ko date pr bhejna chahiye"said lakshmi...

" Haan..ye sahi kaha..inko thoda pta to lgega ki ye ek dusre se kitna pyaar krte h"said dadi with a hope.

With this..they started thier plan by messaging guddan and akshat ..and made them affirmed for thier plan.

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(AKSHAN ROOM)

"Jindal saab se date k baarei mei puche kyaa..??" Thought she. Gosh!! From when she started getting shy from her jindal saab for a date..when they had☺️done sooo many things together. She wondered.

On the other hand..

"Guddan se baat kru..date k baare mei..nhi usne khud hi to kia h mssg.." Well akshat was also in tge same condition.o !!comon u both are very much comfortable with each other.. more than friends. His mind said.

(THEY BOTH GET READY AND REACH POOLSIDE)

(DATE)

Beautiful..her heart said..mesmerised by the decorations she entered their and sat on the chair.but with each step her condition was bad. Firstly it was her first date ...moreover with jibdal saab.well it seemed they actually didnt even needed a date. They are already very comfortable with each other.

"Itne boring insaan aur itna acha setup..lg hi nhi rha jaise jindal saab ne kia h" But the problem was that she herself was not concordant with her words. He was not boring from past few days.

She was brought back to reality by her husband who had arrived just to find her lost in her thoughts.

(THEY BOTH SEATED)

(GIFT EXCHANGE)

"Date pr book kon lata h" He was seriuosly amused by the gift.god she was so naive.he was a lucky man who had so cute naive woman.

"Selfie stick...date pr selfie stick" She was not at all happy woth the gift. She thought her mr. Perfect knew her choice but..

And with this another tom and jerry game started.

Bla bla bla bla...she wasnt stopping at all..he need to find a solution to stop her..and he knew the best was ti shut he up.

She stopped when she felt his rough one her her soft one..she could feel the dominance. The kiss was of hunger.he was really very hungry that he almost ate all the lipstick on her lips. But when the need of oxygen overcame their desire they parted.

But as soon as he left her lips..he attacked her neck.making her moan.he was doing all the craziest things on her bidy making her groan in pleasure..

(AFTER THE DATE)

He took her to room and kissed her gently and both slept peacefully remembering their purest relevations about each other during dance. How they both confessed about each others good qualitues..how out of happiness she hugged him ..eventually leading to another makeout session.. But more than that they were satisfied by each others purest confessions which were probably greater than any love confession.

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Hope it did bot bored u all...if soo..then sry..but plz do share ur views...luv...viditian aka shaina..

NEXT: GUDDAN LEAVING JINDAL BHAVAN ..COMING BCK AS A STICT SAAS..AND AHEM☺️

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NOTE:: THE PREGNANCY PART IS COMING SOON🥳





Edited by Viditian1 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
kr dia update..plz check and share ur precious views❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago

Itna chota😒

Waise akshan ki dosti ko koi follow na kre to hi accha hai nhi to 🤣

Ek part aur milega qa aaaj hi plz😃

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Itna chota😒

Waise akshan ki dosti ko koi follow na kre to hi accha hai nhi to 🤣

Very true🤣

Ek part aur milega qa aaaj hi plz😃

Hm but raat tk...👍🏼

hmm..muje bi thoda chota lga..but i wanted to show only date in one chapter..
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Viditian1

hmm..muje bi thoda chota lga..but i wanted to show only date in one chapter..

Will be eagerly waiting for the next one plz try to update it soon 😛

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Posted: 6 years ago

It was nice

Continue asap😊

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Posted: 6 years ago

Superb update

Love it

Continue soon

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