Tere Kareeb - AkshAn OS

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Tere Kareeb

Hi all. I am back with an Akshan OS after a very long time. I hope you all will like the OS. This OS is dedicated to Kavya1994.

This OS will be continued where Guddan was discharged from hospital. There won't be any Antra drama here.

When Guddan was hospitalized, Akshat feared to lose Guddan and with that he realize his love for Guddan. With Akshat's love Guddan recovers fully and is fit and fine. Akshat is yet to confess his love as he knows Guddan still does not know the meaning of love and she will take some time, and he is ready to give that time to her.

On other hand, Angad and Revati's marriage gets fixed. Guddan manages to convince Akshat for Angad and Revati's marriage and Akshat finally gives his nod. Admist the preparations of Angad and Revati's marriage, Guddan realises what she has for Jindal Saab is not just friendship and attraction but also love. But she also knows very well, Akshat loves Antra dearly even today, so that's why Guddan hides her feelings for Akshat in her heart.

As days pass by, finally the day of Angad and Revati's marriage arrives.

Akshat is talking on the phone and as he keeps the phone he gets mesmerized looking at Guddan who just got ready.

Guddan was dressed in a gorgeous beautiful red saree.

(Akshan's costumes will be same as their recent engagement costumes)

Guddan was always beautiful but today she just looked way too beautiful and the smile on her face made her look more than perfect. His stance was broken by her voice.

Guddan: Kahiye Na Jindal Saab, how do I look?

Akshat: Bohot Sundar Lag Rahe Ho.

Akshat took a file from his cupboard and went away to prevent making things more complicated.

Guddan was confused as Jindal Saab was behaving quite weirdly these days. Especially the last few days she felt he was kind of ignoring her but whenever they talked he didn't seem upset with her and was normal with her. She was confused. Maybe because he was busy with the marriage preparations like her.

Just then Laxmi comes in which breaks Guddan's chain of thoughts.

Laxmi: Saasu Maa...

Guddan looks.

Laxmi: Areh Vah Saasu Maa Aap Bohot Khoobsurat Lag Rahe Ho.

Guddan: Aap Bhi Bohot Sundar Lag Rahe Ho, Laxmi Jii. Let's go downstairs together. There is so much work.

Guddan and Laxmi goes downstairs. They help out with the preparations and then Guddan goes to the kitchen to check the sweets.

There Durga taunts Guddan.

Durga: Tum Khud AJ ke saath Shaadi Karne Ke Baath, Ab Tumhari Choti Behen Ko Bhi AJ ke bhai ke saath Shaadi Karwa Rahe Ho. Maana Padega Tumhe Guddan.

Guddan: Dekhiye Durga Jii, Mujhe Koyi Fark Nahi Parta Aap Kya Sochte Ho, Chutki aur Angad Jii Ek Dusre se Pyaar Karte Hai Isliye Yeh Shaadi Ho Raha Hai.

Saru: Vah Maana Padega Aap Ko Saasu Maa Aap Bohot Tez Nikle. AJ ko Apne Phasa Toh Liya Ab Aapki Choti Behen Bhi Angad Jii Ko Phasa Diya. Varna Voh Ladki Mere Bhai Ke Peeche...

Guddan: (shouting on Saru) Saru Bahu! Ek Shabdh Bhi Nahi. Aap Hote Kaun Ho Mere Chutki Ke Baare Mai Aise Kehne Wale. Aur Baath Agar Parv Ke Hai, Apne Dekha Na Aap Ka Bhai Kis Haqt Tak Gir Gaya!

Durga: Rehne Do Saru! Agar Tum Iss Bare Mai Na Kaho Acha Hoga, Vaise Bhi no one values us in this house. Sab Guddan Ke Kehne Par Chalta Hai.

Guddan: Dekhiye Durga Jii...

Durga: Mujhe Tumse Koyi Baath Nahi Karne Hai Guddan.

Durga leaves from there. Guddan feels bad as Durga always misunderstands her.

She clearly knows Durga dislikes her very strongly, but why?

Dadi comes there to look for Guddan and takes her with her.

Later,

All the pre marriage rituals take place. Even if Guddan helped out with the preparations, she was presenting the bride side. The wedding took place in a 5 star hotel.

Kaushaliya welcomes Angad inside and Guddan is standing beside Kaushaliya. Dadi and Akshat are standing beside Angad.

Akshat looks at Guddan, and Guddan looks at Akshat. He noticed Guddan was happy, but not so happy as she was supposed to be, as her smile wasn't genuine.

Later, when Akshat asked Guddan if she was alright, Guddan lied to him that she was tired and maybe that's why. Akshat wasn't fully assured, but if she doesn't want to tell then let it be. He won't force her. But it was bothering him a lot.

Soon, Revati and Angad's marriage took place. Guddan and Akshat recalled their marriage seeing this.

After the marriage,

As Guddan is walking just then someone holds her hand and takes her away. Its Kaushaliya.

Guddan: Maa...

Kaushaliya: Look Guddan, now Chutki is in the same house as you are.

Guddan: Yes I know Maa. And Chutki will be fine there. Angad Jii will keep her really happy. And Dadi will treat her as her own. And Jindal Saab is there if there will be any problem. You no need to worry.

Kaushaliya: I am not worried about all these, and no need to show fake concern for Chutki. And you better don't dare to show fake concern for her.

Guddan: Maa what are you saying...

Kaushaliya: You no need to teach me. Already as her elder sister, my Chukti suffered a lot because of your mistakes. Don't you dare torture her just because you are also her Jethani now.

Guddan: Maa why are you saying like this? Why will I do like this with Chutki?

Kaushaliya: Look Guddan you dont have to say anything cause I can see. I know what power you have in Jindal house. My Chutki is no less. And the power you are proud of, of being Akshat Jindal's house, don't forget your marriage happened with him because of me.

Tears flow from Guddan's eyes.

Bhushan: Guddan Beta...

Guddan wipes her tears.

Bhushan: I was looking for you.

Later, Revati's bidaai takes place and later in Jindal Mansion.Angad and Revati are welcomed inside the house. Dadi and Guddan welcomes them inside the house.

After all the rituals are done, everyone goes to their respective rooms to sleep. Akshat is in his library as he has some important work to do.

After Akshat is done with his work, he comes back to his room, he sees Guddan missing. And she isn't in the washroom either.

Akshat: Yeh Guddan Kahan Chali Gayi.

Just then Akshat gets a call and he goes downstairs, while talking on the pnone. As he walks near the poolside, he finds Guddan sitting there still dressed in the saree.

Akshat looks at the watch and its 2.30am. He wonders what Guddan is doing here at this time.

Akshat: Okay I will talk to you tomorrow.

Akshat keeps the phone and he comes and sits besides her. He finds Guddan looking at the sky with tears streaming on her eyes.

He couldn't see tears on her eyes so he wiped them. Guddan looked at Akshat.

Guddan: Jindal Saab Kya Mai Itni Buri Hoon.

Akshat: Kya Hua Guddan, Kya Tumhe Kisine Kuch Kahan Kya?

Guddan: Ab Mere Dost Se Ye Baath Chupane Se Kya Fyaada.

Guddan tells Akshat how Durga and Saru taunted her and what made her feel more bad was what her mom told her.

Guddan: Pata Nahi Jindal Saab Mummy Humse Itni Nafrat Kyun Karte Hai. I always wanted Chutki's good. I never wanted her bad then why Mummy thinks that...

Akshat: Dekho Guddan, just because she is your mom I am tolerating her. But if she continues doing so, I may lose my temper. I will talk to her. How can she talk like this to you?

Guddan: Nahi Nahi Jindal Saab please Aap Kuch Maat Kijiye. And morever Chutki and Angad Jii got married recently. It won't be nice.

Akshat: You always like to think about others but not yourself.

Guddan: Nahi Aise Baath Nahi Hai Jindal Saab. The thing is I respect Mummy a lot because after my Maa's death she was the one who took full care of me. She was extra protective and worried about me. This is why I never felt that bad about her words. But what really hurt me the most was she got me married for her greed. She used me.

Akshat: Guddan...

Guddan: On other hand, you were always there for me. You always stood for my rights. But still I chose to believe Mummy over you, how could I do that? You told me but I chose not to believe you, not because I didn't trust you, but because I trusted her more.

Guddan: As for our marriage, in a way it's a blessing in disguise, if not I won't have got such a husband like you. I never imagined I will get someone like you as my husband. You are even more than perfect than my Mr Perfect. Aap Hi Mere Mr Perfect Ho.

Akshat stares at Guddan.

Guddan: Mere Kehne Ka Matlaab...

Akshat places his finger on her lips.

Akshat: Go and sleep now. It's really late.

Guddan: I want to stay here for a longer time. The thing is when I feel really bad and hurt, then I look at the moon and stars on the sky. I find peace with that. But...

Guddan cries hugging Akshat.

Guddan: I feel really bad!!! Sometimes I feel I am valueless.

Akshat feels bad and wipes her tears. He kisses on her forehead. Guddan is surprised. Akshat feels awkward so he goes away. As Guddan gets up and walks, she trips on a rock due to which she slips, Akshat sees this and rushes to hold her but they both fall inside the pool together.

Guddan and Akshat gets completely drenched. Guddan and Akshat stare and look at each other.

As Guddan is about to get up from the pool, Akshat helds her and pulls her close.

He sides Guddan's hair.

Guddan: Kya Hua Jindal Saab?

Akshat: Guddan now I can't resist anymore.

Guddan: What do you mean?

Akshat: Just now you said that you don't have any value? Do you know what you mean to me?!(cupping her face)

Guddan looks at Akshat.

Akshat: After Antra left I forgot how to live. You came in my life and taught me how to live again. I find peace when I see you smiling. I find pain when I find you crying. I have tried denying this many times but its true. The truth is you are not just my friend Guddan, but much more than that. I had fallen in love with you Guddan. I love you, Guddan!

Guddan gets emotional and hugs Akshat tightly.

Guddan: Apne Pehle Kyun Nahi Kahan Jindal Saab.

Akshat: Dar Tha, Dar Tha Kahin Pyaar Ke Chakar Main Tumhare Dosti Bhi Kho Na Doon. I want to live with you my entire life, Guddan. I love you very much. You are the most valuable thing I have with me.

Guddan: Galati Sirf Aap Ka Nahi Meri Bhi Hai. Mai Bhi Aapse Pyaar Karne Laga, Mai Bhi Aap Ko Khona Nahi Chahta. Mai Aapse Bohot Pyaar Karti Hoon Jindal Saab. I love you Ji...I love you...Akshat....

A smile appears on Akshat's face hearing Akshat. Akshat and Guddan comes close to each other and is about to kiss each other, Guddan loses balance and they both laugh.

Akshat lifts Guddan in his arms and takes him to their room, smiling.

Akshat locks the room. Akshat opens his wet suit and Guddan hugs him from behind.

They both hug each other, and as they break the hug Akshat comes close to Guddan and pecks on her lips. They both share a liplock.

Akshat lifts Guddan in his arms again and puts her on the bed. As he opens all her jeweleries, Guddan unbuttons Akshat's shirt. They both get intimate. As Guddan lies on the bed, Akshat holds Guddan's hand and they both consummate their marriage.

The end.

I hope you all liked it. To be honest, I am quite disappointed with Antra track, so I wasn't much interested in the show these days though the episodes are amazing and moroever as an ardent cricket fan I am too busy watching world cup and try my best not to miss a match. But also as an Akshan fan, I can't miss the amazing episodes that were shown for the past 2-3 weeks. I watch the episodes whenever I get some free time.

And Shona1991, I have written another OS for you, since you also requested one, I will post that on Sunday as I have some corrections to make for that OS.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Accha hai yaar! Straight and simple. 😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice straight and simple

I m liking it and also i like nothing impossible also.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing

Bs dayan aur chorni ko sabak mil jata to aur v accha hota koi nhi.

Do write more

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Are wah....

It was sweet and straight os...

Written beautifully....

Love guddan and akshat confession in pool...

Pata nhi q but mujhe in dono k pool k as pas k scane bahot acche lagte he...

Hope yeh bakwas track me we get lot of pool scane...but I dout..q k Barish b chalu ho gayi he so pool tent to Gaya guddan ka...

Kya CVS Barish k mahol me aunty ko la k sare romance ka maza kharab or Diya...

But I want in dono ka rain confrontation leading to some steamy romance....

Back to os yeh dayan chorni aur lomdi kabhi nhi sudhrenge...

But love how both read each other's Mann ki baat...

And thanks for granting my wish...will be egarly waiting for os...yeh Sunday lab ayega.....

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank U for fulfilling my request🤗

Amazing one.Straight & smooth.

I always wished this pool scene after reception where Akshan do heart-to-heart talk after revelation of Kaushalya, but never get it.

So double thank you for that🤗

Even I am disappointed with this track. For me just to show Akshan love story or Guddan great, tarnishing Akshat's first love or Antara's image in any way is not at all needed.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akshata2010

Accha hai yaar! Straight and simple. 😊

Thank u 😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank u😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetcherry95

Nice straight and simple

I m liking it and also i like nothing impossible also.

Thank u 😊

Glad u liked my FF too 😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Amazing

Bs dayan aur chorni ko sabak mil jata to aur v accha hota koi nhi.

Do write more

Thank u 😃

Yeh dayaan aur chorni sudarne walo mai se nahi hai. Un dono se naa ho payega

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