Teri Yaad Saath Hai (SS) Part 13 on pg15 below

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Sooooo her first wish is complete.....😉😉😉

I want those long drive scenes in the show.....❤️😳❤️😳

Very well written......👏👏👏

You are a fabulous writer....👍🏼😳👏every emotion is penned perfectly...👏👏👏

Update soon.....😛😛

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: Kaya_luvakshan
Riddy really sorry for not commenting....I just loved all Ur updates ...
I love how Akshat fulfilled her wish
Do continue sooooooooooon...
N pls tell me ki itne achche gaane Kaha se dhoondh k lati ho

Hey Kaya!

No Sorry! Only appreciation..😊

And songs are of my favourite personal collection i.e. my playlist

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Posted: 6 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Princessyashi
Sooooo her first wish is complete.....😉😉😉
I want those long drive scenes in the show.....❤️😳❤️😳
Very well written......👏👏👏
You are a fabulous writer....👍🏼😳👏every emotion is penned perfectly...👏👏👏
Update soon.....😛😛

Hey Yashi!

@bold- true😊

@underlined- Thank you so much ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Hey everyone! I'm back with eleventh part of my SS. Hope you all like it.

After two days:-

Akshan's Room:

Guddan was roaming here and there in room while Akshat came out of washroom after getting freshen up.

She was murmuring something which was not audible for him.

A- (while combing his hair) Kya hua Guddan, kya badbada rahi ho?

She was in her own world and didn't listened his words. She was continuesly roaming, playing with her fingers and murmuring.

A- Kuch bologi?

She was still continuing her activity ignoring his words.

Akshat turned around and holded her through her shoulder.

A- Kabse mein tumhe puch rha hu ki kya hua par tum sun hi nhi rhi ho. Baat kya h , batao mujhe!

G- Areee Bapree, Sry!(fast) Woh na Jindal Sahab humme na bohot zyada tension ho rhi h. Aaj ka checkup thik to hoga na. Doctor sab kuch thik kar denge na. Pata nhi kuch samajh nhi aa rha hume. Sab accha ho jayega na. Hume bohot darr lag raha hai. (Holing his hand hurrily ) Jindal Sahab humse yeh checkup ke liye jana nhi ho payega.....

A- (keeping his finger on her lips) Ssshhhhhhh........ kitni baar kaha h tumhe kam bola karo. Kitna zyada bolti ho tum, bas ab chup chap baitho yaha

(It's female version by Shreya Ghoshal)

(Movie- Rab ne bana di jodi)

Na Kuch Poocha

Na Kuch Manga

Tune Dil Se Diya Jo Diya

G- parr...

A- parr...varr... kuch nhi baitho yaha.

He made her sit comfortably on bed and sit on floor on knees near her holding her hands.

Na Kuch Bola

Na Kuch Tola

Muskura Ke Diya Jo Diya

A- Ab tum kuch nhi bologi, sirf meri baat sunogi. Thike!

She nodded her head in agreement.

Tu Hi Dhoop

Tu Hi Chau

Tu Hi Apna Paraya

Aur Kuch Na Janu

Bas Itna Hi Janu

A- Guddan mein jaanta hu ki tumhe aaj ki checkup ke liye bohot tension ho rhi h par tum pehle apne aap ko shant rakhne ki koshish karo. Sab kuch accha hoga, mein hu tumhare saath. Aur phir kabhi mat kehna ki mujhse na ho payega kyunki meri wife Guddan Akshat Jindal se sab kuch acche se ho pata h. Samjhi! ( with a smile)

Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai

Yaara Mein Kya Karun

Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai

Yaara Mein Kya Karun

She hugged him tight, he also reciprocated it.

G- Thank you Jindal Sahab! Aap nhi hote toh hum toh tension ke maare abhi marr....

Sajde Sar Jhukta Hai

Yaara Mein Kya Karun

Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai

Yaara Mein Kya Karun

Akshat covered her mouth by his hand.

A- Aaj boldiya, phir kabhi mat bolna..

Rab Ne Bana Di Jodii...

Hayee...

She simply nodded her head with a smile.

He kissed her forehead and asked her to get down to dining room for breakfast.

Whole of the family had breakfast together. Everyone wished Akshan " ALL THE BEST " as this situation was not less than an exam for both of them. Dadi fed her sweet and both of them took her and God's blessings.

They both took a leave for Hospital.

All the family members gathered over temple and prayed for her.

At Hospital:

Akshan were sitting in cabin when Doctor Naina entered. Both Naina and Akshat were shocked to see each other.

( Hey everyone this character of Naina would be played by Daljiet Kaur who is gonna enter our show to form a love triangle)

N- Akshat...(A lone tear escaped her eyes)

A- Naina tum?

He just hugged her. Guddan was confusedly looking at them. Naina quickly wiped her tears and hugged him back. He pulled her out of hug and asked

A- (with sad tone) Kaha chli gyi thi tum? Tumhe pata bhi h ki tumhe kitna dhundata meine aur Antra ne. Yaha tak ki tumhare ghar pohoche toh pata chla ki tum aur Uncle ghar chhodkar chle gye ho. Tumhe zara bhi yaad nhi aayi humari?

N- Nhi Akshat aisa kuch nhi h. Papa ko uss ghar mein maa ki bohot yaad aati thi isliye hum humare doosra ghar jo ki Mumbai mein h waha shift ho gye.

A- Par tum bina bataye kyu chali gyi thi?

N-(murmuring slowly) Agar batati toh tum hamesha ke liye chhodkar chale jate.

She spoke so slowly that it was not audible for Akshan.

A- Bolo, chup kyu ho ?

N- Akshat mein bas papa ke saath rehna chahti thi isliye mein chali gyi thi. Vaise tum yaha? Antra kaha h?

A tear felled down from his eyes.

A- Naina voh Antra 10 saal pehle hi mujhe aur iss duniya ko chhodkar hamesha hamesha ke liye chli gyi.

N- (tears streaming down from her eyes) Kaise? Kab? Kya hua tha Akshat? Antra... nhi..

A- Antra ki death car accident se hui thi.

Guddan came and holded his hand. She wiped his tears.

N- Mujhe maaf kar dena Akshat, mujhe sach mein pata nhi tha ki Antra..

A- It's Ok Naina!

N- Par tum yaha abhi. Sab thik he naa.

A- Tum hi meri aakhri umeed ho Naina.

Saying this he asked Guddan to come in front. Both Naina and Guddan were confusedly looking at eachother.

A- Naina yeh meri wife Mrs. Guddan Akshat Jindal h aur Guddan yeh Naina h. Antra aur Naina ek saath ek college mein padhte the. Dono soul sisters jaisi thi par phir Naina ke maa ki death ke baad hum sab alag ho gye.

Naina was shocked that Akshat who was madly in love with Antra married other girl after her death.

G- Namaste, Nainaji!

N- Namaste.

A- Naina jis patient ki treatment ke liye tum yaha aayi ho voh meri wife Guddan h!

Naina's feet were trembling, but she composed herself,

N- Akshat tum fikr mat karo! Sab thik ho jayega.

A- Thank you Naina.

N- Guddan Dr. Sharma tumhara wait kar rhi h MRI ke liye. Please go and change yourself.

A nurse came and showed her way to change room. Akshat waited for her outside.

As she came out Akshat entangled his fingers with her and both of them went to MRI Room.

Guddan was very nervous but Akshat supported her. He lifted her and carefully placed her on MRI machine strecher. He removed her heels and made her lay down on it. He kissed her forehead and said,

A- Sab kuch thik ho jayega.

Guddan nodded her head and closed her eyes.

Soon her MRI started. Akshat was waiting outside for her. As MRI was done by Dr. Sharma, Naina came to Akshat. She helded his hand and sit besides him.

N- Akshat ab tum mujhe batao ki kya hua itne saalon mein ki tumne dusri shaadi kar li?

To be continued.

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What do you think about Naina-

Cupid or Villain.