AJ .....The In Love Poet

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello fellas...hope you all are Hale & Hearty ...
In the Show our Cute Budda has fallen hard for a certain Gudiya but being the Mahaan Khadoos never realises it...

But in my Drabble he has realised it & Secretly cherishes every moment with her...but look at the irony Guddu cares for him ,respects him, admires him... but love ? ...aww she is a naive innocent baby how would she know what a JHAMELA Love is?

So our in Love budda has turned a poet secretly...& when she is fast asleep ...he writes some lines looking at her slender sleeping figure...

So, these are some excerpts from his Diary...which I am sharing with you all so that we all can know his personal views regarding his Darling Wife ...

Before he returns from his restaurant let's finish reading it...

...Khayalaats of A Gumnaam Akshan Shipper

Let's Start
FEVER

Am contracted by a Stupid Fever,
Which has limited my movements to Fewer,
It has brought some one very Near,
In this old age it may spell doom she does Fear,
"You won't get outta bed" is what I get to Hear,
& innocently she asks Why don't you shed a Tear,
I have had a habit of bearing unexplainable Pain,
Have lost everything time & Again,
Which never did I Gain,
My duties & the love of Maa keeps me from being Slain,
Emotion less is my heart, so is my face always Plain,
After hearing my painful Story,
She felt extremely Sorry,
With a sad soft smile her eyes Dampen,
The very next moment she confidently said:
"Come what may happen,
I'll make sure near you comes nothing that hurts,
"Has to shed blood tears who hurts" She fiercely blurts,

MESMERISED

Oh the way for me she Cares,
I find her next to me ,no matter Dreams or Mares,
Her presence lightens my Days,
Her Smile Brightens my Nights,
No matter quarrels or Fights,
Everything with her are beholden Sights,

OUR FATE

No matter early or Late,
I have got a colourful Soulmate,
Who spreads only love & no Hate,
All by the mighty twist of Fate,

HER EFFECTS ON ME


She has become more than my Habit,
And changed me from being an Hermit,
She is a Happy flowing River,
In which I want to become a Diver,
She did the Unthinkable,
Changed me who was Unchangeable,

MY FEELINGS

I can't keep my hands off her Slender Waist,
By just holding her Close, am in a Mesmerised State,
I want to give a second chance to Love,
That's why brought back her Lovely Pet Dove,
In her Giggling Laughter, I feel the breeze of Heaven,
In the Air, Her Flying Hair make my Breath Stop,
In front of her all the worldly beauties Flop,
Her liveliness can bring a dead to Life,
Have got a Free Full Entertainment Package as a Wife,

MY WISHES

I Aspire to be the man of her Dreams,
The reasons of her Smiles,Giggles & Excited Screams,
I have come to love all these Changes,
Which she has brought in many ways & Ranges,


MY DILEMMA

I Don't know is this right or Not,
But we are tied in the holy marital Knot,
She thinks my feelings for her are next to Nought,
& I think this lovelife is not what I Sought,
The reason for which she was Brought,
To be a loving DIL & Strict MIL to all those who Fought,

MY PRAYERS

OH God! Make her see my Heart,
In which she has already Booked a Berth,
May she think of me more than being an Uncle,
Make Us Spend some Lone Quality time in a Jungle,


To be Continued. ...


So did you all see What a Chupa Rustom Our Khadoos is...
I tell you Budde Mein Abhi Jawaani Bohot Baaki hai...

Tak...Tak...
...Tak...

Oh guys,... looks like he's back ...
before he enters...
I need to escape after keeping his diary ...
He shouldn't know that we know his beautiful feelings & that beneath that Khadoos Attitude lies a kind & loving heart which craves for Love & Companionship ...

Tak...Tak...Tak...

He's coming near ...
Okay guys I seriously need to vanish from here...
Okay bye
Runs away

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This is the first time I tried my hands on writing...
And Created this new genre Called Poetic Drabbles...
So,please tell me how you all found it...
Lots of love
ERA


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi welcome again 🤗
This was awesome dear 👍🏼⭐️

Hope AJ's prayers are answered & would like to read more from AJ's diary 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow...A very deep...beautifully wrote his feelings❤️
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👏beautifully penned
Edited by rs-shailu29 - 6 years ago
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Beautifully penned don't vanish anymore😳 missed your khayalat😒
Edited by elsanna - 6 years ago
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Amazing
Will love to read this more
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: captainplus

Hi welcome again 🤗

This was awesome dear 👍🏼⭐️

Thanks for the Welcome,Captain🤗
Am very glad that you liked it Because my humble try is nothing in front of the immensely talented writers of this forum including You,Piku,Nish,Joe etc... 🥳

Hope AJ's prayers are answered & would like to read more from AJ's diary 😉
May the CVs of this Show Fulfill them 😆
Okay will try to Sneak in his room and give you the excerpts from his diary once in a few months😉😆


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Glad to see u back!
Missed ur posts a lot.
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Originally posted by: elsanna

Beautifully penned don't vanish anymore😳 missed your khayalat😒

Aww thank you☺️
Am surprised, I thought all would have forgotten me,
😲
You remember my Khayalaats ,that's so sweet of you & by the way i remember your Samachars they were Awesome 👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
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What a poem you have written!👏
I enjoyed reading it, it was so pleasant to the ears that I cant explain.
And the part about 'slender waist' made me cackle😆
You explained Akshat's emotions so well, bow to you Era!!👏
Just so you know you should write more of these because it was beautiful⭐️ I have a scarcity of adjectives and words to use otherwise I would have flooded you with them😆

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