New FF: A Love Called Hatred-Ch.5 Part 2 Page 8-2/11/19

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Jasmine457

@Jasmine457

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: randomfancrics
Wow this is really a different and unique story!
AJ's character is quite dark and interesting here.
Poor Guddan is facing all the consequences of her brother's action.
U r a really good writer

Thank you so much for your lovely comment 😃 Definitely was aiming to make AJ unique and he will stay dark for a while before he becomes good, but he will eventually 😆 I am happy you liked the storyline and please do continue to read and comment 😃

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Kajal

@Kajal21

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#32

its just awsome both the parts are really mindblowing

loved it continue the next part soon

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@JustRandomGirl

Stunner

+ 30

Posted: 6 years ago

#33

The story is really interesting. Poor Guddan I feel bad for her. I think she is the one who will change Akshat.

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1048973

Hibernated

Posted: 6 years ago

#34

Jasmine first of all kudos to Ur writting. Just love both the chapters.

Iwhat I love was

1. He doesn't trust woman easily which means ki uska koi past Hoga.

2. He trusts his sister blind folded.

Yani jab Lakshmi ki asaliyat khulegi to he will be broken.

I love it bcoz teeno hi situation me guddan will be brightness she will be the ray of hope for him.😳

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1154991

Hibernated

Posted: 6 years ago

#35

Double dhamaka 😃⭐️

Fantastic updates 👏

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shena07

@shena07

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#36

Love it..👏

Waiting for more

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vinlora

@vinlora

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#37

Wonderful and unique story dear...Thank you so much...👏

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nish_vir

@nish_vir

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#38

👏

Honestly I cant find words to describe just how engaging your story is.

The dark AJ is alluring in his own way. Those moments between him and Guddan were...umm...what to say, very stimulating. Their was nothing like romance but something on the level of a deadly fire that consumes all😆

I don't have enough words to do justice to the brilliance of your story👏

A question though, how is your vocab so damn good and writing style, so fine?🥱