Akshan os hamse agar koi jal gaya last part 21 jan - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
#21
Nice one previously also u have said that u update it by the next day bt itne din baad plz plz is baar kal hi kr dna update plz
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Posted: 6 years ago
#22
😆
Choone nhi diya aaj tak!!😆
Really uncle!😆
Guddan ki waist ko aap apni property hi samajhte hain aur itna bada aarop!!😲
Chui mui toh aap hain jo Guddan ke haath lagate hi touch me not ki tarah sikud jaate hain😆
Not fair kaya! Tum bahot chota update deti ho
Ek saans mein khatm ho gya🥱
Update soon and bada wala aur thoda romanchik bhi😳
Apne nish ki wish zaroor sunna⭐️
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Posted: 6 years ago
#23
Aj toh jal Gaya puri tareeke se😆
Ab Guddan band bajayegi Mazaa aayega
Good update
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Posted: 6 years ago
#24

Part -4


Guddan just pushed him with her full force n shouted with a teary throat


G- stop it just stop it...


Band kijiye apni ghatiya baatein.

A- ye kya tareeka hai BAAT Karne Ka

G- kyon aap biwi se chahe Jo kahe magar biwi ko ekdum properly behave Karna Chahiye.


Agar aapko aisa Lagta hai ki main un ladkiyo me se hu jo apne pati k samne apni self respect ko b taak or rakh deti h to aap bilkul galat Soch rahe Hain.

Aur kya Kaha Aapne ki main party me Kisi or ko notice Kar Rahi thi. Agar aap chahe na Akshat to main aapki party k ek ek minutes Ka hisab de Sakti hu.


Aapne kitni Baar logo ko smirk diye, kis kis par Apne angry glares dale kitni Baar phone call attend kiye kitni Baar mujhe dekhA kitni Baar nazarein pheri Sab Kuch.


Or aap kahte Hain ki main party me Kisi or ko notice Kar Rahi thi. Jatin Ka no Denge aap mujhe date set up karenge MERI Uske Saath is that u think what I am???.

Akshat saw that she was shattered alot. He realised that he has crossed the line.he was just looking her helplessly.

G- apko pata hai Aapka problem kya hai Mr. Akshat Jindal aapko sach wo hi Lagta hai Jo aapki nazarein dekhti hai. Isiliye aapko ye dikha ki main sofa par so Rahi thi magar ye Nahi dikha ki maine abhi tak Apne kapde b Nahi badle. Aapko ye to dikha ki main Kishore k sath Raat me Ghar AA gayi magar MERI ankhon me subah k 7 baje tak b neend Ka ek Katra Nahi hai.


So Nahi Rahi thi main I was waiting for you. Har ahat par mujhe Lagta tha ki Akshat AA Gaye magar Nahi aap Nahi Aaye. Raat Bhar aap USS restaurant k cabin me baith k Kam karte rahe.


I was waiting for your call Akshat, ki ek Baar just once aap mujhe call karenge or poochenge ki guddan tum Ghar to pahunch gayi na tum to thik ho naa but no.


No phone calls no MSG's nothing.

Apko Lagta hai ki main party me Kisi or ko notice Kar Rahi thi magar aapko pata hai Mera problem kya hai. Mera problem ye h ki mujhe Aapke alawa or koi Nazar hi Nahi aata. Aapko laga ki main party me Jatin k sath dance Kar Rahi thi kyonki mujhe uski attention Chahiye thi nooo...


Main aisa isiliye Kar Rahi thi kyon ki mujhe aapki attention Chahiye thi.


I was craving for your attention.


Jab se iss Ghar me aai Hu aapko notice Karne k alawa Kiya kya hai Maine.

Apka Dil gusse me kaise dhadkata hai or excitement me kaise dhadkata hai iska farq sirf main janti hu. Aap jab Khush hote h to aapki ankhon ki chamak notice ki hai Maine, dukhi hote h to Us dukh Jo gusse me chhipane ki koshish dekhi hai Maine, jab naraaaz hote h to mutthi band Kar Lete hai, jab jhooth Bolte h to nazarein churana notice Kiya hai Maine.


Sorry Kabhi Munh se Nahi kahte magar jatana jante h, jab sharmaate Hain to Aapke chehre k sath aap k kan ki harqat notice ki hai Maine. Or aapko Lagta hai ki main Kisi or k sath...


Is that u think what I am??????

Apko pata hai na ki bachpan se le kr aaj tak mujhe Kabhi Kisi ne b ye Nahi sikhaya ki agar ye Galti ho Jaye to use aise sudhaar liya Jana Chahiye.


Magar Aapne mujhe sikhaya MERI har galti ko Sahi karna. jab Jane anjane aap mere kareeb aate Hain na Akshat to mujhe Khushi milti h ek sukoon milta hai aisa Lagta hai agar aap aas pass ho na to duniya ki koi BHI takat Mera kuch Nahi bigad Sakti I feel secure when u r there.


Jab aap uss parv ki janboojhkar mujhe chhoone ki koshish ko rokte Hain to mujhe Lagta hai that I m in the safest place of the world.

Aur wo 3 din jab main beemar thi or Aapne mera khayal rakha. Wo MERI Zindagi k sabse khubsoorat din the jante hai kyon?? Kyon ki mujhe laga ki finally I belong to u.n I felt ki aaj Nahi to kal aap bolenge ki ha guddan tum MERI Zindagi Ka important hissa ho. Tum mere liye special ho magar Nahi


Akshat Jindal kaise Kisi ko kah Sakta hai ki wo Kisi se pyaar karta hai.or guddan hi to hai aaj Nahi to kal aa Kar bol Degi.


Aaj tak bahut si Galatian ki h Maine sach h ye lekin mujhe bataiye Aapka or mere raston Ka Baar Baar takrana MERI Galti hai. Apka mujhe shadi k liye offer Karna MERI Galti hai.


Aapki or MERI ye anchahi shadi MERI Galti h? Nahi na to phir in galtiyon se Judi galtiyon ki saza main akele kyon bhugat Rahi Hu.


Ha aap mere kareeb aane wale pahle shakhs Hain. Ha mujhe shadi k liye offer Karne wale bhale hi business deal ki hi Tarah magar offer Karne wale aap pahle shakhs hai.meri Zindagi me mujhe samajhne wale mujhe jaanne wale MERI har chhoti chhoti Khushi Ka khayal Karne wale aap pahle shakhs Hain.

Stupid thi main Jo aap k sath ye games khel Rahi thi ki kon pahle kahega

Aaj tak har Baar Apne pahale Kaha h na


Isiliye aap k is ego ko aaj main satisfy Karti hu kya Sunna chahte hain aap Akshat yahi na to suniye

Mr. Akshat Jindal I Love You...


I love you..


I love you...


And I really really do..


Saying this guddan burst out crying she hide her face in her palms n just lies on Akshat's shoulder.


Akshat just hold her. He didn't know what to do...


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Phewww isse zyada lamba update hamse na ho payega.


Abhi k liye itna hi Baki Ka last or next update me.

Love u alll. N pls bhagwaan k liye to comment Karo ...

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Posted: 6 years ago
#25
Serial vali Guddan ka to pata nahi par iss writer Guddan( @kaya_luvakshan) ke baato se to Akshat Jindal zaroor affected ho gaya hai😉😆

In short what I mean is,
How beautifully u described Guddan's pov👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
#26
Nice chapter kavya
excitement badha di tumne kavya

Update soon dear
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Posted: 6 years ago
#27
Nice update
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#28
Wow good reply and outbrust of Guddan
This is what Akshat needed 440 volt ka jhatka
Marvelous update
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Posted: 6 years ago
#29
Can u please do me a favour...please just pass this story or script to the guddan serial creatives...bcoz I just want to the same scene in serial also...its awesome yaar👏👏👏 heart touching...emotional...loved it 👏confession was just wooow 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#30
Mindblowing update dear
I really loved it
Guddans emotional breakdown her stating out her feelings finally she confessed her feelings for him
Now excited to know what AJ will say
Do update soon

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