Mil Rahe Hain - AkshAn OS (24 Nov) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Secretfollower

😆...nice this is the best way to handle guddan.

Ab jab bhi aj ko apni baat manvani hogi he told her tumse na hi oayega and guddan will take as challenge and compelete it😆

It is quite true in everyone's case..nhi?? Guddan toh fir bhi dimaag se bachi hai atleast AJ ke samne toh ;)

Best scene😳..in the car well u r right do dil mio rahe hain magar not chupke-2

Sabko ho rhi hai hn sabko ho rahi hsi jalan inse inse (durga)

always in gussa mood well inliked to see durga condition

I liked very much

Mujhebhi Durga ki jealousy mast lagti hai, tabhi har jagah usse ghusa deti hu😆 kya karu O-ladies, main hu aadat se majbooor~

Pls continue if any other part you have😉

If another such idea will strike me, I'll definitely write it 😊

Originally posted by: Chit15

Nice you have expressed beautifully the feelings of Akshat and Guddan after this major incident.

I loved the conversation. 👍🏼

Hope you continue or come up with new story😊

Originally posted by: kusharberry

Amazing os dear

U beautifully penned down it

Their care and concern for eachother

And I really loved ajs reverse psychology on guddu

Will please continue it

Originally posted by: Bibechana

Wow...I literally couldn't digest it.

😆

If this scene really comes in the epi, mein uss din behosh hojaungi aur uske agle din hi dekhungi 😃

While I was reading this, I was imagining the scene and I couldn't help but smile all along. This seemed so real that I wished it would just continue and never end.

If you would ask me, I would ask for the second shot.

I can't help my greed here😆

Originally posted by: Memorable_ERA

OMG! What a plethora of emotions did I go through now...

Their Haq se ladna,pyar se daantna,Bachpana,budhapa,dooriyan,nazdeekiyan, care & concern is Jaanlewa...The way U described it all is SOUL CAPTIVATING...

His scolding then concern then akad then competing like a child. ...wow he has already become so atrangi from a certain khadoos ..."not kuch to"

actually

"bahut kuch badal gaya hai already aur bahut kuch badlega"

Behen I never knew that a single OS can make the khadoos in me go all mushy & dreamy...

Thanks For Writing This...

Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan

@red Loved this dialogue 😆

Wonderful os

Originally posted by: elsanna

Wonderful OS just loved it each and every dailouge was written so beautifully 👏

Proud of you

What's your name by the way😛

Originally posted by: nish_vir

Its always a pleasure to read such lengthy comments 😆 and must I say reading your views multiplied my happiness. Aapko kuch acha lagna is good but agar vo doosron ko bhi achi lage toh, uski happiness alag hi hoti hai :)

Khadoos in you went all mushy mushy?!are you a Khadoos like ourr AJ 😆? {No offence}

Originally posted by: Memorable_ERA

No Offence Taken Dear

Am Quite Proudly A Khadoos & That's Why I Relate To AJ so Much ...

The OCD, principles ,Me Unable To Open Up,Strictly anti social,being Fiercely Protective Of My Loved Ones & Unable to Express My Emotions Being An Introvert.Every Thing Is Same To Same ...

Tried Changing My Self Many Times But The Circumstances & Fellow Humans Didn't Let Me Change

So Am Happy The Way I Am

Khadoos are Khadoos because they can't be hypocritical,envious & backbiting. ...they are open , bold & blunt enough to say crap on your face & sometimes they regret it in the bathrooms which other people won't know coz they will never express that they regret ...

For a khadoos expressing an emotion is like doing the most difficult job in the world ...

& Nish dear,

look i ended up writing an essay on khadoos people...

Love you & keep updating your stories...