AKSHAN SS - ||You are mine and i am yours|| PART 1 UPDATE Pg2 4 dec - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Secretfollower


Really beautiful what i liked the most you added pics on that.you added more characters .for now it become difficult for me reminding all characters
You added most other beautiful couples wether for onscreen or offscreen.one jodi is real life couple too 😆
You added bephannah actoes and swaragini actora .well done
Loved the guddan ' dream that she wanted to become a doctor.

I wanted to see how you revolve other characters in one plate and how the story move forward.
Waiting 2 see😃

Thanks dear...i am happy u like it...they all are my favourites...i really dont want guddan without friends...they are going to be Akshan's support system..they will play as cupid❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12
Wow really loved the characters
Now waiting for the update
Wanna know who is that girl and boy on bike and who is the one so angry on seeing them together
Plzzz update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13
Pratu...thankyou so much for including my RAGLAK(Ragini and Laksh) in this FF😃
Raglak_akshan loved this Raglak+Akshan character sketch😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#14
Awesome cs
Love it
Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#15
PART 1 -PAIN






Girls hostel...
Time 6:30 am...

A girl wake up bcz of her phone which continuously ringing from 5 min..and revealed to be GUDDAN ...she look at her roommate who is in her beauty sleep..is she kumbhkarans daughter?? her mind asked small chuckle escape...her thoughts are again disturbed by the ring...she immediately pick the mobile without seeing the caller id with the irritation ready blast on the person who disturb her sleep..and receive the call

Other side - wth!!!why u r late????r u ok??? Didnt u sleep well? Whats wrong with u ?? R u sick?? Now why are u silent speak up princess...is there any problem??? Are u in any tension??

GUDDAN -shuuut uppp...shout in frustration and quickly look at the girl who stir but again sleep peaceful...guddan sigh..and look at the screen and ready to blast the person. ...

Guddan - what hell is wrong with u huh? R u gone mad ? Or did u ran from asylum??

Person- huh? What did i do? I was just concern about u and look at u you are scolding me?

Guddan - lakshhh just shut your mouth...in frustration( whts wrong with this man yarr i mean he is the one who disturb me this early and now asking me why i am scolding him...ufff)

Laksh - but tell me why r u in bad mood??...did someone say anything to u...u just say the name i will take care of that person...

Guddan - youuu...
Laksh -what me?? Maine kya kiya yarr??
Guddan - u stupid... bhaii u called me at 6:30 and u r asking me whats wrong..just cut the crap now u already spoil my sleep...tell me why u called me this early??should i wake up ragu??u wanna talk to her??
Laksh -nooo
Guddan pull the phone away from ear and stares at it in disbelief...shook her head and again

Back to conversation. ..
Guddan - ok tell me why u call me??(she is no mood of argument..uff why me god??)
Laksh - i am coming to indore...says excitedly
Guddan - wow u r coming yesss..this is really amazing wait but why u r not informing to ragu...did u want surprise her??
Laksh - thats why i love u...u understand me very well.. while grining

Guddan - omg u r soo romantic...ok tell me ur plan..
They talk for while and cut the call.
Guddan's POV
As soon as i cut the call...i look at the clock which is showing 8:15..quickly got up from bed rush to washroom get ready for clg...while ragu is getting ready i sat on my bed thinking about my life...
My self Taanvi shekhar Gupta...my dad runs his own business...i have mother (oopss stepmother) and my loving baby sis..my dad and revati love me sooo much but my mom ( not again my mind scold me) anyways lets move i was 1 year old when my mother died she was on bed from my birth but dad says that she loved me soo much..our relatives blame me they think that because of me my mom left the world...my dad marries again for me..but my new mom dont know what problem she has with me...let it be..
I Know that my dad , sis and my friends love me sooo much but still i miss my maa..if she is alive then i wake up on my own bed in my house not here in hostel..but i love here now this is my 2nd home..to avoid the argument and taunts from mom...i really wish to sleep on maa's lap,to feel her motherly touch..to hugg her tight whenever i will be in stress..cry in her embrace..eating homemade food with lots of love with her hand...she should be with me in all phase of my life. Am i expecting a lott?? I have so many peoples around me who love me sooo much but still i crave for more..i feel like something is missing...my thoughts are disturbed by the click of door which show ragu's arrival...i quickly wipe my tears which was flowing without my knowledge..but she notice it..shook her head pull me into crash bone hugg...i really feel lucky to get ragini in my life..
GUDDAN POV END

we quickly get ready for the college bcz our watches showing us only 10 min are left for our lecture...we hurriedly lock our room and ran towards the college...

While in DELHI

A man sitting on bed with a photo frame in his hand...his eyes shows emptiness, pain, hurt...
He is non other than "THE AKSHAT JINDAL"...NO.1 Business tycoon of india currently..

AKSHAT'S POV

After done with my workout i walk towards my room when i saw lucky my only friend who always stood by my side, support me...i will never able to thank enough to my destiny for sending him in my life..
He always correct my me whenever i am wrong...he can read my eye, read my mind by just one look of me..then i heard him saying 'ragu' ahah lover boy...she is his fiance..i love to see them...they are kinda possessive about each other equally...they are really adorable..i didnt hear anything but his eyes me he is upto something...ignoring it i headed to my room to freshen up...after getting ready i walk to the bed and pick the the photo from side table who is my life, my wife ANTARA...
who left me behind ..we loved each other...bcz of my mistake she is not with me..we didnt found her body..i tried a lot whole 6 month...i try to find her but everytime i get disappointment...
Eveyone assume that she is no more but somewhere my heart says she is alive ( i loved her that much)...
I was completely shattered..i lost myself...i loved her like anything..i was not able to imagine my life without her..i want to end my life but everytime unknown feeling stopped me..my heart said someone is waiting for me..dont know who?? (May ANTARA)..
today here if i am standing perfectly fine just bcz of lucky only...we moved to delhi..i dont want to be in indore..memories of US hunted me every passing seconds...i didnt had enough courage that time..i left all of them behind our memories and my family...
Now i am all alone..my thoughts disturb my lucky who entered in room...he sat infront of me wipe my tears which was flowing without my knowledge...he pull me into warm hug which i needed the most right now and he knows it...
POV end...



I am really sorry guys ( kaan pakad ke sorry) i know i am extremely late i was going to update much early but dont know how it got deleted. ..after that i didnt get time to write it again...really sorry for late update..hope u will enjoy it...will try my best to update asap...

Thank you
~pratu..
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Posted: 6 years ago
#16
Awesome update
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17
Pratu darling🤗
How do I thank and appreciate u for writing this FF
I felt so happy and excited reading this ...😳
And u must be knowing the reason too😆

RAGLAK+ AKSHAN⭐️

How sweet of u to include RAGLAK too here
My username itself suggests how badly I like RAGLAK ( RAGINI+LAKSH ) and AKSHAN ( AKSHAT+ GUDDAN) 😛

Wonderful update Pratu...
I'll be ur fanfiction's "most excited reader " 😃😉
Continue super soon..

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Posted: 6 years ago
#18
Beautiful update dear
Really loved it
really excited to see akshans first meeting and he they will fall in love
I loved the characters of this story
Plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it
Continue soon

Thanks dear..😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan

Pratu darling 🤗

How do I thank and appreciate u for writing this FF
I felt so happy and excited reading this ...😳
And u must be knowing the reason too😆

RAGLAK+ AKSHAN⭐️

How sweet of u to include RAGLAK too here
My username itself suggests how badly I like RAGLAK ( RAGINI+LAKSH ) and AKSHAN ( AKSHAT+ GUDDAN) 😛

Wonderful update Pratu...
I'll be ur fanfiction's "most excited reader " 😃😉
Continue super soon..

Thank u dear...RAGLAK uff they are my love😳 and currently akshan ❤️
I will update asap...

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