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Posted: 7 years ago
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Guddan nods her head n understands the plan of her husband to expose Arafat n Anita as she looking into him, she saw a Chipkali,
chipkali n she embraced her husband
Guddan, AJ says softly Chipkali to Tumhara ek excuse hai mujhe hug Karne Ka
aww me Uncle, she walks away but he grabs her hand n pulls her so her back is hitting the wall, n he is hovering over her. Abhi na jao chod ke ki Dil mera Bhara Naahi AJ sings softly

Both are in the corner of the pool area, where no one can see them. Background music of Tera Haath Mein meri Lakeerien is still playin, while Mr & Mrs. Jindal are staring into each other eyes oblivious to their surrounding, their heartbeats are hearts, eyes daring the other one to move, as the stars are reflecting down upon them, the crickets are dripping, a slight wind is blowing the daring hair strand that cover Guddans eyes, slowly N gently AJ removes the strand of hair n tucks it behind her ear.

While is other fingers trails a beautiful yet playful pattern up Guddans arm, creating unkownly sensation throughout her body n stomach. Causing her to break the contact with her hubby.

With a tip of his fingers under the chin AJ gently turns Guddan head towards her n leans forward slowly places his lips over hers 😳 While his arms his encircling around her waist n pulling her closer and she slowly encircles her arm around his neck, n her fingers slowly playing with his hair. Encouraging him to deepen the kiss😳

After the few minutes they pull apart from kiss but they are still together his arms on her waist n her arms around his neck, both breathing heavily, Guddan eyes are intoxicated from the passion of her husband, and her lips swollen n lipsticks are smudged.

Huskily he breaths on her face, well Mrs. Guddan Akshat Jindal you look beautiful, if I new this was the way to shut you up. I would have done this long time agoGuddan shyly moves her eyes and just hugs him kissing the neck.
Edited by *Piku* - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan



Awww u can write an OS including this yaar😳

dont know dear i never write an os or ff na kabhi try kiya.yhan demand thi akshan ke romantic scenes ki mne dal diya
Honestly mjhe os or ts ki abbv. bhi nh pta😆.bas ff ki pta hai.i just enjoy 2 read others ff ,and os.bcoz yhan hmare forum mn kafi amazing writer hain.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Secretfollower2

dont know dear i never write an os or ff na kabhi try kiya.yhan demand thi akshan ke romantic scenes ki mne dal diya

Honestly mjhe os or ts ki abbv. bhi nh pta😆.bas ff ki pta hai.i just enjoy 2 read others ff ,and os.bcoz yhan hmare forum mn kafi amazing writer hain.




Os- one shot
Ts-three/two shot
No dear u can write atleast try first 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Piku*

Guddan nods her head n understands the plan of her husband to expose Arafat n Anita as she looking into him, she saw a Chipkali,

chipkali n she embraced her husband
Guddan, AJ says softly Chipkali to Tumhara ek excuse hai mujhe hug Karne Ka
aww me Uncle, she walks away but he grabs her hand n pulls her so her back is hitting the wall, n he is hovering over her. Abhi na jao chod ke ki Dil mera Bhara Naahi AJ sings softly

Both are in the corner of the pool area, where no one can see them. Background music of Tera Haath Mein meri Lakeerien is still playin, while Mr & Mrs. Jindal are staring into each other eyes oblivious to their surrounding, their heartbeats are hearts, eyes daring the other one to move, as the stars are reflecting down upon them, the crickets are dripping, a slight wind is blowing the daring hair strand that cover Guddans eyes, slowly N gently AJ removes the strand of hair n tucks it behind her ear.

While is other fingers trails a beautiful yet playful pattern up Guddans arm, creating unkownly sensation throughout her body n stomach. Causing her to break the contact with her hubby.

With a tip of his fingers under the chin AJ gently turns Guddan head towards her n leans forward slowly places his lips over hers 😳 While his arms his encircling around her waist n pulling her closer and she slowly encircles her arm around his neck, n her fingers slowly playing with his hair. Encouraging him to deepen the kiss😳

After the few minutes they pull apart from kiss but they are still together his arms on her waist n her arms around his neck, both breathing heavily, Guddan eyes are intoxicated from the passion of her husband, and her lips swollen n lipsticks are smudged.

Huskily he breaths on her face, well Mrs. Guddan Akshat Jindal you look beautiful, if I new this was the way to shut you up. I would have done this long time agoGuddan shyly moves her eyes and just hugs him kissing the neck.

now aj shows his romantic tactics to shut up bolbacchan guddan😆...but honestly amazing yaar.u give updates but u also tried 2 ff.i serioulsly liked it..last para i really liked it..continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan




Os- one shot
Ts-three/two shot
No dear u can write atleast try first 😳

thanks for the information and also thanks for motivating me.but seriously i dont want any chappals and tomatoes on me😆.
Jokes apart but jo bhi try hai mn yahin kar lungi.akshan ki kahani hamari zubani...and thanks again if u liked it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I hope I didn't scare anyone😕😭 someone please continue 😛
Secret dear I got inspired by your scenes, it was in the moment😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Guddan-now please over this agar humnein yahan kisi ne dekh liya to hamara sara plan kharab ho jayega
Akshat-jo hukum mrs. Jindal😳
Guddan-phle aap mujhe ek batayenge
Akshat -tries 2 touch her hairs and hn nolo
Guddan-again distracting😆 vo ..vo..vo
Akshat -kya ab bolo bhi
Guddan-hn vo aapne mujhe kyun roka sabko vo recording dikhane se hamare paas vo recording thi hum vo sabko dikhake us fake antara ka pard afaas kar sakte the
Akshat-nahi guddan abhi nahi phle hi rum usko recording ke baare mn batake sab kuch kharab kar chuki ho abhi nhi phke sahi time aane do phr batayenge is recirding ke baare mn
Guddan-sahi vakt matlab
Akshat turned back and says-mujhe lagta hai koi hamare parivaar ka bhi hai jo us antara se mila hua hai
Guddan- nahi uncle oops sorry aj😆 aisa nahi ho sakta
Hamare parivar ka
Akshat -nahi guddan mjhe aisa lagta hai jab tak puri sacchai samne nahi aa jati please jab tak is recording ke baare mn kisi ko nahi batayenge
Guddan-ok
Akshat -aur hn mjhe us fake antara se shaadi krne ka drama karna hoga taki uska pura plan jaan sakon
Guddan take a deep breath and have tears in her eyes-ok
Akshat -touch her face again chinta mat karo sab theek ho jayega
Guddan -hn just touched akshat hands jab tak aap mere saath hn mjhe kisi aur ki chinta nahi hai
Again they are lost in each other

Suddenly some walking voice they both hears and shocked
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Secretfollower2

Guddan-now please over this agar humnein yahan kisi ne dekh liya to hamara sara plan kharab ho jayega

Akshat-jo hukum mrs. Jindal 😳
Guddan-phle aap mujhe ek baat batayenge
Akshat -tries 2 touch her hairs and hn bolo
Guddan-again distracting😆 vo ..vo..vo
Akshat -kya ab bolo bhi
Guddan-hn vo aapne mujhe kyun roka sabko vo recording dikhane se hamare paas vo recording thi hum vo sabko dikhake us fake antara ka pard afaas kar sakte the
Akshat-nahi guddan abhi nahi phle hi tum usko recording ke baare mn batake sab kuch kharab kar chuki ho abhi nhi phke sahi time aane do phr batayenge is recording ke baare mn
Guddan-sahi vakt matlab
Akshat turned back and says-mujhe lagta hai koi hamare parivaar ka bhi hai jo us antara se mila hua hai
Guddan- nahi uncle oops sorry aj😆 aisa nahi ho sakta
Hamare parivar ka
Akshat -nahi guddan mjhe aisa lagta hai jab tak puri sacchai samne nahi aa jati please jab tak is recording ke baare mn kisi ko nahi batayenge
Guddan-ok
Akshat -aur hn mjhe us fake antara se shaadi krne ka drama karna hoga taki uska pura plan jaan sakon
Guddan take a deep breath and have tears in her eyes-ok
Akshat -touch her face again chinta mat karo sab theek ho jayega
Guddan -hn just touched akshat hands jab tak aap mere saath hn mjhe kisi aur ki chinta nahi hai
Again they are lost in each other

Suddenly some walking voice they both hears and shocked

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Posted: 7 years ago
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AJ and Guddan look at each other, n AJ puts a index finger on his lip indicating Guddan to be quiet. He holds her hand n hides behind the side where they can hear the voices.

Anitaji Kay plan tha Aapka aur Rawat Sir Ka, it's the voice of Perv
N he salutes them.

After AJ divorces Guddan, I will marry her, (he smiles evilly)
AJ n Guddan both look at each other, AJ forms a fist at his side.

Perv continues phele I didn't like Guddan at all, apni bahan Revati ke lite usne mujhe thapad Mara, jo phele mera ego hurt kiya phir mera Dil ko. He touches his heart

I thought by blackmailing Guddan to marry AJ by kidnapping Revati, I will take revenge on both of my enemies Ek Thir Do Nishana-AJ- for getting me suspended n Guddan for slapping me. AJ aur Guddan didn't like each other, but now they are very protective for each other. (AJ n Guddan look at each other smile)

Mujhe Samajh Naahi aatha ki AJ Jaisa Khadoos Buddha, main kya hai ki jo mujh Jaisa jaw an Mein Naahi hai, Guddan toh mujhe like Naahi kartha or ghas Naahi dheti
. He tells fake Antara aka Anita all the mischief Kand he did with Guddan, AJ boils with Anger but Guddan holds him back, indicating with her eyes no.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Then aj and guddan start to listen their conversation
Anita (fake antara) to perv- kya tum us dumbo gudda se sach much mein shaadi karna chahati ho vo to chalti firti galti ki dukan hai
Perv (smilea evily) and rub his chest-agar ek raat ke liye us galti ko apni dulhan banalon to usme kya burai hai
Such a creepster 😡
Both start laughing
Akshat and guddan hears their conversation and akshat start bowling in anger and he just want to beat perv.But guddan holds his hands
Guddan- nahi abhi nahi aj
Then akshat again go close 2 guddan
Perv 2 anita and rawat- ab batayenge aap dono aage ka kya plan hai
Rawat-vo to vakt aane par tumhe khud hi pata chal jayega
Trio evil gang go from the pool area

Then aksht and guddan comes outside from the corner
Edited by Secretfollower2 - 7 years ago

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