Akshan OS- chapter 2(b): CONTROL updated pg 2 - Page 2

Originally posted by: kusharberry

this simply beautiful

now parv is gonna investigate whats is going on b/w both akshat and guddan

plzzz do continue soon

Originally posted by: attiya1.3

Sorry for delay.

Akshan OS- chapter 2(b): control

15 min later, she opened the door.

Akshat was there, fuming with anger.he was at the point to be exploded.

" yeh kia harkat thi? " he pointed towards his shirt.

" woh apne 30 min is shirt par lagaye to mn bhi andar 10 min s yh dekh rahi thi k ap kia dekh rahy thay is mn" she said innocently with a mischievious spark in her eyes.

That's it.now, he can't control.

He pushed guddan and pinned to the bathroom wall and shut the door behind.guddan was not ready for this reaction.he moved his face to her ears and this made her close her eyes.the smell of his body wash, drops falling from his hair onto her body , his bare chest, all were triggering her senses.over the top, his heart beats were making her restless.she shut her eyes as he moved close.

" tmhn Sab chezon par haq hai.siwaye meri zindagai or meri zindagi ki chezon k .ainda hath mat lagana." Akshat said in a cold tone.

Guddan opened her eyes which were filled with tears.from the first day, he had scolded her infinite times but, never had been so indifferent and cold with her.every time, he had a feel to rectify her, understand her.akshat moved his face an inch backwards, when his eyes met with guddan.he stuck for a moment. There was something which he couldn't interpret.he looked for some moments in her eyes which was broken by durga voice.

" AJ! AJ! Ap andar hain kia? "

Akshat came back into his senses.

" ha..an durga bahu. Kia hua?"

" apko pta hai yh guddan

...woh maaji kahan hain. Mn kb s dhund rahi hun."

" mnnn" akshat put hands on her mouth and instructed her to keep quite.

" woh kh kr gayi thi k pool side jarahi." Akshat made an excuse.

" magar mn wahin s to arahi hn"

" wahin hogi ,dobara ja kr dekho." Akshat want her to leave the room quickly.

" ji AJ." Durga left the room confused.

Guddan bit his hand.

" burhape mn ankhayn kamzoor hogyi hain kia. Dikh nahi raha mn yahan hn"

" mjhy SB dikh raha hai aur durga bahu ko yh dikh jata jb apki awaz yahan s ati k mn aur ap 1 washroom mn hi hain aur AGR ap darwaza kholti to aur bhi zyada dikh jata k mn srf 1 towel mn hn " akshat taunted her and guddan cheeks turn red with this explanation.akshat grabbed his shirt and started to wear it.guddan remember that 5 min back, he had scolded her. She make a serious face " sorry! Ainda mn kuch nahi karungi" she left washroom and akshat realize the reason of her action.

Outside the room, parv saw Mrs and Mr akshat akshat leaving washroom one by one.

" yeh dono!!!! Buddha kia dosri Shadi enjoy krne laga? " he was puzzled and took decision to find this answer.

Originally posted by: Secretfollower2

simply amazing...l loved the dialouge aur bhi zyada dikh jata 😆

guddan pagal hai sach mn

Please continue soon

Originally posted by: *Piku*

Attiya very beautiful story and chapters 👏👏

haye AJ shirtless

Guddan is Paagal and Akshat is very leathal, together they make a deadly combo😆

I hope they teach Parv a lesson

Originally posted by: maha2905

very nice Os

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Hey! It's really nice. I wish I too could write like you

Originally posted by: attiya1.3

Hey thanks😃

I have read your ff I think and its interesting..

Just keep practicing with small writeups