LoveStruck--FanFic Chap 7 Pg 11,UP -12Jul - Page 3

so it means you wont cast andy..hawwwwwwww 😆 😆 btw which you would choose for the role of Aryan then ? 😳

😆 I also liked the second part 😛

Beehive..all the descriptions of the situations are great.. 😃

Definitely a very unusual, charming love story that is penned down beautifully. It has this nightly edge to it. I love how both Menka and Aryan's perspectives are written, it gives so much more insight to both of their thoughts at the moment that you can actually imagine both of their behaviors and understand their reactions.

Though, might I add, when I was reading this story, I was actually imagining Sharad M as Aryan and ofcourse Divya as Meneka. Sorry just can't imagine anyone else with Divz..😳😳😆

Would love to read the next parts as honestly, this story has really peaked my interest, because of its novelty and edginess!!😛

Keep smiling..

Love

Soni

Originally posted by: *VaVaVoom14*

😆 I also liked the second part 😛

Beehive..all the descriptions of the situations are great.. 😃

as third part is better trust me 😆 and man....i am so in love with the story 😆 teh situation descirbed pretty well indeed all credit to Jaggu👏

Originally posted by: soni595

Definitely a very unusual, charming love story that is penned down beautifully. It has this nightly edge to it. I love how both Menka and Aryan's perspectives are written, it gives so much more insight to both of their thoughts at the moment that you can actually imagine both of their behaviors and understand their reactions.

Though, might I add, when I was reading this story, I was actually imagining Sharad M as Aryan and ofcourse Divya as Meneka. Sorry just can't imagine anyone else with Divz..😳😳😆

Would love to read the next parts as honestly, this story has really peaked my interest, because of its novelty and edginess!!😛

Keep smiling..

Love

Soni

you said soni i cant compete you as far words are concered you are a mgician of words and will always remain a notch high over us👏 so..thats explains your...vocabulary skilss😳

abotu you imagining..Aryan as Sharad..can understand this emotions but something in this fanfic which...made me think that Andi (andy +divya) will look rocking together and if you remember the holie article of ekta casting coup..you can say i was inspried from this very fanfci to cast diff actors of shows...nd play a prank😆

i totally respect your emotions..but look andy below and tell me how wud suit this char or aryan more😳 though i wont mind if you still go for Sharad😆he is nice chap..sree di..told me so...although she knows am not interested in him😆

^^ This is how Aryan is...😳

CHAPTER 3

she could smell the chawl air wafting through the car window as Aryan neared his destination. meneka screwed up her nose unused to the strange smell of the chawl but Aryan was at home in it. it was the smell of decay & death but it also had a warm & comforting feel to it. Aryan couldn't imagine living away from Chandini chawl. he glanced at meneka, she looked morbidly fascinated with the sights around her. loud folk music blared from one of the tea shops. men dressed in colourful dhotis & garish shirts sat in small shops selling various goods.

women wearing simple cotton sarees carried pots of water to their homes & there was an argument going on in one of the small saree stalls. children half naked ran in the streets, playing with broken toy cars & planes stuck together with scotch tape. the chawl seemed to be coming alive even at the late hour. the rain had ceased so all the people had come out for some fresh air.

the residents of the chawl recognised aryan's car. they waved at him as he drove past & peeked in curiously at meneka. Aryan parked outside a reasonably sized portion & motioned meneka to step out of the car. by then a sizeable crowd had gathered outside the car. as meneka got out, the women in the crowd nudged each other & whispered loudly.

the men gave her admiring looks as they had never seen an attractive woman like her before. even though meneka looked messy, it was undeniable that she was beautiful. Aryan had noticed it right from the start. "who's she Aryan bhaiyya?" a little girl asked him cutely. "she is our guest. she'll be living with us for some days." Aryan told the girl & kissed her on the cheek.

when he sat the girl down she rushed to menka & hugged her. "what's your name didi?" she asked meneka. "my name is meneka. what's yours?" meneka kissed the little girl on her cheek just like Aryan. "my name is rekha. you're very pretty didi. just like a sweet fairy. can I call you fairy didi?" the little girl smiled up at meneka. meneka nodded grinning at her.

meneka played with rekha for some time while Aryan stood by watching. he finally knew her name. "meneka. a name that is apt for her." Aryan thought to himself. he watched her play with rekha & realised that meneka also had a dazzling smile. feeling himself drawn to her even more, Aryan tried his best to suppress his feelings. these feelings would prove to be a hindrance. Aryan brushed off those feelings as mere infatuation. little did he know it was something more deeper & meaningful than infatuation.

rekha's mother came for her & chided her daughter to go to bed. "you have to go to work tomorrow." she pulled rekha's ear lightly. "work? you mean little rekha doesn't go to school?" meneka looked shocked. "fairy didi, my mummy & daddy can't afford to send me to school so I work at the matchbox factory." rekha told her & left with her mum.

meneka was highly disturbed by the fact that rekha was made to work at such a tender age. her eyes filled up with tears at the unfairness of life & she saw a handkerchief being given to her.

"wipe your tears." Aryan told meneka softly. she seemed to have a kind heart that felt for others. her indigance & hurt that rekha was being sent to work touched a chord in aryan's heart. if only someone like meneka had taken pity on him, perhaps Aryan wouldn't be in that state now. he brought her into the house & showed her the spare room.

"it's not very much. please bear with it till I find something better." he told her. "it's lovely. small & cosy. do you live her as well?" meneka questioned curiously. "yes, I stay in the next room. call me if you need anything." Aryan turned to leave. "er.. Aryan? can I ask you to do me a favour?" meneka stopped him. Aryan rolled his eyes, she probably wanted some makeup or clothes. "what is it?" he wanted to know. "can you send rekha to school? don't make her work at such a tender age. please can you do that for me?" meneka begged him.

Aryan stared at meneka. "you want me to send rekha to school? that's what you want from me?" he asked her incredulously. meneka nodded. "I'll try my best to help rekha." Aryan replied walking out of the room. "thank you Aryan." meneka spoke to his retreating back. Aryan didn't reply but his heart skipped a beat every time meneka uttered his name.

by leena

Nice am imagining diff couples just me and burger ended up with a BIG confusion😳

Luv,

Shagun

Agree with Shagun dii 😳

REally liked chp 3....soo interestin 😳 😳 Continue sooon nish di 😳

Nishuuuuuu, you brought this wonderful Fanfic back.....!! Now, where is Leena... let me go pakao her 😎

Actually just like Soni ji, aaahhh, if it was Sharad, mar gayii ☺️ I remember saying this earlier before, when she had it in the Mamta Forum..

YOu know, this is the first time I'm visiting this forum ever, and my first post too, so lucky I got to see this..! 😳

YAY!
That was cool can't wait for more!
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