OS: Somewhere in the future. epilogue pg 23 - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Hey dear writer!!! Just read the prologue and part 1!! Loved this one!👍🏼

It would feel so real to read that Chavans have felt the worth of Sai Joshi by themselves and not by any mere superstition!

Virat knowing about her academic progress and supporting her without her knowledge signifies the true love he does! Liked that he didn't stop her cuz he was being egoistic but he didn't want her to not achieve her dreams... And that was heartbreaking!💔

Jeeva being the most wanted Big Bro here👏Loving them....

Can't wait to read how this one proceeds !!! Please continue soon😃

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is soo good ❤️and I can't wait for what's gonna happen next. And the Jeeva-Shiva moment? Much much much better than the one they showed on screen.

And Virat actually letting Sai go for herself is just...❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved it ❤️

Eagerly waiting for the next part 🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi,

Thanks for the comment.

Just wait for the history to repeat itself.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Welcome 🤗

Thanks for the comment.

I just felt that it would be far more logical if an IPS officer would behave like this..and not swing like a pendulum. One instant, I dont care about Sai. Next instant, cry for her well being.

Samrat takes a little backseat here.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Thank you!

Your kind words mean a lot to the characters I wish to portray.

Yes, Samrat is the big bro, but Virat is in control.

Sai continues to be a knee jerk reacting teenager.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Yes, the Jeeva Shiva moment is the same that one would expect in real life. Jeeva has turned out to be immensely judgemental about his Shiva. Which should not be the case. He has been out of CN for an year and still doesnt know what happened during that time.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you for your comment.

I will tag you also next time.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi friends,

With the next posting, I am introducing some new characters who are not there in the serial.

Dr Amish, Dr Rohan and Dr Mithila are Dr Sai's team mates on the internship. They are together on a rural posting somewhere near GC (I dont know much about that area so please excuse any errors)

Maria Ma'am is incharge of the govt guest house where the interns stay.

Sukhiram is the cook at the same guest house.

Dhaniram is the cook at the police guest house which is next door. He and Sukhiram are friends.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice concept

Please continue soon

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