SS: It has been always you! - Page 4

Beautiful parts🤩. Waiting for the 5th part

Good chapter. As much as I agree they need space away from each other to kinda understand what they mean to each other n each others pov- I personally dont think Virat should have asked for a transfer on the show or here- maybe a short term assignment. But somehow i do see his decision to leave Sai as abandonment. He is the only thing that binds her to CN. Without him she really wont feel comfortable staying in CN. She's not considered family by anyone- even aai/mohit/shivani all only see her as an extension of Virat not as a separate person. So for him to just up n leave without preparing her for this adequately is unfair. She is already alone. All she has is him. Even if Virat feels like Sai doesn't love him, he knows he is very important in her life, if not for anything else- atleast coz he is literally the only person in her life that she is officially tied to. All of us are asked to name a next of kin- for virat he has parents, aunts/uncles, cousins, and spouse. For Sai- its ONLY a spouse- virat.

Originally posted by: Nja91

Good chapter. As much as I agree they need space away from each other to kinda understand what they mean to each other n each others pov- I personally dont think Virat should have asked for a transfer on the show or here- maybe a short term assignment. But somehow i do see his decision to leave Sai as abandonment. He is the only thing that binds her to CN. Without him she really wont feel comfortable staying in CN. She's not considered family by anyone- even aai/mohit/shivani all only see her as an extension of Virat not as a separate person. So for him to just up n leave without preparing her for this adequately is unfair. She is already alone. All she has is him. Even if Virat feels like Sai doesn't love him, he knows he is very important in her life, if not for anything else- atleast coz he is literally the only person in her life that she is officially tied to. All of us are asked to name a next of kin- for virat he has parents, aunts/uncles, cousins, and spouse. For Sai- its ONLY a spouse- virat.

neerja, you just captured the question I had when I started to write this chapter! I do have some explanation on why I chose this plot which I plan to explain in the end. If I tell my ideas now, it will make people to see the story with my notions. So saved it for later.

@bold hang on to that idea. My explanation also starts from there :)

Awesome story telling. Very touching. Virat did the right thing by leaving away. You showed how Sai did not initiate talk like she decided to and still waited for his explanation about cafe scene. Now she in his absence will learn that it should be his word that she has to keep faith in but not of Pakhi. She already started in a right way. Waiting for the next part and thanks for ontinuation ...

Originally posted by: sadiltl

i didn’t want to change what happened. As we discussed earlier he is what he is! He did this terrible thing. What to do! He can only realize and regret. I wanted to show a Virat who thinks before acting. The earlier version of virat who made informed decisions. May be that would avoid lot of terrible mistakes he does in anger.

Yes yes...I understand. I was trying to escape into fantasy😆. Just read the second part......he is atleast introspecting on his actions and feeling guilty about it.

Going to read the third part now.

Wow it's beautiful written 🤩

They need space

Waiting part 5

Loved it❤️

Very beautifully written! 🤗

You have written it soo beautifully❤️

It is soo sensible❤️

I loved it❤️

Update soon

Beautiful ♥️

Eagerly waiting to read what Sai will do

The realisation was emotional

Update soon

Happy writing

Both parts are equally beautiful and amazing 😍😍

I am dying to read more ❤️❤️