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Posted: 4 years ago
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By part 3 I was bawling my eyes out.😭😭 I am one of those people who wanted Samrat to see the cafe kaand and not just Sai because of this quote below.🥺

"Virat was afraid at what new tamasha was going to take place once he reached home. He had made up him mind that to protect Pakhi’s reputation and to make sure Samrat does not get hurt, he was going to deny all the allegation that Sai was going to throw at him and Pakhi. He was confident that no one will believe in what Sai had to say anyways."

This is such a typical "Virat" behaviour; protecting Pakhi at all cost even if meant throwing Sai under the bus. 😡🤡


I really wanted someone to write on this and was about to request as well but saw this before. You wrote it so flawlessly. Loved every bit of it. Thank you so much not just for writing this but for writing it brilliantly as well. Also, I know am being greedy but, can we have some bonus chapters on Sai's healing process etc and the role her "pariwaar" plays in it. Also, Virat's redemption. 😃 Please do tag me in your future stories.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Dee10

By part 3 I was bawling my eyes out.😭😭 I am one of those people who wanted Samrat to see the cafe kaand and not just Sai because of this quote below.🥺

"Virat was afraid at what new tamasha was going to take place once he reached home. He had made up him mind that to protect Pakhi’s reputation and to make sure Samrat does not get hurt, he was going to deny all the allegation that Sai was going to throw at him and Pakhi. He was confident that no one will believe in what Sai had to say anyways."

This is such a typical "Virat" behaviour; protecting Pakhi at all cost even if meant throwing Sai under the bus. 😡🤡


I really wanted someone to write on this and was about to request as well but saw this before. You wrote it so flawlessly. Loved every bit of it. Thank you so much not just for writing this but for writing it brilliantly as well. Also, I know am being greedy but, can we have some bonus chapters on Sai's healing process etc and the role her "pariwaar" plays in it. Also, Virat's redemption. 😃 Please do tag me in your future stories.


Thank you Dee for your words. I am an amateur writer.

@bold: over the weekend I am working on dedicating sometime to write. Will work on writing something on Sai's healing and role her brothers will play. And let's see how Virat's redemption takes place.


I will tag you for sure.🥱


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I too want others in family besides Sai seeing Virat and Pakhi together. And I know we will never get that on screens..So in my story I wanted to at least add that angle. Samarat, Sunny, Mohit and Shivanibua seeing them..aur sone pe suhaga, video of pavitra didi and her pavetra rishita with her bff devar also being captured on video.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Tali_99


Thank you Dee for your words. I am an amateur writer.

@bold: over the weekend I am working on dedicating sometime to write. Will work on writing something on Sai's healing and role her brothers will play. And let's see how Virat's redemption takes place.


I will tag you for sure.🥱


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I too want others in family besides Sai seeing Virat and Pakhi together. And I know we will never get that on screens..So in my story I wanted to at least add that angle. Samarat, Sunny, Mohit and Shivanibua seeing them..aur sone pe suhaga, video of pavitra didi and her pavetra rishita with her bff devar also being captured on video.

@bold:

Please don't be so humble. I am by no means flattering you. Honestly, you are a brilliant writer. I have come across some of the best writers on IF. You guys truly know how to weave magic with words. I have zero creative bone in me when it comes to expression. I guess am Virat in that case (although not as dumb but still...lol) smiley37smiley37But honestly and in all seriousness, you are a phenomenal writer. keep writing and keep entertaining. Thank you for sharing your beautiful stories with everyone ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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such beautiful writing!! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!!❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#35

loved the five back to back update....now will read more

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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

Read all the parts in a go & it's wonderful! Waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#37

Wow, this is really good and heart wrenching... Even I want sai and virat to stay away from eachother physically so that they get to know how much they love eachother, and also pakhi should get exposed, virat still protecting her doesn't make sense , this is so good, plz write next chapter

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Very emotional and heartbreaking 💔 story

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Bonus Chapter Updated (Page 5)

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