Andar hi andar-a Poem

The fifth and sixth stanza 🥺

Loved this so much ❤️

Wow ...again another sixer

The way u have portrayed turmoil of a person at cross roads

The third line is first stanza 🥰 its true we alwys get lost in a maze creates by us in our minds

3 and 4th in 3 th stanza about forgetting to fly to horizon using our own wings .. showing the mental chains that are holding back...very beautiful metaphor

5 stanza itself is soul stirring ..

Beautiful beautiful beautiful ❤️

Kinda looking inward, self searching of a women trying to find ray of hope

Absolutely beautiful Cheeku!!!

So beautiful and emotional.

Ye wali poem thi.

Double post thi. Ye wali poem hai.

I have never felt a poem so close to my sentiments as this one. Felt like every stanza was targeting the chaos that is going on in my life. By the time I reached the end of it, I had tear stains on my cheek and I didn't even realize I was crying. You are an amazing poet Cheeku. Moreso, because what you write is so relatable; so human. Thank you for existing, you adorable stranger ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Dee10

I have never felt a poem so close to my sentiments as this one. Felt like every stanza was targeting the chaos that is going on in my life. By the time I reached the end of it, I had tear stains on my cheek and I didn't even realize I was crying. You are an amazing poet Cheeku. Moreso, because what you write is so relatable; so human. Thank you for existing, you adorable stranger ❤️❤️

Thankyou so much🤗

This poem is perfect for Sai. She's lost in her own web that she's created by herself.