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Posted: 4 years ago
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What if Sai had tried to tell Virat about Pulkit and his kidnapping going against Pulkit’s request? They could have showed Virat unable to trust what she was saying and they could have shown her failing to prove it. Kaku and gang can keep defeating all of Sai’s attempts. At the end, Virat starts to completely believe that Pulkit is poisoning Sai’s mind and turning her against his family. He then refuses to even reinvestigate Pulkit’s matter saying he has understood who Pulkit is and no investigation is needed to know his true colours.

Sai is then left with no other option than helping Pulkit to get married to Devi. I wanted Pulkit to come home and take Devi away. What if Pulkit comes home and gets married to Devi in front of everyone and Sai helps him to enter the CN? They could have may be showed that Pulkit takes Devi away in front of everyone with the help of NGO or neighbours while Virat was stuck in his duty somewhere. Virat then returns home and gets mad at Sai to have helped Pulkit. Or Virat can even enter the house when Pulkit is about to take Devi from the house and Sai supports Pulkit l, standing up against Virat along with the NGO people and the neighbours.

Virat can then tell Sai that he has nothing to do with her. He can say that he can’t let her stay as his wife after she helped Pulkit and spoilt the life of his sister. He can tell her that he will continue to take her responsibility but can’t stick to the marriage anymore. Sai can then move out of the house refusing to accept any help from him.

She then goes to GC to withdraw her Dad’s money and to get his pension too. They could have then showed that Virat comes to know of the truth about kidnapping when he overhears Omi talking to the kidnapper over phone. Omi wouldn’t have expected Virat to come to his room or something like that. Virat would have gone to Omi’s room to may be get drinks from Omi or something 🤣🤣. I don’t know. Anyway the kidnapping truth comes out and Virat then questions these people who would fail to answer him. He would then continue with his investigation, tries to gather documents from Pulkit’s college and a few other places. He then comes to know that Pulkit had given Devi’s name as spouse in many places. He can then be shown tracking Omi’s phone and catching hold of the kidnapper. Truth comes out, he would realise that Sai was right in her allegations against his family and also about Pulkit. They could have then shown him rushing to meet Sai at Pulkit’s place only to come to know that she is in GC.

Not sure how the story is 🙈. Had another idea, will share that too sometime 🤣.

Edited by laksh - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: laksh

What if Sai had tried to tell Virat about Pulkit and his kidnapping going against Pulkit’s request? They could have showed Virat unable to trust what she was saying and they could have shown her failing to prove it. Kaku and gang can keep defeating all of Sai’s attempts. At the end, Virat starts to completely believe that Pulkit is poisoning Sai’s mind and turning her against his family. He then refuses to even reinvestigate Pulkit’s matter saying he has understood who he is and no investigation is needed to know his true colours.

Sai is then left with no other option than helping Pulkit to get married to Devi. I want Pulkit to come home and take Devi away. What is Pulkit comes home and gets married to Devi in front of everyone and Sai helps him to enter the CN.? They could have may be showed that Pulkit takes Devi away in front of everyone with the help of NGO or neighbours while Virat was stuck in his duty somewhere. Virat then returns home and gets mad at Sai to have helped Pulkit. Or he can even enter the house when Pulkit is about to take Devi from the house and Sai supports Pulkit standing up against Virat along with the NGO people and the neighbours.

Virat can then tell Sai that he has nothing to do with her and he can’t let her stay as his wife after she helped Pulkit and spoilt the life of the daughter of the house. He can tell her that he will continue to take her responsibility but can’t stick to the marriage anymore. Sai can then move out of the house denying to accept any help from him.

She then goes to GC to withdraw her Dad’s money and to get his pension too. They could have then showed that Virat comes to know of the truth about kidnapping when he overhears Omi talking that kidnapper over phone. Omi wouldn’t have expected Virat to come to his room. Virat would have gone to Omi’s room to may be get drinks from Omi or something 🤣🤣. I don’t know. Anyway the kidnapping truth comes out and Virat then questions these people who would fail to answer him. He would then continue with his investigation, tries to gather documents from Pulkit’s college and a few other places and comes to know that Pulkit had given Devi’s name as spouse in many places. He can then be shown tracking Omi’s phone and catching hold of the kidnapper. Truth comes out, he would realise that Sai was right in her allegations against his family and also about Pulkit. They could have then shown him rushing to meet Sai at Pulkit’s place only to come to know that she is in GC.

Not sure how the story is 🙈. Had another idea, will share that too sometime 🤣.

Loved it so much ❤️

This is kind of what I wanted. I don't mind Virat's and Sai's flaws playing a role in the MU and separation....and Chavans making use of SaiRat's weaknesses to their advantage.

I wanted Sai and Virat to be both wrong and right....not stupid as they were in that track.

I've wanted to write a re-imaging along this basic framework for along time. But I always get stuck at what to do with Harini. Because Sai can easily prove Harini's parentage by dna testing.


Do write about the other idea you had too....❤️

Edited by nethraa_99 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: nethraa_99

They keep showing these kinds of kaands by Virat to bring some progress in SaiRat relationship..... mainly clear Virat's misunderstanding and to make Virat mellow down. I hate that.😡

Couldn't it be done some other way? Yes, sometimes a shakeup is needed in a relationship... especially when the communication is poor. Why did it have to be domestic abuse?

True. I don’t know why they chose this way. I think the writer who wrote KD might have seen a lot of real life instances like this and she wanted to create some social awareness through it too. If only she had shown people making these mistakes to face repercussions of their actions too. All this looks quite real and is quite possible in many households. There are men who love their wife but they also deal with such betrayal or love for their family in ways like this. Yes, it was to create a misunderstanding and then clear it, but this is how some people react while misunderstanding and may be she wanted to highlight that. There are people like Virat who are nice, kind, generous but also don’t have any control over their actions when they are in anger. They don’t have control over their emotions and it is very real. Only thing is that they could have mellowed down the ousting by him asking her to leave or his ending it and not show it like him blocking her way or closing the door on her face or not even get bothered when she sits outside his house. There could be people like that but they could have still shown it a little different. It is not that people like Virat are not capable of it. The biggest drawback is that he has no control over his emotions. They could have also shown him feeling restless and checking on her throughout the night even when she was sitting outside the house, they could have shown him feeling restless after he had ousted her. They could have shown him rushing to Devi’s house after Sai returned home after marriage or got him to stay back with Devi too at the mandap. That would have made more sense especially when he was worried about Devi’s safety but instead they showed him to grow mad on Sai to have helped Pulkit. He could have gone mad on her but that should be only after him taking care of Devi I felt.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: laksh

True. I don’t know why they chose this way. I think the writer who wrote KD might have seen a lot of real life instances like this and she wanted to create some social awareness through it too. If only she had shown people making these mistakes to face repercussions of their actions too. All this looks quite real and is quite possible in many households. There are men who love their wife but they also deal with such betrayal or love for their family in ways like this. Yes, it was to create a misunderstanding and then clear it, but this is how some people react while misunderstanding and may be she wanted to highlight that. There are people like Virat who are nice, kind, generous but also don’t have any control over their actions when they are in anger. They don’t have control over their emotions and it is very real. Only thing is that they could have mellowed down the ousting by him asking her to leave or his ending it and not show it like him blocking her way or closing the door on her face or not even get bothered when she sits outside his house. There could be people like that but they could have still shown it a little different. It is not that people like Virat are not capable of it. The biggest drawback is that he has no control over his emotions. They could have also shown him feeling restless and checking on her throughout the night even when she was sitting outside the house, they could have shown him feeling restless after he had ousted her. They could have shown him rushing to Devi’s house after Sai returned home after marriage or got him to stay back with Devi too at the mandap. That would have made more sense especially when he was worried about Devi’s safety but instead they showed him to grow mad on Sai to have helped Pulkit. He could have gone mad on her but that should be only after him taking care of Devi I felt.

Agree with everything you said.❤️That would make Virat more humane.

But they should have shown the repercussions as well....as you have said.

Edited by nethraa_99 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: laksh

True. I don’t know why they chose this way. I think the writer who wrote KD might have seen a lot of real life instances like this and she wanted to create some social awareness through it too. If only she had shown people making these mistakes to face repercussions of their actions too. All this looks quite real and is quite possible in many households. There are men who love their wife but they also deal with such betrayal or love for their family in ways like this. Yes, it was to create a misunderstanding and then clear it, but this is how some people react while misunderstanding and may be she wanted to highlight that. There are people like Virat who are nice, kind, generous but also don’t have any control over their actions when they are in anger. They don’t have control over their emotions and it is very real. Only thing is that they could have mellowed down the ousting by him asking her to leave or his ending it and not show it like him blocking her way or closing the door on her face or not even get bothered when she sits outside his house. There could be people like that but they could have still shown it a little different. It is not that people like Virat are not capable of it. The biggest drawback is that he has no control over his emotions. They could have also shown him feeling restless and checking on her throughout the night even when she was sitting outside the house, they could have shown him feeling restless after he had ousted her. They could have shown him rushing to Devi’s house after Sai returned home after marriage or got him to stay back with Devi too at the mandap. That would have made more sense especially when he was worried about Devi’s safety but instead they showed him to grow mad on Sai to have helped Pulkit. He could have gone mad on her but that should be only after him taking care of Devi I felt.

Sorry for my delay in responding! Kept getting distracted. This is a very interesting conversation. @bolded: Laksh, I couldn't agree more. You have summed up why I think the ousting kaand was perfectly within Virat's character. Nethra, I saw that in the SM thread, you wrote that these actions made Virat look inhumane to you. I actually thought, in a twisted way, they made him look painfully human for reasons that Laksh has described here. People are imperfect and they do things that can seem entirely out of character for them. That is the tragedy of human nature... Building on what she has already said, the one overpowering emotion Virat felt in that moment was betrayal by not just the love of his life, but also by the person that he placed in entire faith in. And, no matter how unjustifiable his actions were or how noble Sai's efforts were, to some extent, the betrayal he felt was valid. Sai, regardless of her reasons, kept him in the dark about her entire plan. While I agree that I would have liked to see him checking up on Sai when she was sitting outside or even seeing him restless, to understand this, I think we have to compare it with the 2 other times he has blacked out like this. During the Pulkit lunch drama, aai snapped him out of his trance. She helped him understand Sai's perspective and that he overreacted. During the Ajinkya drama, Sai's accident immediately snapped him out. But during the ousting kaand, he couldn't be snapped out until he got to the bottom of the matters. Had he learned that Sai had fainted outside or something of that regard had happened, I can guarantee that his immediate fear for her life would have overpowered all other emotions, and he would have gone running outside. In terms of why he didn't go check on Devi that very night... I attribute this to 2 things. The first and foremost is again, that he was in a trance of such strong emotions...Sai heightens all of his feelings, so in that moment, the betrayal and hurt he was feeling towards Sai was even greater than what he was feeling towards Devi. And, the second reason... he still did not have any proof. So perhaps he wanted to wait until he had evidence..but, due to this emotional state, I find the first reason more convincing.

Two scenes that I found particularly powerful during this drama were firstly the way he walks away after saying that Sai was just a bad dream... a single tear falls from his eyes and he wipes it away. The second one was when he drops the bangles and tells Sai to leave... he cannot even look at her...because he knows, that if he does, he will break. This is why I keep saying that there are 2 sides to him that are constantly at odds..even in his moments when he appears to be entirely blacked out, you can still see the love he has for Sai peeping through. This seems contradictory because if one is blacked out, then they are quite literally having an out of body experience, which is what I understand Virat to go through due to him bottling up his emotions and having no control over them. But, even during these experiences, his concern for Sai cannot seem to go away completely...

Edited by tptwi - 4 years ago

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