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Posted: 4 years ago
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Cheeks... I'm left shaken, truly.

Padhna hai baar baar kuch bhi likhne se pehle... I read, and re-read and watched again... and the portrayal of hurt haunts.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Ohhh ..you are the new avtar Cheeku? I didn't realise😆


Loved your poem👍🏼

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Jooni, you are just so talented. No one can beat you and your poems, they touch the heart.

And totally agree with what you have written 😳

P.S.: Can you tag me as well to poems ❤️

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It was such a beautiful poem. And, you call it lame? Are you serious?

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This is wonderful ♥️ Loving it. How did you change their interaction into a beautiful poem? It was like a musical drama. Fantastic! 👏


So basically my point is...


"The poem which deserves fame

Should never be labelled as lame" 👍😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: scarlett22

Ohhh ..you are the new avtar Cheeku? I didn't realise😆


Loved your poem👍🏼

Haaw. Did you miss the post where I declared my new name🤣


Thankyou😳😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Jooni, you are just so talented. No one can beat you and your poems, they touch the heart.

And totally agree with what you have written 😳

P.S.: Can you tag me as well to poems ❤️

Thankyou Shristhi😳😳

I love your words for my poems❤️

Bold: I surely will Shristhi😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

It was such a beautiful poem. And, you call it lame? Are you serious?

Maybe it's not lame🤣

Thankyou😳😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: vivpri

This is wonderful ♥️ Loving it. How did you change their interaction into a beautiful poem? It was like a musical drama. Fantastic! 👏


So basically my point is...


"The poem which deserves fame

Should never be labelled as lame" 👍😃

Thankyou vivpri❤️

I just tried😆

The lines in bold made me go awww...

Italics:😳😳😳😳

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