OS - The arms that hold me_ Note on Page 7 - Page 5

Originally posted by: AparnaRenu

Abe O!

Look who is talking!

Chup chap likho!

Your teda humour is something I can never match!

You do the emotional, romantic one.

I'll do the tedha humour wala😆

How's that?

We'll have fun. One idea, two takes. What say😉

Originally posted by: Ninabarbie

What an absolutely brilliant and and heart touching OS Aparna 😍❤. You are spinning heart touching magic through your words and I am absolutely in love with each and every word. Coz they have touched my heart so much 💗💗.

😳 Aww. thanks!

When I first read those few lines from "A Parent's Heart", I couldn't help myself but go back and read the whole poem once again. And then when I was reading the OS, I felt like you were beautifully describing the rest of that poem through your story.

That poem is love! And Virat appeared when I read it again after years... it is beautiful balance that he plays, actually... the care and affection as well as the love and leashed passion 😳

First thing I loved about the OS was how that possible awkward convo took a turn to that deep and meaningful conversation. That image of him sitting on the arm chair and her on the floor crossed legged, like the child she still is in her heart and soul, beautifully painted a picture of a guidance figure and a curious child to me. The tenderness and understanding that flowed through the entire conversation was so heartwarming and heart touching.

Exactly what I was trying to portray... this made me happy!

To Sai, Virat plays many roles in her life's. A life partner, guidance figure, a guardian, a mentor and some what of a friend as well. Here, from the way Virat address the issue and makes her understand it, how he gives his undivided attention and time to her and that protective streak, brings out the guardian and guidance figure in him, which in turn reminds Sai of her abba. And just like how she used to be with her father, she blurts out everything, she complaints and vents out her problems and frustrations to Virat. Basically, she becomes herself around Virat since the centre of her universe has now shifted from her Abba to Virat. What I felt was, no Sai is not replacing Virat in her Abba's place. But the similarities she see between them when he is in this mode blurs the edges and in situations like this she sees her Abba through him. She sees somewhat of a "parent's heart" through this side of Virat.

I love that you've written this!

She lucked out, she really did... in getting him. Because, he, out of all the 3 boys of the family, is the one with that paternal streak most in him, the protectiveness, and the calm understanding. The fun side that was dormant is being brought out by his wife... but without this calm man in her life, Sai would have been lost!

And that transition from a caring guidance figure to a teasing partner was so smooth and light hearted after a such a deep convo it felt so natural. Like they returned back to their playful selves.

That what I love most about these two... the serious and the hurtful smoothly make way for humour and fun.

And take it from me, a sense of humour is what keeps a marriage afloat!

And if I was grinning when Virat was in angry husband mode when he heard of guys teasing Sai, I was out right laughing at Virat's misery when he thought he will have to explain teenage hormones and stuff to Sai 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Imagine that convo!!!

I have, and will come out as an OS later...

All in all, I really loved this OS Aparna ❤❤❤. It was SUPERB and I loved it to the bits. Great job 🤞🏻🤞🏻🤞🏻🤞🏻.

Ps- And I do understand your fascination with inanimate objects Aparna. Coz most of the time, they are the silent witnesses to so many untold stories and buried feelings ❤❤.

Oh wow!

Thanks for taking the time to write so much, that too straight from your heart! 🤗

Now, I am waiting for you to read the other ones I tagged you in! 😳

Dear all,

Thanks for the wonderful comments!

For those curious, the armchair made an appearance in the SS - A Doctor's Husband

Check it out!!!

Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

bold: those are not ramblings. Those are like waves of an ocean. A still ocean is beautiful but the waves add adventure to it. If you try to grab the waves, you won't catch anything, but if you just look at it, you will notice both the depth as well as the beauty in it. This is your magic ✨✨

You pamper me too much...

and it is your love that flows when you write things like this, Cheeku! 😳❤️

Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

ok. Let's do it. The mirror idea.

You do the emotional, romantic one.

I'll do the tedha humour wala😆

How's that?

We'll have fun. One idea, two takes. What say😉

Puuuurrrfect!!!!!

Yes!!!!!!

We're on, babe!

❤️❤️❤️

Alright. So let's chalk out a plan. How are we gonna do it. Maybe in the DM😉

Originally posted by: AparnaRenu

Oh wow!

Thanks for taking the time to write so much, that too straight from your heart! 🤗

Now, I am waiting for you to read the other ones I tagged you in! 😳

I really love reading your stories and they really make me emotional most of the time tbh. 🙈🙈🙈

And I would also like to apologise for not commenting on the rest of the tagged posts yet. Work has been so hectic and some personal stuff are going on too. But I will try my best to read the rest and comment too 😁😁😁.

Annnnddddd.........about that other OS about Virat explaining birds and bees to Sai...... I'M TOTALLY IN..😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎. Pls do tag me when you post it 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 The patience and the facade and the poker face he will have to maintain......... THAT WILL BE SOOOOOOOOO FUN 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Waiting for your next OS/FF eagerly. please write soon!

Originally posted by: Nja91

Waiting for your next OS/FF eagerly. please write soon!

Neerja, you're the best motivator one can ask for!!

🤗

Several are in the pipeline... kal tak mostly

Aparna ji, please write another OS/FF na.... waiting for all the things that in progress to come to fruition soon. Eagerly waiting to read!