Sairat SS - Mujhe aapse shaadi nahi karni pt5 pg18 - Page 7

Originally posted by: laksh

Thanks 😍

You do agree with Sai, don't you?

😂😂 I am just thinking if I should wrap it once Virat and the villagers drop the idea of getting her forcefully married. I could put it on hold at that point and then pick it up later once I finish the other ffs. What do you want?

you can maybe end it with virat and villagers dropping the idea of marriage. your other ff can be considered as continuation to this right?

purely my opinion, will be superb happy to read further if you wish to continue.

Originally posted by: raji02

which place are you in? i am in canada and its been 2 weeks now that day light savings ended for us.

no worries . have a good sleep and give us a superb update with fresh mind.

Thanks dear, that is very sweet of you. I live in UK.

I have already started to write, let me see ❤❤

Originally posted by: laksh

Thanks 😍

You do agree with Sai, don't you?

😂😂 I am just thinking if I should wrap it once Virat and the villagers drop the idea of getting her forcefully married. I could put it on hold at that point and then pick it up later once I finish the other ffs. What do you want?

Yes I do agree with Sai. It makes sense :) I forgot to mention that in the earlier post

Originally posted by: raji02

you can maybe end it with virat and villagers dropping the idea of marriage. your other ff can be considered as continuation to this right?

purely my opinion, will be superb happy to read further if you wish to continue.

Exactly 😊

That was my plan, other ff might not be a continuation to this because in that Virat had not told Sai about his promise. Their conversation never reached that point. It was a NO from her side and he and the villagers failed to convince her. So he never spoke to her anout his promise. Just took her with him to Nagpur.

Originally posted by: notaquitter

Yes I do agree with Sai. It makes sense :) I forgot to mention that in the earlier post

The reason I asked was because that would mean his proposal is declined 😂😂

But yes, as you have said future main zaroor el naya story shuru ho sakta hai. I had a few ideas but then thought let me first update what I have started already regularly and then think of a new one.

I can ofcourse put this on hold and then restart it 😆 or if I am in mood, continue 😂😂

Originally posted by: notaquitter

Haha that would be good. You can also fast forward a few years and show Sai and Virat in love but not confessed. And Sai proposing marriage this time, and continue the story from there 😂😅🙈

Here Sai moves to Nagpur based on her own wish. Reaches out to Virat and they form a friendship which slowly progresses over the years ( maybe 1 and a half ) . This needn’t be elaborated much but the focus can be more on after the fast forward.

Sai after Virat will be interesting to see, virat can overcome his promise without Sai’s influence and realise who Pakhi truely is for him. Etc etc

Just a suggestion but ultimately authors decision :)

Originally posted by: notaquitter

Here Sai moves to Nagpur based on her own wish. Reaches out to Virat and they form a friendship which slowly progresses over the years ( maybe 1 and a half ) . This needn’t be elaborated much but the focus can be more on after the fast forward.

Sai after Virat will be interesting to see, virat can overcome his promise without Sai’s influence and realise who Pakhi truely is for him. Etc etc

Just a suggestion but ultimately authors decision :)

Nice, sure. Will give it a thought as when to start it.

Sounds good ❤😍

Sai is amazing. Loved all her dialogues and how she shut him up. Ab either let her be or milke doondo uske liye ladka.

Ab Virat kya decide karega?🤣

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Don't stop writing.

You can keep this in parallel to alternate GHK Story.

What I want to see is in case you are looking for ideas: (not all but maybe some of it)

Everyone accepts not to get her married and let her study in hostel.

Virat stays back in GC until medical results come.

Sai gets full scholarship and her hostel is assigned

Virat helps her with initial fees and moving there

Then he goes home and tells everyone about everything that happened, this time they are fine with how he handled Sai and are also grateful to KJ for saving his life.

Pakhi thinks she will get Virat back now he is in Chavan Nivas Virat is just friendly with her.

But he is going on with his life. Virat is busy with police duty and hardly gets any free time. When he has any time, he is playing football with friends, or meeting Sai with some bahana without telling at home.

Pakhi unsure what she is doing there, finds it difficult to be bahu, but tries to be in good books of Kaku and tries pushing her parents to get Chavans married her to Virat now that Samrat is MiA.

In the meantime, Sai ends up saving Ninad when he has heart attack in some public place, temple or shop, and takes him hospital without knowing it's his dad. That's when everyone meets Sai for first time.

Originally posted by: sukri

Sai is amazing. Loved all her dialogues and how she shut him up. Ab either let her be or milke doondo uske liye ladka.

❤❤ thanks dear 😍

Ab Virat kya decide karega?🤣

🤣🤣Mujhe bahut mazaa aa raha hai

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Don't stop writing.

You can keep this in parallel to alternate GHK Story.

Sure 😆

What I want to see is in case you are looking for ideas: (not all but maybe some of it)

Everyone accepts not to get her married and let her study in hostel.

Virat stays back in GC until medical results come.

Sai gets full scholarship and her hostel is assigned

Virat helps her with initial fees and moving there

This was my plan if I continued to write it

Good to know that you too thought of the same ❤

Then he goes home and tells everyone about everything that happened, this time they are fine with how he handled Sai and are also grateful to KJ for saving his life.

This sounds great

Pakhi thinks she will get Virat back now he is in Chavan Nivas Virat is just friendly with her.

Interesting ❤❤, I hadn't planned or even thought about Pakhi. I had planned to keep Virat friendly but her thinking she will get back seems interesting.

But he is going on with his life. Virat is busy with police duty and hardly gets any free time. When he has any time, he is playing football with friends, or meeting Sai with some bahana without telling at home.

Haan, this was something I was planning to do, didn't think of his family feeling grateful to KJ part

Pakhi unsure what she is doing there, finds it difficult to be bahu, but tries to be in good books of Kaku and tries pushing her parents to get Chavans married her to Virat now that Samrat is MiA.

Oh wow 😍, even more interesting

In the meantime, Sai ends up saving Ninad when he has heart attack in some public place, temple or shop, and takes him hospital without knowing it's his dad. That's when everyone meets Sai for first time.

This sounds great ❤

Thanks for the comments dear ❤❤

Awesome loved it plz update next part soon.