Pyare Lamhe -Collectn of SaiRat OS- OS#2 - A Moment Like This - Pg 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I'm running late for laboratory. will drop in here later!

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Awesome 😍😍


First hi itna accha tha to aage ke liye to badi besabri se wait krna hoga


Update soon 🤩🤩🤩

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Posted: 4 years ago
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@ Neerja - thank you! :) Glad you liked it.


@ sikri - thanks :)


@ jalebi-bhai - thank you so much! :) Will be putting up more here, so do keep checking this thread.


@ Byun - will wait for your review.


@ Nilmi - thank you


@Cheerless - thanks! I hope you would like the ones following this too. Just a note, they would all be individual stand alone OSes. Will put the next one up soon.


@ALL - Thank you so much for taking the time out to read and leaving your comments. Your comments makes us writers write more and post more. Means a lot, thanks!


@Silent readers who left me a lot of likes - Thank you for reading.


Will post the next OS once I am done with it.


Thanks.

Mridz

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Posted: 4 years ago
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You have me all gushy, Mridzy!

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@AraBear - Thanks Kiara 🤗 gush away! 😁

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Posted: 4 years ago
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The intensity of the love between these two is so evident here! Your play with your words here is so spot on! It definately just hit my taste bud and I'm loving it! I can inagine the scene in my head where he was showering her with kisses from behind when she just leaned on him.

Using their expressive eyes for interaction has always been a thing that attracts me towards them. You used that well too.

Marriage Anniversary is a day which is solely for the husband and wife and believe me, nothing is more enjoyable than having some peaceful intimate moment with your partner on that occasion - I can certainly assurr you that.


Overall, really really enjoyable OS. I am certainly looking forward of your writing.


Happy writing!


Cheers♥

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Posted: 4 years ago
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As much as you enjoyed writing this


You can't imagine how much I have enjoyed reading this 😃


It was beautiful

Please write more 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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God! This is beautiful ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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hey beautiful writer!

I'm missing you!

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Originally posted by: ByunBaekhyun

The intensity of the love between these two is so evident here! Your play with your words here is so spot on! It definately just hit my taste bud and I'm loving it! I can inagine the scene in my head where he was showering her with kisses from behind when she just leaned on him.

Using their expressive eyes for interaction has always been a thing that attracts me towards them. You used that well too.

Marriage Anniversary is a day which is solely for the husband and wife and believe me, nothing is more enjoyable than having some peaceful intimate moment with your partner on that occasion - I can certainly assurr you that.


Overall, really really enjoyable OS. I am certainly looking forward of your writing.


Happy writing!


Cheers♥


Aww thanks!! :) Definitely - marriage anniversary is so special and few moments with your partner is what the heart desires.

Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

Working on the next one - should be up in a day or two

Originally posted by: luvzindagi


As much as you enjoyed writing this


You can't imagine how much I have enjoyed reading this 😃


It was beautifulsmiley42


Please write more smiley31


Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it. Will definitely write more!



Thank you! :)


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God! This is beautiful smiley27



Thank you very much! :)

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