Fan Fic: Pyaar Ho Gaya: Name: P 2: Pg 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Welcome Friends,

Here is a FF from me.

Storyline:

What happens, if 2 induviuals who hate each other to the core and dont even want to see each other get married to each other?

Well, this is just what happens when Lakshmi gets married to Karan on her dad's wish.

And here we see, how Lakshmi & Karan fall in love.

Characaters -

Sharma Clan -

Karan Sharma(Yuvraaj Malhotra) -

24 Year old. He is a total flirt and hates Lakshmi Garodia the most, why? He himself doesnt know but he just hates her from not childhood, but from when he met her on the coach in LA. He has had 100 Girlfriends till date.

Ranbir Sharma(Kartik Sabarwal) -

Karan's elder brother. 27 Years of age. He is the strict opposite to Karan and respects women but still has that flirty touch to him.

Menka Sharma -

Karan & Ranbir's mom. She is nice, really nice and understands Karan & Ranbir very much.

Rithmay Sharma -

Karan & Ranbirs dad, who just like thier mom is nice but sometimes can be strict seeing Karan flirting.

Rahul Sharma(Sid Makkar) -

He is 25 and very nice like Ranbir. He always saves Karan & Ranbir from getting into trouble & will play the role of cupid in Karan & Lakshmi's lives.

Garodia Clan -

Lakshmi Garodia(Twinkle Bajpai) -

She is 23 and is nice and very religous but at the same time, up to date and modern. She cant stand Karan for 1 minute & hates him, but at the same time, feels jealous of his girlfriends.

Durga Garodia -

She is Lakshmi's 26 year old sister who is a proffessional dancer and has a dancing insitute. She is nice and very religous.

Savitri Garodia -

Lakshmi & Durga's mom, she is nice and very supportive. She is always there for her daughters.

Suryakant Garodia -

Lakshmi & Durga's dad. He is nice and can be really angry at his daughters when he finds out that they dont do as per his wish.

Gauri Garodia -

Lakshmi & Durga's 21 year old sister. She is nice and with Rahul makes plan to unite Lakshmi & Karan after they get married.

So how is it? Should I continue?

Edited by *Shifali* - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Updates -

Intro - Pg 1
Part 1: Strangers: Pg 1

Promo/ Preview Updates -

Notes -

Edited by *Shifali* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Please do comment 😳 and tell me how it is.

Love Shifali aka Shifu.

Edited by *Shifali* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Seems really interesting so far Shifu, pls do continue.. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Kruthi*

Seems really interesting so far Shifu, pls do continue.. 😳

Thanks, will continue😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 1 - Strangers

A girl ran after a driving coach and it looked like as if she was running from someone and that someone was behnd her, worried. A guy who was sitting beside the window seat, saw her and got shocked.

Guy: Man, that girl can run.

And walked towards the coach door & opened it and put his hand out for the girl to catch.

Guy: Hurry up or else u will miss the coach.

The girl didnt know that guy, he was a complete stranger to her, but still, she gave him her hand. The guy pulled onto her hand, she could feel him pulling hard, and the strenght in his arms and finally she was on the coach.
They both were standing too close to each other, the guys arms around the girls waist, it looked as if the girl was only on the coach and standing because of him. Suddenly, the driver of the coach stopped the coach and asked the guy & girl to go to their seats.

Driver: Excause me, can u please head to your seats now?

The guy & the girl came out of their dream and head towards their seats. The guy sat down on his seat and the girl didnt know where to sit and suddenly she heard a noise behind her.

Voice: Why dont u sit here?

The girl turns around to find the same guy pointing to the seat beside him. The girl tried to ignore him but finally seeing no other seat aviable, gave up and sat beside the guy. She tried to ingore him as best to her ability as she could.

Guy: I am Karan...Karan Sharma
Girl: So?

This girl had too much additude in her thought Karan. But he didnt care. She was not his type. But there was something, something that attracted him towards her. Something. And much to his "Girl Rules" book that had all the rules he, Karan made up about girls, ignored them and talked to this girl one more time.

Ka: So...what...is...
Girl: Look mister, I am not that type of girl and just cuz u helped me get onto this coach, it doesnt mean that u can be my friend & start yapping away!

As Karan's Rule book suggested, "If I a girl has a lot of attitude and doesnt talk to you and isnt polite than forget her. cuz she obviously isnt your type" "She doesnt suit you" Karans rule book about this gal not suiting him was right. She really didnt suit him. but still, this was no way to talk to him...Karan Sharma.

Ka: Look, if I hadnt helped you on this coach, than u would have stayed running all the time, so please dont teach me how to behave. 1st you learn to behave then come and tell me!

This guy was getting too irritating to her. He didnt even understand that who she was. But at one point, he was right, if he hadnt helped her, than she wouldnt have rode this bus.

Gi: Look, we are complete strangers...so please...LEAVE ME ALONE.
Ka: Chill, just tell me your name atleast! I told u mine!
Gi: I am sorry, but I dont tell my name to strangers and as far as I know, we ARE strangers.

Part 2 -Strangers really?

Edited by *Shifali* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Gr8 job 👏 looking forward to more 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yea really great plz continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: rukhaya

Gr8 job 👏 looking forward to more 😃

Thanks...will continue

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks...will continyue

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