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Posted: 6 months ago
#51

Wow! So many updates. Thank you so much. Very well written story. Geet has worked hard to master her skills and everything has gone to plan with no glitches. Her mission is near the end and I can’t wait for your finale. It’s strange how my sympathy should only be for Geet due to the injustice that her and her family have gone through due to Maan and his parents, but I find my heart going out to Maan. Maan does need this awakening too as he should have done the right thing, if not at 18, then now as a mature adult. I just can’t help feeling sorry for what he is going to endure with Geet’s deception. I really do hope she forgives him at the end, as hard as that may be. Thanks again!

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Posted: 6 months ago
#52

Very intriguing.

A death can destroy a happy family. Life is never the same. Accidents are accidents. What is wrong here is their approach. Its their instinct that they would try to protect their son. But they could not return the lost soul but they could have humility and regrets and thoughtfulness.

Geet is very focused on getting revenge but she is binded in a very important relationship. What about that. She is deceiving. Maan is totally invested emotionally on her. He will be devasted more than any financial loss.

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Posted: 6 months ago
#53

Chapter 7

Surprising and Amazing Chapter

Maan is falling deeply in love with Geet

while all she truly wants is her revenge against Meera


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Posted: 6 months ago
#54

Chapter 8

Veena has come to admire Geet though at times she does get miffed

but on the whole, she truly admires Geet

while Maan is just floored with Geet

for Geet focus is solely on learning everything about Khuranas so their downfall

will be great

however it was Maan that carried guilt of Meera's accident and it's rather sad he

too will be brought down

but will Geet and her parents truly get peace and satisfaction

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Posted: 6 months ago
#55

Chapter 9

Wow Geet has managed to invade both Raj and Veena's computers

managing to get lots of information that will bring the Khuranas down

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Posted: 6 months ago
#56
Read all the chapters in one go…. a superb storyline….I think Maan regrets Meera's death. That incident is eating him from the inside but her very presence makes his life a little easier…..eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 6 months ago
#57

Hi there

how are you?

apologies for late comments


Chapter 3

well Meera's death impacted on Geet and their parents

its sad that Meera never got justice

of cos Geet was determined to Geet revenge and punish Maan

she is indeed oblivious that Maan wanted to take responsibility for his actions

as expected Geet transformed herself

she was clearly aware that the Khuranas were sharp, calculating and dangerous

so Geet ensured that she would outsmart them in all aspects

she certainly groomed herself

Gosh it will be Meera's 6th death anniversary soon

not surprised that Geet also watched Maan Singh Khirana

she knows everything about him

Geet's anger was reasonable

at least she noticed that he was mysterious, quiet and calm

Maan is not like his parents

Geet's life mission is to make the Khuranas pay

no wonder she pursued a career in IT

she sacrificed her passion Art

Geet has everything planned

the Khuranas will never know what hit them

hmm Geet "coincidentally met Maan"

ahh Maan felt warmness and lightness when he met Geet

but she is storm waiting to destroy him

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Posted: 6 months ago
#58

Chapter 4

of cos Maan is intrigued and captivated by Geet

well she has affected him

however Maan is oblivious to Geet's real intentions

so they get to know each other

but she already knows him

Geet played her cards well

Maan's reaction was understandable

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

as expected she subtly steered the convo away from her personal details

she indeed there on a mission

not surprised that he is impressed with her and wants to meet her again

Maan feels lighter and has hope after meeting Geet

unaware that she is there to destroy him

liked the bond between Geet and her parents

her dad's concern was justified

glad that her parents prayed for Meera to be at peace

they also want Geet to be at peace

Geet was certainly happy that her gane is going well

she is just fuelled by revenge

will it be worth it?

hmm its now two months that they are meeting

his parents question was anticipated

they naturally know that Maan has met someone

they obviously want a background check on Geet

can understand why Maan does not drive in the night

great that Maan was direct with Geet

Geet played her part fine

she does have Maan where she wants him

Gosh he confessed his feelings

everything that Geet said is a lie

she is playing with Maan and his emotions

does she feel nothing for him?

how far will she go?

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Posted: 6 months ago
#59

Chapter 5

glad that the trip is helping Rano heal

they have been through a difficult time

the change of scenery has indeed done good to Mohinder and Rano

liked Mohinder teasing Geet

Mohinder's question was reasonable

of cos Geet could not tell him the truth

she diplomatically responded

agree with Mohinder that Meera would not have wanted this for Geet

Geet is immensely talented artist

well he feels guilty for not being there for Geet

great that she assured him

Mohinder is indeed oblivious that Geet has changed too much after Meera's death

her only quest is revenge

what will her parents feel when they get to know?

Geet is already consumed by the darkness

cannot blame her entirely

after all Raj Khurana's behavior and attitude did this

her anger was justified

so she managed to calm down

everything is going as per plan

ahh Maan reminded his parents that they will be meeting Geet

as expected he does not want them to interrogate and intimidate Geet

Veena's response was anticipated

pleased that Maan stood firm

at least Maan is doing charity

not surprised that he has not forgotten Meera

nice that he knows that no amount of good deeds will change anything

the guilt will never go away

if only he took responsibility for his actions

Raj and Veena are clearly a powerful couple

dismayed with Raj's taunt

Geet naturally knows everything about her opponents

she did dress to impress

hate how Veena cornered Rano

upset that Raj and Veena ruined Maan's life

Geet's thoughts well portrayed

Maan was eagerly waiting for Geet's arrival

finally she entered the lion's den

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Posted: 6 months ago
#60

Chapter 6

Geet clearly handled her emotions well

finally she meets Raj and Veena

of cos Geet was prepared for this moment

she naturally confident

Raj and Veena through their questions were interrogating Geet

not surprised that Geet managed these questions with ease

Raj's question was anticipated

well Geet lied that she has no family

so she already had her story prepared striking the right cords

as expected she impressed Raj and Veena

she is certainly one step closer to her goal

Maan's concern for Geet was reasonable

but she assured him

Maan is falling deeper in love with Geet

however its all an act for Geet

Geet's thoughts were understandable

at least she felt some guilt

alas this was evaporated thinking about Meera

feeling for Maan

Geet is toying with his emotions

yes what he did was wrong

now Geet is also doing the same

great that Raj and Veena approve of Geet

they gave Maan good advice

liked Maan teasing Geet

sadly Maan's world will be destroyed by Geet

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