MG FF- Silent Whisper- Part 28, Pg 106, Sept 09 - Page 14

Hi Anu, hope you are well. Thanks for the pm and update.

Apologies for late likes and comments

Chapter 3

Superb update… brilliantly written

so the Handas made all the arrangements for the wedding

Maan confusion and suspiciousness was reasonable

alas he agreed to the marriage for his family

of cos Maan and Geet were stunned seeing each other and the wedding mandap

Geet cannot help but drool on Maan

great that his persona also shook her

but she managed to ignore his personality

upset that she assumed that Maan was made presentable with her dad's money

finally they are married however both are still in denial for their own reasons

good that Rano told Geet to be respectful to Maan's family and behave like the daughter in law

Geet will clearly never behave like a typical daughter in law

liked that Mohinder selected Maan as he knows he is special and not cos of Geet's criteria

hate Geet's arrogance

dismayed that she refers to Maan as a middle class man

as expected dadima, Vicky and Anwesha were enamored with Geet

she is clearly happy seeing her effect on them

dismayed that Geet did even interact with them

Maan's parents have already accepted Geet as their daughter in law

well Sandhya noticed that Geet was uncomfortable

at least Geet had the sweets and water that Sandhya offered her

Maan is clearly not interested in the post marriage rituals

Maan was correct that Geet was not interested in this

Maan had a point that he was emotionally blackmailed to marry Geet

Maan's comment was justified that e had to go with Geet

nice that Maan and Geet seemed affected by each other

wow Geet was lost in Maan

hmm Maan found the ring and gave it to Geet

now Maan and Geet are in Bangalore

sad that he had to leave his family

Maan's thoughts well portrayed

angry that Geet thinks that her dad bought Maan with immense money

though her dad denying this she is thinks that her dad said all this so she can respect her middle calls

husband

upset with Geet's thinking

she certainly does not know that Maan has self respect

Maan was taken aback seeing the grandeur of Geet's penthouse

oh no Maan slept on the sofa

Geet is so arrogant

disappointed that Maan is being judged by his clothes

can understand that Maan prefers to spend money on other important stuff

Geet will soon realise what a wonderful person Maan is

glad that Maan demanded to speak to Geet

wonderful that Geet was thinking of Maan...

Geet only thinks about status....

Maan was mesmerized seeing his beautiful wife

loved this confident Maan

Geet was amazed with his confidence

not surprised that he confronted Geet

pleased that he sent Geet straight that he was forced to marry her

they both naturally need to time to proceed with the next step of marriage

will she get to know that Maan never took money from her dad?

they will co-exist as strangers in the same house

how will they get closer?

update soon

Interesting update…

They are married. None of them is interested in it for their own reasons.

She is having her own set of assumptions about him.

Let’s see how their journey will turn out to be?

Oh its so much like back to reading Roothe Piya.. same same vibes ..

So Maan and Geet got married albeit very platonically.. but atleast it’s not as uninteresting as they are trying to make it to be .. there was attraction the moment their eyes met. Both atleast gave some points to the others physical appearance. Maan going as ghar jamai.. bechara for someone so proud all this is not suiting. He kept quite in the beginning but when it felt slightly insulting to him that she allotted a room to him, he showed her all his authority and bossiness. Atleast she knows he’s not some timid person but a male with all attributes of making him so manly - intelligence, good looks, confidence he has everything . May be to fight the attraction she might go wrong 😑 eager for more

Beautiful part Anu dear 😍

Just loved it 🤗

I loved how Geet & Maan are true to themselves at least & are trying to get over all this mess of marriage as soon as possible

Rituals & Post rituals are completely over & in this entire family gathering Geet & Maan got a bit uncomfortable 😣 which was obvious but good that Geet maintained her composure with her in laws at least

So now they have arrived at Bangalore & Maan was bit offended by the attitude that Geet had as a perception .. good they clearly talked about this relationship & finally moved ahead

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗

Beautiful update

The wedding is over ...geet 's mother is great woman though they are rich she doesn't look down on maan 's family ,she is advising her daughter to respect them

Geet is in a illusion that her father paid maan to marry him ...good maan stand for himself when geet didn't talk to him abt the room arrangement at least from now on she will have to talk to him instead of sending her maids

so sad....geet just assumed that her dad bought maan even when he told him he did not....no wonder her parents respect him so much and thought he will be the right person for her...

atleast glad she did not disrepect her inlaws....yes she ignored vicky and annie, but the elders she did not show them attitude....

just hope she does not hurt maan to such an extent that she will loose him...

he can only tolerate so much..

the only reason he married is to keep his parents' wishes....sad also that his own brother and sister dont seem to understand or respect him much....glad that geet's dad showed the mirror to them about their brother...they should know how highly intellectual he is and how much self respect he has....just because he does not dress up or show off does not mean he has no sense of fashion....its just that everything and everyone always came ahead of him...

now at the new place, look at geet already ignoring him and not showing any humanity...glad maan did not put up with that and told her off but in a polite way....

lets see

Originally posted by: bhanu27

Awesome update. The concept is similar to something i read long ago but love this when Geet and Maan role reversal happens. Geet liked how handsome maan looks but in denial thinking her dad paid to groom his looks. Maaneet gets married. Maan is having a separate room instead of being with his wife. Geet is not happy seeing Maan sleeping on the sofa. She warned the houseworker and told to wake maan up. Liked that maan said she could have discussed it with him. This Geet is a wild one. Waiting to see how Maan tames her. Thanks a lot for pm and update. Waiting for next update.

thanks
@bold- not sure of other story but this is sequel of my own story - Roothe piya…which I wrote some 10 yrs back... having rich arrogant Geet and poor innocent Maan.. here he is not innocent but decent.

But of course it will take a different route and capture completely different scenario

Originally posted by: tellyme

thanks
@bold- not sure of other story but this is sequel of my own story - Roothe piya…which I wrote some 10 yrs back... having rich arrogant Geet and poor innocent Maan.. here he is not innocent but decent.

But of course it will take a different route and capture completely different scenario

Originally posted by: bhanu27

Does maan stay in geet's house in the mentioned story? Wow. Roothe piya sounds interesting. Have to catch up.

But I don’t even know if I will be able to even come closer to what I created in Roothe Piya…

https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/2203