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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 12


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Posted: 3 years ago

Fab update

Loved it

Geet s feeling very nervous to meet maan ..

Maan s behaving very differently with geet , geet s not able to bear the difference of maan ...

Both aniee and geet r going to work under maan ..

Don't know how geet s going to bear maan ..

Maan s behaving strictly professional..

Continue soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Such a wonderful wonderful update. I had to take my time, read it again to my satisfaction and then comment .. Loved everything abt it.

Finally Geet goes to work! Her first day, she’s all geared up to meet the Maan she grew up with and took advantage of. How silly she is to imagine Maan would just open his arms for her.

I always wondered how you would present the first scene of their meeting. Like I mentioned in my last comment , would he be angry, or indifferent.. it was so so manly to see Maan not reacting a bit, maintaining so much distance in his voice when he addressed her. He sees her face & managed to not show any recognition, even though internally he has a hundred questions..

he didn’t even have to read her file to know his new joinee was Geet Handa, wondering if she was still a ‘Handa’, & who looked professional & perfect for her age which was 23.4 yrs!!! He is surprised she hasn’t changed her name, & like us he also wonders the same, for her overcharged hormones she must have been married to that Malhotra & atleast had a kid. I’m very curious abt this part of the past.

Geet tries to talk to him, but he showed her place, calling her a fresher who could be intimidated by the MSK.. everything about his behaviour and attitude was so so good and above my expectations!

Annie & Geet meet, & Geet who is already in pain is feeling even worse knowing Annie doesn’t even know her name!! She is jealous to see a glimpse of her Maan with Annie but he was so harsh & indifferent towards her😢
Further learns that she is hardly getting sometime with Maan during training. Looks like we might get to see Geet & Annie bonding more than Maaneet for now.. whatever it is, eagerly desparately waiting for the next… pls pls jaldi

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thanks dear for your detailed and apt analysis on the post… it only motivates me to give better updates..


All my readers who do detailed analysis are my driving factor

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thank you so much .. always coming up with detailed analysis 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

So happy to see you commenting here as well.. I always cherish your analysis 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thanks for always commenting dear.. these are driving factors for my updates 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thank you so much dear for reading and commenting… and in detail 🤗

to your question.. he was asked to keep away and thus he did not keep track f them.. also he is indebted to her family not her… she came as by product of indebt and he had to be at her service ..


If in case he feels indebted, it would be her family .. she in no case

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Posted: 3 years ago

Your one liner comment also so enthusiastic and encouraging.. 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

So look forward to your detailed comment always.. Thank you so much 🤗

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