JUNOON - Pyaar ka... updt Part 100 on pg 148 Jun 26 - Page 20

Part 15

This is not healthy

Geet is still stuck in the past

She is dwelling on things that are not possible instead of just trying to remember the good memories & focusing on her future & making new memories.

Thank you

Geet not liking his interference in her life and he always do that and she hate him

Part – 16

Coming back to the present times…

Maan is in the cabin at KC…

Someone knocks ..

Maan: come in

It’s Geet… what a big surprise?

Maan couldn’t believe it…

She opens the door but hesitates to enter…

Maan: darwaze tak aagayi toh andar aajao na

Geet enters…

Maan just keeps looking at her and admiring her antics as usual…

Maan is lost in her beauty…

Geet adjusts her over coat, what’s wrong with this man? Why does he always look at me like that?

Geet clears her throat….

Geet: hmm hmmmm

Maan: Geet, I was just thinking about us, those times when we used to stay at the Handa house, and those days when we spent together alone, you know, those memories compelled me to stay at the Handa house itself even when you were not there, I’m eagerly waiting for you to come home Geet, I can’t wait any longer, you know it Geet, then why are you doing this?

Geet: I’m here for business

Maan: yes, what can I do for you?

Geet gives him a file….

Maan: ye kya hai?

Ye koi Sharma’s ka file hai..

Iss waqt Maan aaise chote mote kaam mein dhyaan hi nahi detha…

Geet: aap hi dekho?

Maan takes a look without much interest…

Ye sab toh Sasha hi sambal lethi hai aajkal…. Aur issmein koi kaas bhi nahi, ek mamooli ghar hai….

Client ko plan pasand aaya toh bas kaam khatam…

Iss mein Geet ki kya problem ho sakti hai?

Maan: ye toh teek hi lagta hai

Geet: there is a big mistake in this plan

Maan: I don’t think so, you and your over working brains always find fault in everything

Geet: everything is acceptable for you if you benefit from that, mein bhi na, kis aadmi ke paas apna suggestions lekhe aayi thi

Geet turns to leave… but Maan won’t miss this chance to be with her…

He springs up and stops her…

Maan: itna gussa teek nahi hai Geet

Geet turns and stares him…

Maan takes his hand off her…

Maan: bathao toh sahi, kya problem hai?

Geet points out a structural mistake…

As per the plan with that internal courtyard, one part of the structure stood on a weak base, Sasha had copied two designs from the net and merged them into one without considering the basic flaw in the merger…

Maan is impressed… Geet is a brainy, but she uses it for the wrong reasons often.. that too to work against him…

Maan: brilliant Geet, though this would have no problem in the beginning, it would collapse one day in the long run, you saved us from a huge blunder

Maan would have noticed that, but then half the construction would have been done, that would be a loss for KC only…

Maan: KC is really lucky to have you Geet, but as of now I’m not that lucky

Maan keeps looking at her in desperation…. Itna paas ho ke bhi itni dhooriyan? Maan iss dhooriyon ko barsdhast nahi kar sakta….

Maan: ghar toh nahi aaogi? Chalo aaj kahin jaathe haina? A dinner date?

Geet stares him…

Maan: nahi, sirf dinner?

Geet has to accept his small requests else he will find out about her plans, he is already pissed off that she is staying with Pinky… and he would have his doubts too…

Geet: teek hai, But I’ve to get back before 10, uncle is very strict, he’ll keep calling after that

Maan: what? Uncle is out of town na?

Geet: but I’ve to inform him that I’ll be late na? I’m now staying at his house, so he has his responsibility

Maan: unse kaho mere saath jaa rahi ho

Geet: toh kya hua? Mein poore raat aap ke saath nahi reh sakti

Maan: what? Ye tum mujhse bol rahi ho? Mein itna paraya kab se ho gaya hoon Geet?

Geet: Pinky akhele hogi ghar pe

Maan: mein itna din akhela tha, aur ab bhi?

Maan gets closer and closer…

Geet: woh, mein

Geet pushes him off and escapes from there….

They go out for dinner…

Actually this should be their first date… officially…

Geet hai toh aaisi, jaise 19th century ki…

Geet office mein hi wait karke, wahan se waise hi chali gayi Maan ke saath….

Maan ko bhi zyada umeed nahi tha, woh bas kuch pal apne Mishty ke saath bithana chahta…

Maan keeps driving…

Geet is not feeling good, where is he taking her?

Geet: mujhe 10 bajhe wapas jaana hai

Maan: haan, mujhe pata hai

Geet doesn’t know what to do…

They have come to a resort sort of place in the middle of a farm…

There are a few huts…

Maan waits in the car and he calls someone…

Maan: we are here

Geet keeps looking at him suspiciously…

Maan: bas 10 min, phir hum jaa sakte hai

Maan switches on the FM…

“Bheege hont tere, pyaasa dil mera

Lage abr sa mujhe tan tera

Chhamke barsaayein mujh par ghataayein

Tu hi meri pyaas, tu hi mera jaam

Kabhi mere saath koi raat guzaar

Tujhe subha tak main karoon pyaar

Wo oh oh, wo oh oh, wo oh oh, wo oh oh”

Maan is just looking at her trembling lips..

Geet thinks that it was a bad idea to come with him…

Geet tries to ignore both the song and Maan…

But she just couldn’t, being a music lover she would have loved to enjoy this song on a long drive, alone…

Geet can’t miss the lyrics that explain Maan’s plight perfectly…

“Saansein aanch teri, tan aag tera

Chheene neend meri, loote chain mera

Kaala jaadu kare lambe baal tere

Aankhen jheel teri, dore laal tere

Kabhi mere saath koi raat guzaar

Tujhe subha tak main karoon pyaar

Wo oh oh, wo oh oh, wo oh oh, wo oh oh”

Geet is looking at the other side…

Maan holds her chin and makes her turn towards him..

Geet couldn’t help but look at him…

Maan looks into her eyes…

“Aankhen keh rahi jo na hum kahe

Use sun le tu jo na lab kahe

Tu na soye aaj, main na soun aaj

Tujhe dekhoon aaj, tujh mein khoun aaj

Kabhi mere saath koi raat guzaar

Tujhe subha tak main karoon pyaar

Wo oh oh, wo oh oh, wo oh oh, wo oh oh

Bheege hont tere, pyaasa dil mera

Lage abr sa mujhe tan tera”

The song ends but Maan’s thirst has just begun…

The RJ continues….

“ye raha ashiqkon ka dil ki baat, all the sweet girls out there must have heard the message of their boyfriends loud and clear now, this was for all the lover boys out there, and the next song is from Ram leela”

Geet suddenly switches off the radio.. ye kaisi program hai?

But she couldn’t put an end to our Maan’s hungry looks…

Geet: 10 min ho gaya

Maan: chalo

Maan takes her inside one of the huts…

Lovely update 😊

Waiting for next update

Maan is trying to pass his romantic message to Geet but she keeps ignoring it.

Geet caught the big problem in the design. But why wasn't someone reviewing the plans anyway? Nothing is too small.

Part 16

Interesting and Lovely Update

Maan just wants to spend time with his Misty

while Geet forces herself to agree to Maan

does she suspect Maan to have stolen from her father's business

he can do anything just to be with her

thanks for the pm

Part 16

Nice update.... well written

so Geet saved KC from a huge loss

well Geet hates to be alone with Maan

can understand that Maan wants to spend time with Geet

of cos she only agreed so he does not suspect her

she tells she has to be home by 10pm

update soon

Geet showed mistake in design and Maan admit she intelligent Maan ask for dinner Geet accepted bz she don't want him to doubt her but soon she get to know the details

Maan in romantic mood and Geet keep avoiding him

Maan trying to share his feelings to geet via song. Geet realizes too but does not feel like that at all. She is here to take revenge

glad she found the problem. Cannot believe Maan is that careless when about work. Hmm disappointment in him