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Posted: 3 years ago
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Commented on the blog baby 😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 3


Fascinating and Excellent Update


Geet is broken inside its the hardest blow one can get

from family and she has gotten two blows

one that the culprit trying to have her killed was her own mother

and secondly her family did forgive her mother

this fact is difficult for Geet to understand as to why her mother

got forgiven

while Geet seeing and knowing these facts lost herself in loneliness

and self regret

it was only Maan that saw through her difficulties and he knew she was losing

her bold confidence too

Maan became her strength and her weakness as now Geet is back

to been confident but she cannot take Maan's indifference even for

just few minutes or hours

Geet had made Maan stay back telling he will offer him his job back

and at the same time his grand father can recover well

Maan accepted and it seems from then Geet and Maan stayed together

all the time

I liked her confidence in the meeting and the fact that she researched the

company she was doing the deal with

her client was impressed and she won the deal

but why is Maan suddenly upset or annoyed with Geet

surely it cannot be the morning incident

Maan allows Geet her tantrums so it has to be something else

maybe its about Mr Alex



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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice update.

Paer 2

Geet was going thru a difficult phase after knowing what her mom did. Unfortunately nobody could understand this trauma. Luckily maan was there.

He sensed that something is wrong and sneaked in her room. She was on depression and she is taking those pills one after another.

Again maan is feeling that she is hiding something and is eager to find out. Now her family is adding more pressure on her to leave maan.

Eager to know how maan will handle this now.

Edited by natu10 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Now only maan is her strength he helped her out of depression when whole family forgiven her mom her culprit for family prestige how can geet easily forget about what she gone through when her life was in stake and this behaviour of her family broke her totally

Than maan brought her back from depression showing her how much she is important fr him and she's not some ordinary person whom finish her self with these harmful medicines

Maan too care fr her and love her geet knows he not behind her wealth but geet get angry and get upset easily bz of her current condition

Maan is only boost her for everything and she doing her job excellently even today she too get the deal by her confidence and proved her self Mr.Alex admiring her and maan was boiling and when geet came out maan was annoying mood geet to get angry bz she thought he was upset bz of morning incident

FB : Maan was leaving job but geet stopped him and convince him for his dadu further treatment

And from that time maan with geet and now he not think to leave geet ever

Hope everything goes smoothly in geet life but how her family allow her to b live with her guard no family allow this

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part-3

Nice update..

Commented on blog..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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commented on blog

thanks a lot

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Commented on blog baby 😃

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Geet is a good business woman. She can convince and make business deals. So why can't she figure out what made Maan upset? She really thinks a little intimacy would cause Maan to act like that? And she just made her own assumptions. Alex was flirting with her. Did she realize that?

Alex mocked her just because she is a woman? Not very bright is he? Hopefully Geet will have the sense to keep her interactions with him business like and no more.

Geet had stopped Maan from leaving. He did defend her always and she knows she can rely on him.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 2

Sorry for late commenting.

Maaneet moments are so hot and passionate. I just hate that handa family, first they threw Geet in hell by forgiving her criminal mother and when Geet is trying to live again with Maan. Geet selfish family is not ready to accept their relationship and wants to broke her relationship with Maan. Finally got to know that what Shivangi told Maan. Shivangi truly loves Geet as a friend that's why she told maan to take care of Geet. Bcoz Shivangi knew about Geet character. Also it seems that Geet is scared to lose Maan bcoz of her family. Geet has became addicted to Maan bcoz its clear that Geet can't live without Maan, Maan has became her breath and Maan too showed his playfulness to Geet only.

Thanks for the pm dear

Waiting for next update

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi Richa.... how are you and your family?

the update is always appreciated.

thanks for the pm

Part 3

Magnificent update..... eloquently written

seems like Maan can do anything for Geet

her happiness is all that matters

sad that at one of the most difficult times in her life her family and especially her dad was not there for her

hate how they failed to see Geet's pain and understand what she is going through

is family name and prestige that important?

Geet was totally shattered....

at least Maan was there for her....

the past well incorporated

so Geet stopped Maan from leaving and used his grandpa's treatment

she gave him back his job

as expected Maan was stubborn but then agreed

nice that Maan will never leave her

great that Maan was able to bring the old Geet back

loved seeing a confident Geet

not surprised that Geet and Maan maintain distance in public

liked how she handled the meeting and sealed the deal

dismayed that Alex mocked her

but he was impressed with Geet

she is a brilliant businesswoman

of cos Maan noticed Alex get touchy feely with Geet

she is perplexed with Maan's ignorance

great that confronted Maan

wonder why he is grumpy?

is it cos of Alex? or something else?

she cannot see him upset with her

update soon

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