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Posted: 3 years ago

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hello Richa. Thank for updating and for the pm

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Phenomenal update..... beautifully written

well Geet is relieved seeing Maan back to normal

but she is unaware of the turmoil he is going through

great that she thinks about could have happened at Alex's office

Maan's thoughts well portrayed

of cos Maan has fallen for Geet

liked that despite his feelings, he is ready to help her even if it means losing her

his love is selfless

He is determined to see a confident and fierce Geet

sad he feels that Geet needs a life partner that is in the same status and league as Geet

Maan does not want to be weak....

he feels that attachments makes one vulnerable and has seen what it has done to Geet

can understand that he does not want to be Geet's position and be a victim

but love can also be your strength

so he resolves to control his feelings

Maan is indeed surprised that Geet arranged a cruise for him

as expected he is stunned that Geet is going to the party alone

not surprised that is hurt with her comments

he feels she is ashamed of him

at least she was adamant that he go on the cruise

Maan's feelings are reasonable

Geet has arranged everything in style

he is frustrated that Geet did not answer the call

oh Maan is the only one on the cruise ship

he likes the loneliness

but is not enjoying himself

he misses Geet.....

A girl is lying on the stairs blocking his way and refuses to budge

Maan is annoyed

I think its Geet.....

update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 5

Ouch !!

Geet’s words cut straight through maan’s heart 💔......... reconfirming maan’s doubts

Even I was upset & suprised by her remarks

Maan finally had let down his guard & let someone into his life & heart other than his grandfather

He already thinks that he is not the same caliber as geet & he is not worthy

But little does he know , geet’s whole world is maan ...... just the way he is ...,,. She does not care about social status

& that is why geet’s words & actions were disturbing but as I continued to read

I discovered that geet did not let maan down & she wanted to suprise maan with a romantic cruise ♥️❤️....,, way to go geet !!

( that is if I guessed correctly & the girl is geet 😆)

Thank you 🤗


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Posted: 3 years ago

Maan knows he is not inThe same status as hehemce he wants to stay away from Her. He wants to make her strong not weak

he hurt when SHe told him that he can’t come with her

but surprise I am sure it is her in The ship

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Posted: 3 years ago

Geet wonders what hapoens to maan attitude wen he cmes from alex office

Other side maan thinks that he is not of geet status n she needs eyal status partner he fell in love with her but dont want accept that he thinks that emotions relations make us weak like geet example he wanna help her

Other side geet is going to cruise n invited maan their

Ops now maan realized that how important geet is fr him i think geet said those words may be to make realize maan that both cant live without eachther

Both love eachother uncondotionally but didnt realize their depth of feelings hope now their clear their differences

Is that girl was geet lets see

Thnks fr pw di 😊 update sooon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update

Geet happy to see maan normal

Maan hiding feeling to Geet

Geet want to maan enjoy in cruise

Geet say to she private party not to take him

Maan feel sad

Maan go to cruise

Maan missing geet

Waiting for next update

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wonderful Update

As a bodygaurd Maan is fully loyal with Geet but on other side he knows he is falling for Geet and in the end only he will be hurt

Maan was already in turmoil and then Geet,s words and behavior hurt him badly ,Geet send Maan on cruise to enjoy but how could Maan still he is doing whatever Geet is saying

Maan found a girl on cruise whose face was covered but Maan was shocked hearing her voice,if that girl is Geet then it will be very shocking surprise for him

Eagerly waiting for next

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Posted: 3 years ago

Commented on blog dear...

Thanks for the pm...

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update

Maan was trying hard to control his emotions bcoz Maan knew he is not fit for Geet, Also it seems Geet knew about his condition so she planned something for Maan and Geet sent Maan to enjoy in cruise intentionally and Geet herself went to that Alex party, obviously Maan didn’t like it to go to cruise but he had to go alone Bcoz it was Geet’s order. In cruise Maan was thinking about his life and saw a girl lying near stairs and was blocking Maan's path and I think it’s Geet....

Waiting for next update.....

Thanks for the pm dear.....

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Posted: 3 years ago

Superb update.

Maan is in a turmoil after Alex meeting. He is happy to see geet back to her old self but again this status issue is making him more worried.

Although he fell in love with her but is afraid to voice it out. Now geet is going to meet Alex made him feeling more insecure.

Geet told that he would not accompany her to the party as this is a private party. Instead she has arranged a cruise for him. Maan is upset and not willing to go. But she convinced him.

Eager to know if maan will like geet surprise.

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