SS ~ Heart on the Line ~ Note page 44 - Page 16

chapter 7

Maan is in and out of casual relationships. But he is honest about it.

chapter 8

Rahul is getting worse and worse. She is so much better off.

She should not listen to his words though. She is the best mother.

chapter 9

They have to careful what hey say in front of Nyra. Magic cucumber talks are not for little ears.

chapter 10

The little one has arrived. why are Rahul and mother even interested? They don't really care.

Chapters 1-2-3

Very Interesting way of introducing Geet and Maan to each other.

Loved how Nyra called Pepper "PAPA" and the guess doesn't have prizes I suppose on what might be going on in Geet's mind when she heard it... so many times since the first time Nyra met with stranger danger Maan and his Pepper.

Why did the ex-husband's name have to be Rahul?

An inspiration from the original show?

Well, character ages of Geet's family was good.

Hope Geet's family is always by her side.

These twin sisters of Geet.. is there something that doesn't catch the eye here?

And lastly, waiting to see Maan's side of the story.

And about his family.

Greatly written!

I love your usages of the English Language!

Keep it up!

Will read and comment on the other chapters too..

Thanks for this story!

Interesting..

Maan missed geet in nyra when they were away...

Geet delivered a cute little boy..

She is happy with her kids in town..

Rahul is being a j**k as usual.

Hi MQ, hope you are well?

update when its possible

thanks

Hoping all is well on your side

anxiously waiting for the next chapter

Hello MQ.....

anxiously waiting for updates