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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part – 5

Unaware of all the hungama the two girls were having a good time down south…

No one had any idea that the two would have set to explore new places on their own…

And they finally got to know about their secret journey from their train ticket bookings…

The police reached Chennai and looked for the girls in and around Chennai… .their return ticket to Delhi was booked a couple of days later….

But the two suddenly got interested to visit Hyderabad on the way back and have boarded the train already on unreserved tickets…

While the two girls took the train to Hyderabad from Chennai, Avika befriended a group of students from Hyderabad…

They were on a study trip and they shared their seats with the two girls who didn’t have proper seats…

A few friends in that group invited them to a tour of their city… most of them were boys..

Geet being shy didn’t interact much with them… .

Avika on the other hand is born and brought up abroad and got friendly with them in no time…

Avika trusted them and was happy that they got locals to guide so that they could visit lesser known places too…

After having shown them a few places which the girls did enjoy a lot their new friends had a surprise lunch arrangement for them…

They took them to someone’s apartment for lunch…

It was supposed to be one of the girl’s birthday treat, it all went well before some of the birthday girl’s cousin and his gang joined… they were little elder…

The boys were highly intoxicated… they were using drugs it looked…

Avika had a few drinks with them ignoring Geet’s warnings… .

After a few rounds Avika lost control of herself and one of the boys tried to misbehave with Avika … she was the easy target, she is from a foreign land where this is common… but then it should be with her consent and not otherwise…

Geet tried to stop him and he pushed Geet away…

Geet hit the door and was injured badly on the head… Geet got up gathering all her courage and hit him hard on the chest with a glass bottle… the boy was bleeding… the other boys ran away in fear…

Geet called the security and alerted the neighbours…

Luckily a few people came to the girls' rescue…

She called the police immediately…

Geet narrated the whole story to the police…

The senior police officer was such a good man, he helped the girls return safely to their homes…

Geet wanted the boy to be punished but the police officer patiently explained her all the risks which are going to affect only the two girls and asked her to just forget it as a bad dream…

Even if Geet could forget the incidents as a bad dream, the people of Hoshiarpur are not ready to forget it…

Having seen Geet with the head injury they started inventing new stories..

Many believe that she is a rape victim…

Even her family is skeptical about what ever happened in Hyderabad that day…

Brij kept insisting that they took Geet to a lady doctor soon before it’s too late…

What a family?

They stopped Geet from going back to college…

Avika went back to her parents…

After Geet narrated the story to Maan, she looks at him with a sarcastic smile… .

Maan: why are you smiling like that?

Geet: I know, you don’t believe my story, haina?

Maan keeps looking into her eyes for a while…

Geet feels embarrassed…

She can’t understand what he is searching in her eyes..

But there is sure a lot of concern in his eyes…

Maan: I don’t think you can lie

Geet is confused…

Geet: what?

Maan: I believe every word you said, I actually admire your courage and kind of like your free spirit

Geet: I can’t believe you

Maan: why?

Geet: are you from this world? I think you must not belong here

Maan: why is that so?

Geet: b’coz no one wants to believe me

Geet is really pissed off about that…

Maan: why do you care about others? It’s more than enough if you believe in yourself

Geet: for your kind information, the world doesn’t function that way

Maan: everything would be fine if you stop thinking about the world and start thinking about your life

Geet: it’s easier said than done

Maan: I know, but nothing comes without a price, haina?

Geet: hmm

Geet starts thinking about what Maan said…

Maan: I now believe that life is full of surprises

Maan feels for Geet, it’s not just him, life is not a garden in full bloom for everyone….

Maan is surprised to see her trying to fight against all odds instead of giving up like him, that’s something Maan should learn from this girl….

Maan develops an instant liking for her, somehow he has a soft corner for people who are in distress just like him… you feel a lot more better when you know that you are not the only one having problems….

Maan keeps looking at her in awe… she is still not tired of losing, she will sure run away again and go get her life, she is not the “run away” girl, but the “Gajini girl”, according to Maan… you go girl, Maan wishes that she finds her true happiness and has a lovely future just like her…

Geet: haan, my story should be a big surprise for you

Maan: not that, I came here to reject you while you were already planning to quash this proposal

Geet: what? Who are you to reject me? I reject you Mr., Naam kya hai?

Maan: reject hi karna hai toh naam jaanke kya karoge?

Geet: if only you told this in the morning itself, you could have saved us from all this drama

Maan: if only you told me that you are the girl whom I came to meet then itself, I would have gone back to Delhi by now

Geet: it’s good that at least now we know

Maan smiles…

Geet: aap ko neendh nahi aathi?

Maan: what?

Geet: mujhe lagta hai ki aap aaise hi bedtime stories sunthe raho toh subha bhi ho jayega

Maan looks at the watch…

Its half past 11 pm…

Maan: chalo tumme ghar chodtha hoon, tummare ghar wale pareshaan honge

Geet: hmm, maa toh zaroor pareshaan hogi, meine socha ki maa ko bathake aaoon, par woh papa se kuch nahi chupathi na

Maan: agle bar aaisa mat karo

Geet: uski koi zaroorat nahi hogi

Maan: kyun?

Geet: ab aaj ki kahani sunke koi ladhka aayega kya?

Maan: zaroor aayega, koi achcha ladhka jo tummare layak ho aur tumme bhi pasand ho

Geet: mujhe koi shadi nahi karni kissi se

Maan: kyun?

Geet: ladhki hai toh usko hamesha kissi ki sahare ki zaroorat hoti hai kya?

Maan: aaise kaun sochtha?

Geet: sab aaise hi sochte

Maan: toh tum kya sochte ho?

Geet: mein bas college complete karna chahti hoon, I will be the first graduate in my family irrespective of the gender, mere sare friends abhi final year ko kitna enjoy kar rahe hai, aur mein yahan house arrest mein hoon, uske badh kissi aur ki ghar mein permanent arrest ho jayega, I want to fly free like a bird, enjoy life for a few years at least

Maan: aur uske badh kya karogi?

Geet: woh phir sochte haina?

Maan: haan, ye bhi teek hai, phir tumme ek achcha ladhka zaroor milega

Geet: shayad

They have reached the Handa home…

Geet: chalo, aap se milke bahut kushi hui, agle bar Hoshiarpur aaye toh zaroor milna, mein chalthi hoon

Maan can’t believe that… she wants to meet him again even after all this? Maybe it was just a courtesy call and Maan is thinking too much about Geet, but why?

Maan keeps watching her…

Geet just jumps off the jeep and leaves…

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Posted: 4 years ago
#82

Thanks for the tag!

Didn't expect it...


But anyway, will read this latest update at night and respond...

Little tied up right now.. that's the only reason!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#83

5

maan find geet interesting after knowing her story

geet surprise that maan believes her

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Posted: 4 years ago
#84

Hey!

Awesome update this!

Maan actually listens patiently for once, to what Geet's backdrop story was!


I can't believe she was under house arrest...

Well, agar ladka Maan jaisa ho, toh pasand aayega hi naa?

That is the reason she wants to meet him again!


Maan ko bhi Geet pasand aayi..


Remains to be seen whether he rejects her or makes her accept him!


Loved the Maaneet convo, it was full of truth and life!

Waise, Maaneet ho toh serious hona padta hai sabko!


Kudos!


Do update next one soon!

Will be waiting!

And thank you so much for the PM...!!


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Posted: 4 years ago
#85

very interesting....so this is what happened eh....so brave of geet to get rid of those boys and call the police and thank god that guy was a nice person....but ofcourse you always people who talk bad no matter what happened..


geet is totally surprised maan believed her and they talked openly....


i thought they might decide since both are not interested in getting married, wh not marry each other so that their family will not bother them about it and they can go about doing what they wanted. they both understand each other too..am sure that might happen soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
#86

hi hope you and your family are well

thanks for the pm


Part 5

fabulous update. amazingly written

Geet indeed has an adventure

admire Geet.... she was so brave and saves her friend

sad that her family did not trust her

of cos everyone just assumes and gossips without knowing anything

not surprised that Maan is impressed with Geet

great that he was direct with her

so will he reject her?

he is stunned that she wants to meet him again

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Geet can't believe stranger not doubting on her story and it's make her happy bz someone trusted her when her family believed own gossip around them

Maan liked her bz she have courage to fight he told her y is he here

He wish her good luck and ready to drop her back home now what scene will create by her family

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Posted: 4 years ago
#88

Part 5


Fabulous Update


Geet tells Maan about her adventure

and the fact that some guys also came and were using and getting drunk too

she saved her friend and probably herself too

indeed Geet is brave and maybe Maan admires her for her courage

she also tells him that she wants to continue college

and only after that she will think further about marriage

perhaps Geet has not seen good husbands in her area

and thinks she will be a prisoner in Maan's house

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part – 6

Maan is still staring the house… trying to get another glimpse of her… waiting for her to turn back and smile or wave at him… is he expecting too much? No, he actually came here with a wedding proposal, he has every right to expect it now that he has made friendship with her.. what? When did that happen? Maan’s mind is out of control today… maybe it’s the circumstances, or maybe it’s the girl… whatever it is Maan can’t stop thinking about her…

Ranno is waiting for Geet as everyone has gone in search of Geet…

Geet goes and knocks the door…

Ranno comes and opens the door…

Ranno: Geet, kahan chali gayi thi? Pagal ho gayi ho kya?

Geet: wapas aagayi hoona? Chalo mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai

Ranno: aaj tumme bhooka hi rehna hoga, sab ko pareshaan karke rakha hai tumne

Geet: maa, ye teek nahi hai, tumne socha ki mein wapas nahi aaoongi aur mere liye kuch banaya bhi nahi? Par uss ke liye toh kuch banayi hogi?

Ranno: kaise batein karthi hi, saithan ki bachi

Geet: sharam nahi aathi , papa ko shaithan bhulathe?

Ranno: tu pehle andar jao beta, darji aur Brij abhi aathe hi honge tummare swagat karne

Geet: tum haina unko sambhalne?

Ranno: patha nahi tumme kab akhal aayegi?

Maan leaves after seeing Geet going inside her home with her mother…

Next morning…

Rajji comes and wakes Geet….

Geet: sone do rajji

Rajji: Geet, utjao jaldhi

Geet: itna subhe subhe mujhe tang mat karo

Rajji: Geet, woh aaye hai tumme dekhne

Geet: kaun?

Rajji: wahi, jo kal aaye the na

Geet is shocked to hear that…

Why has he come back?

Didn’t she tell him everything last night?

Geet gets up and runs out to look down the balcony…

Yes, it is him, it is the same guy that she met last night, she didn’t even know his name….

Geet: ye kyun aata hai?

Rajji: mujhe kya patha? Jaldi neeche aao, darji tumme bhula rahe hai

Geet: mein nahi aaoongi

Rajji: mein Brij veerji ko hi bhejthi hoon

That’s when Ranno comes…

Ranno: Geet, jaldi kar puthar

Geet: maa, ye wapas kyun aaye hai?

Ranno: kyunki unka bahut bada dil hai, tummare harkat ko jaanthe bhi wapas tumme dekhne aaye hai, babaji aaise moka bar bar nahi dethe hai, ab chup chap tayaar hoke neeche aao

Geet is annoyed but has no other go…

So it’s all pre-planned, had he told her about coming in the morning Geet would have absconded again, that’s why he didn’t say anything last night…

Geet: kitna chalaak hai ye? Babaji ye aapne teek nahi kiya

In a few minutes Geet is all ready….. forced to get ready…

Geet comes and serves them tea….

Geet is staring Maan… she is literally upset that he is back…

Maan knows that she is not happy to see him….

Darji: Geet, ye Maanji hai

Geet: meine poocha nahi, mein inka naam jaanke kya karoongi?

Darji stares Geet….

Darji: Maanji, aap chai pijiye, Geeeeet

Darji asks Geet to bring the tea….

Maan: I don’t like tea, I like coffee

Maan smiles looking at her angry face…

Geet: hum coffee nahi peethe

Bang comes the reply…..

Darji: Geeeeeeeet

Darji looks at Maan worried… but Maan is thoroughly enjoying this banter…

Darji: koi baat nahi ji, Geet, coffee lekhe aana

Geet goes to get coffee reluctantly….

Geet: ji darji

Maan stops her….: black coffee

Geet turns and asks: aur kuch?

She is really pissed off….. Maan is taking revenge for the earlier encounter….

Maan: haan, sirf ek sugar cube

Geet: hum sugar cubes use nahi karthe

Maan: no probem, ek spoon sugar is good

Geet murmers so that Maan only could hear her…: issiliye meine pehle hi bathaya ki aap ka rashtha ye nahi hai, aap galat rashthe pe aaye ho

Maan smiles looking at her antics…..

Geet gets the coffee and it’s not bad, it’s actually pretty good……

Maan: nice coffee

Geet: meine nahi banaya

Maan: kya hum akhele baat kar sakthe hai?

Maan asks Darji suddenly….. Maan wants to speak with Geet …… he wants to tell her why he is back…

Darji is hopeless as he can’t say no to Maan, yet he can’t say yes too whole heartedly…. Geet too wants to ask him why he is doing this…

Geet: hum chath pe jaake baat kar sakthe hai, haina darji?

Darji is helpless…: haan

Geet leads Maan to the terrace….

Maan likes her fearless attitude….

Even before Maan could say anything Geet asks him…

Geet: aap wapas kyun aaye ho? Aap Delhi nahi gaye?

Maan: nahi

Geet: kyun?

Maan: mann nahi kar raha tha aaise tumme chodke jaane ka

Maan teases her to see her reactions that always amuse him .. kya entertainment hai?

Geet gets worried and angry…

Geet: kya?

Maan: I was kidding, I didn’t come back for you

Geet: ohhh, you came to see rajji kya?

Geet doesn’t like that too…

Maan: tum hamesha aaisa ulta hi sochte ho kya?

Geet: aap ne kuch ulta nahi kiya kya?

Maan: ek minute shanthi se mere baat nahi sun sakthi ho kya?

Geet: ab kya hai sunne ki? Sab kuch kal meine saaf saaf batha di, mujhe koi shadi nahi karni hai

Maan: mein jaantha hoon Geet

Geet: phir yahan kya kar rahe ho? Chale jao, abhi

Geet goes on and on and is not ready to listen to Maan…

Maan stops her by placing his fingers on her lips…

Maan: chup bilkul chup

Geet stops talking…

Maan continues…

Maan: kal raat tumne mujhe ek thanks bhi nahi bola

Geet: kisliye?

Maan: what? Tumme bhoolne ki aadat bhi hai?

Geet: aap hi bhool gaye ho ki kal raat hui bathon ko

Maan: Geet, meine kitne mushkil se uss gundon se tumme bachaya?

Geet: aap wahan nahi jaathe toh mein bhi wahan nahi jaathi na?

Maan: toh ye meri galti hai

Geet: aur kya?

Maan: kal hi tum mujhse aaise hi milthi aur sab bathathi toh itne pareshaani nahi hoti

Geet: toh ye meri galti hai?

Maan: teek se socho Geet, shuru kisne kiya?

Geet: aap kal subha hi mere baat maanke chale jaate toh kitna achcha hota

Maan: tum se behes karke koi faida nahi

Geet: aap ko meri thanks se itna farak padta toh, thank you very much Mr, ab toh chale jao

Maan: mein chale jaate hoon, phir tum kya karoge?

Geet: mein kuch bhi karoon, aap ko kya?

Maan: meine suna ki koi jab mala lekhe tayaar hai tujhse shadi karne ki, usse kya karoge?

Geet gets furious….

Geet: uss nikambe daman ke barein mein aap ko kaise patha?

Maan: mujhe sab kuch patha hai, tere tarah mein swaarthi nahi hoon, mein sab ke barein mein sochtha hoon

Geet: aap ka kya matlab?

Maan: kal tummare jaane ke badh koi mujhse milne aaya tha

Geet: kaun? Daman?

Maan: nahi

Geet is worried, who was that?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 5

Awesome update!


Liked Geet's bickering to Maan!

Maan is full on entertained by Ms Hoshiyarpur...!!!

Waah kya scene tha!!


And kaun aaya Maan se baat karne?

Woh bhi raat ko after Geet was dropped back??


Amusing and intriguing!!

Do continue!!!

And update ASAP!!!


Thanks for the PM....

Appreciated..!!

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