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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 24

Captivating update !!! 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

A totally different portrayal of maan in this update ...,.

He seemed so vulnerable...... his ego & arrogance have vanished & we see a man that truly cares for this amazing woman but she won’t budge & give him a chance due to her previous heartache & her condition 😔

However , maan is definitely affecting geet .... I love the line where she felt more beautiful right now than wearing sexy clothes due to maan 💕....,,.. maan is definitely starting to slowly melt the icicles around her heart 😆

I was disappointed that geet kept refusing all his invitations & even his offer to be his friend 😔

Confused why maan thought he is not the type of guy that girls would bring to their parents ???

Thank you so much for the pm & the update 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

The way they affect each other is ❤

Experiencing something new,

He wants to say more then leave it that way

Looking forward to further 😍...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Congratulations to all Winners


of Part 23



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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 24


An Excellent Update


Wow In this Update I got to see a different side

of Maan

his thoughts were well portrayed , Maan is just a man

looking for love

he has been searching for it all this time and when he finally

finds there could be something deep and beautiful with Geet

she somehow fears though at the same time the feeling of something

exciting and deep is there , she probably not sure of Maan

and yes then there is her condition a fact that does not even bother Maan

while other men would have ran when they heard about her condition

he feels she is most beautiful and wow she too felt that moment that he makes

her feel beautiful

and I think if a woman feels beautiful just by a man's presence then she should

try and hold on and make a relation

Geet was betrayed in the past while Maan has a habit of drinking and perhaps

his character scares Geet

oh hell no his self confidence was so low , as if he was deeply ashamed of himself

or as if he was hurt just by Geet's reactions

I wonder will Maan be able to truly stay away from Geet

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow wow. What was that at the end!! Showing a completely different shade of maan. Vulnerable , feeling unwanted , not someone who can be brought home to shown yo family!!!

So he just puts up a facade to hide his inner feelings. Poor guy


Just as we thought geet is pushing him away yo hide from her new found feelings - not necessarily for him but due to him. She did not know she can feel these emotions too!!


hmm let’s see if she will come to the party!!!


fear is an emotion which will prevent you from j go ping forward — fear of rejection!! Fear of loosing i yo ourself yo never come out of that if it does not work!!!


Edited by Alamelu - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

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geet refuse maan's friendship he offer to her.

geet close every alternative maan open for her which push maan in thought that is not guy whom girls an introduce to their parents

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Posted: 4 years ago

thanks for the pm

sorry for late comments


Part 24

wonderful update.... greatly written

well Geet was a bit harsh to Maan....

of cos she is doing this to cover up her growing feelings for Maan

great that Maan makes her feel attractive.....

liked that Geet's conditions does not affect Maan

he does find her hot

gosh she does even want to be friends with him

feeling for Maan.....

seeing a vulnerable Maan......

Maan's thoughts well portrayed!

seeing her behavior he cannot even ask why they cannot date

hate that he feels she is out of his league

why does he think that he is not the type of guy girls bring home to their parents....

curious about Maan.....

will they meet again??

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Geet want to get rid of every feelings which having after his closeness that y she denying whatever he suggest but her continuously denials made Maan think he's not a guy whom girls intro to their parents he is basically emotional guy

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hai hai back to square one. Kya Hoga in dono ka 🤦🤷

Both assuming and thinking they don't deserve each other.

They want to be together but hesitating to confess.

Let's see what destiny has in store.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 24)

Winner: Alamelu⭐️

Runner-ups: Taahir004

Special Mention: NeenaDd

EarlyBirdAward (For readers having first 3 comments): shah10, UmaDevi97, mkd.70

Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s 👏smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32

Note:Please share the fic with your friends on IF. The story is getting very less readers. Thank you


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Part 25

He wants to say

Why can't we date?

But then leaves without saying anything

He thinks, he should have known she is out of his league…why would an Intelligent strong sexy woman like her waste time on him?

He feels he isn't the kind, girls wanna bring home to their parents....somehow, they never do

+++++++

Two weeks passes by

Geet was immersed in her work and she was taking up more work to not entertain the thought of Maan Singh Khurana

Her logic was, its vain and illogical

She will just be inviting a heartbreak by entertaining her thoughts

Their worlds are too different

She is a middle-class girl who paved her way through frugality, hard work and struggle

He is a typical upper-class rich guy born with a silver spoon with privileges she can’t even think about

Their value systems are too different

Even if they pursue each other, they will end up bad and she can’t bear another heart break

She is just protecting her heart by consciously distancing herself from Maan

But Maan was regularly messaging her about his house party details

Geet thinks that even if she decided to stay away from him, but not once going over the party will be outright rude

So on her free day, she decides to go to his house party

She thinks bass thodi der rahungi, Maan ko hi hello karungi chali aungi

She wears a knee length flary floral dress

++++++++

The party is wild with Maan’s uber rich college friends

Geet realizes yeh to ameero wali rave party hai and she is overtly over-dressed for the party as it’s a pool party

She is mildly intimated by the wackiness and wildness of the party

Geet thehri padi likhi doctor

Geet ko aur laga ki high society ke chonchle

Nope not fitting. Acha kia Maan ko date nahi kia

She locates Maan after quite a struggle of navigating around the crowd of half-naked people in bikinis and swim wear

Pata nahi group mein sab kya kar rahe the...she stood there for few minutes too.

Maan was also bare chested in his knee length swim wear shorts

Maan is very happy to see her

He offers her a drink

She refuses

M- Wait. I’ll bring some lime soda

He again goes to get her some soda

++++++

Maan jab tak bana kar lata hai

Geet looks very put off and was walking out of party bitterly

Maan stops her

M- Wait! Abhi toh tum aayi ho, stay. Let me introduce you…

G - Not needed. They all already know that I am a bi*ch

Some guy had tried to hit on Geet ne par Geet ne bhao nahi diya toh he called her that

G-I don't want to be here. Enjoy your party, Maan

M - No wait Geet... Did someone say that to you? Who was it tell me? Did someone misbehave with you…trust me I will-

G - You will do nothing. They are your friends. You know how they are... Fighting with one of them over me is useless... I 'll see you some other time... Bye

Keh kar Geet bhag leti hai udhar se

She was also feeling out of the place, coz she wore a nice floral dress and it turned out to be pool party with people in bikini and all...it confirmed her thoughts ki Maan toh upper class hai and she is middle class

More than that it was just people logging around looking so bored and blank... As if they haven't done a single day of hard work in their life... Aise logo se kya baat karo?

There is no common point of discussion

Sab loafer type dikh rahe

Bade baap ki bigdi aulaad...uske upar these wild rave parties were not cup of tea...she was too sophisticated

Geet could feel ki Maan jaisa bhi hai, par aisa nahi hai. so why is he with them?

And yaha she feels uska ek free night after working hard for 2 weeks… and it's wasted on these people

She felt extremely uncomfortable in those 15 minutes that she spent there in total

+++++

Maan needed her to be with him....somehow in those people too he felt alone...wished ki Geet aagai toh I have a companion

Maan wanted to say to Geet ki you look beautiful , wo bhi kehna reh gaya

++++++

Geet realized ki this is not just alcohol...there is drugs involved and what all craziness they are doing is also beyond her or maybe even Maan

But Maan is part of it now…Daldal mein phas raha hai Maan

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago

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