Part 70
Not fair di ..... u tricked us ...... maan was just daydreaming ...... oh I wish it was reality .
But I guess we will settle for geet being jealous
& maan enjoying it !!!
Song game was nice .
Thank you
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Part 70
Not fair di ..... u tricked us ...... maan was just daydreaming ...... oh I wish it was reality .
But I guess we will settle for geet being jealous
& maan enjoying it !!!
Song game was nice .
Thank you
we r also waiting fr geet to realise her feelings fr maan.........dont know hw much time she will take to realise..........
awesome update.......
loved it..............
Great Parts.. 69 & 70
Wow you reached 70 updates.. that is so awesome!
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Don't have much to say this time!
But brilliantly written and well expressed..
That is what I love about your stories!
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Part – 71
Maan enjoys Geet’s playlists for a change…
Maan ka koi playlist hai hi nahi… woh aaise time waste nahi kartha…
Par kabhi kabhi sunn saktha hai… he likes it…
Then “ tum hi ho” plays.. …
Maybe she is thinking of Dev… it’s his caller tune….
Dev has called….
Maan doesn’t react at all…
Geet: Dev
Dev: where are you?
Geet: going back
Dev: with him?
Maan gets angry… it sounds very insulting….
Geet: hmmm
Geet’s lowers her voice…
Dev: I thought you would stay at Beas, with Nanaji
Geet: nahi
Dev: I don’t want you to stay with him, he is not trustworthy
Geet remains silent… maybe she has seen that about him…
Maan can’t digest the fact that Geet is silently approving his statement…
Maan is dejected….
Dev: it’s better you stayed with nanaji
Dev keeps insisting that…
Maan takes a u-turn at the next exit…
Maan too thinks he should now stay away from her… that would give him some peace…
Geet is shocked… then she realizes that Maan has been listening to Dev…
Geet is scared to question him after looking at his face…
She is feeling guilty for what Dev just said…
She thinks it’s better to leave it to Maan to decide what he wants….
She knows what’s in his mind as he takes the road to Beas…
She sits quitely not being able to garner the courage to speak to him….
Maan stops the car outside itself and waits for Geet to get down…
He doesn’t say it though…
Geet is frustrated that she won’t be going with Maan…
She didn’t know she will be so much affected by the thought of staying away from Maan..
She doesn’t no what it is but she has gone mad and her frustrations have kept pilling up as they kept nearing Bead… how can she make him understand that she is not happy with this decision of his.. .
But she has to register her disappointment someway or the other… she wants him to know that she is not happy… but how… she bursts out as she is about to get down…
Geet: Dev is right, I’m more then happy to stay away from you
She didn’t realize what she is saying…. Maan is already hurt that she didn’t object what Dev said… now she says Dev is right…..
Just then nanaji comes seeing them…
He understands that something is wrong..
Maan can’t react after seeing nanaji… aaj toh Geet bach gayi, warna Geet shayad Maan ko issi waqt kho jaathi… he is so pissed by her words..
Geet aur usski choti soch ….
Nanaji : aayiye aayiye damadji
Maan: Geet yahi rahegi, do din mein kaam shuru ho jayega, Geet ka yahan rehna bahut zaroori hai
So saying Maan leaves…
Geet doesn’t utter a word against him…
She keeps watching him leave with a heavy heart….
For the next few days Geet tries to spend time with her nanaji and make him happy…
They ask the cook to make their favorite dishes and enjoy the meals together…
But then Geet sometimes confines to her room and seems to be feeling lonely though she is married…
Nanaji is observing Geet closely, his happiness lies in her happiness.. .
He knows everything about her, her drama to marry that Dev is well-known…
Nanaji was worried after she got married to Maan… he thought Maan is bit older for young Geet ..
He was sceptical about Geet agreeing to marry Maan after she kept rejecting all the boys and even making one of the poor guys run away on his own…
Geet is not happy in this marriage…..
Mean comes for the “boomi pooja”, but he leaves without coming to stay with Geet even for a night…
Geet tried to stay within his vicinity, their eyes met once in a while and that was enough for them to connect…
They know each other to that extent that they think that the other needs their own space and they are only missing the other’s company…
They are yet to get to the place where they can question the other with full rights.. both of them don’t know where they stand in regards to the other’s personal space…
Its all still uncertain and confusing…. But the one thing that both of them can’t deny is the fact that they are not happy being separated from the other… They can also see that the other person is also not so happy…
Maan ka toh patha hai, par Geet ka abhi bhi kuch bhi kehna mushkil hai…
Maan knows that she is still in constant touch with Dev and she tells him everything, even what happens between the two of them too… .
That is hard to digest for Maan.. Maan being the private person how can he let his personal equation with his so called wife be exposed to a third person…
He is just not ready to accept it… it’s better to stay like this… he feels like he is surrounded by a pair of eyes and ears whenever he is with Geet… he can’t trust her, not after he heard that conversation…
How can he talk to her?
It’s like talking to two people at a time…
He can’t imagine what all she shared with Dev that he gets the audacity to call Maan “not trustworthy”…
Geet has every right to question his closeness with Raksha, it’s normal for a girl to get upset seeing her man unnecessarily getting close with another woman…
Sure Maan over did it getting carried away by his guilty pleasure of seeing Geet’s possessive side… that indirectly gave him the happiness that there is love right behind that possessiveness…
Maan thinks Geet tells about everything that happens…
Maan doesn’t know that Dev became insecure the moment when Maan took Geet forcefully from Dev that day… Dev could see how much Maan is fond of Geet….
Maan and Geet are not even talking office matters…
Maan gets to know everything from the site engineer and also from the Sharmas… Raksha keeps updating him about the project and do Geet’s dedication and hard work…
Wonderful update superb
really geet is impossible n hurting maan in all sense
good that maan keep distance from her after knowing she share everything with dev n feels disgusting
Nice update. The separation was needed.
Informative Update!
Do continue!
Thanks for the PM...
Cheers! 😃
Nice update. The separation was needed.
Agreed.
But will Geet realise Maan's agony and emotions?
Staying apart usually does it to people.. but this Dev is too much of a kabaab mein haddi yaar!
Will Maan confess or will he let Geet drift away?
Part 71
Interesting Update
Dev phones Geet and sad that she also allows Dev to belittle Maan
Maan feels that now if he talks to Geet then even Dev will know it all
now he feels he cannot trust Geet as their matter are between three people now
Geet's Nanaji too felt that Maan is older for Geet
but I think its time someone needs to tell Geet not to play with Maan's emotions
if she wants a life with Dev than its good for her but she needs to understand
a lot things and worst Dadima and Annie trust her while she has never thought about
how they will feel
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