MG FF - Meine Pyaar Kiya..... Updated thread 2 link pg 152 Aug 12 - Page 68

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Posted: 4 years ago

hi thanks for the pm


Part 63

Fabulous update... well written

hmm Geet is thinking about all what happened

looks like she is falling for Maan

will she realise this

Maan is just happy been with Geet

Maan cannot help but admire Geet

Geet is confused with what is happening

Gosh Geet is restless now seeing Maan around

continue soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 63

Nice update

Nice to see that maan is affecting geet

But she is still not sure why

Liked how she grabbed his hand

They both are enjoying each other’s company

Can’t wait for geet to develop feelings for maan

Thank you for pm & update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Well written update!


Maan's thoughts expressed with sincerity!

Waiting to see if Geet develops feelings for Maan!


Update soon!

And thanks a tonne for the PM.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 63


Fascinating Update


Maan and Geet have reached the Sharma's home

the little moments that Maan enjoys watching Geet or just

seeing that she is happy is rather pleasing

what has happened suddenly to Geet why is she in such a panic

not seeing Maan

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update n geet is missing maan's care n attention which he gives her n he gives her all freedom which she didn't get from her family n she is blinding following dev n doing whatever he told her do n she didn't understand that she is losing maan in this n thnxx for pm me

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Posted: 4 years ago

maan is showing possessiveness over geet is ok..........magar geet?.....woh toh maan ko husband hi nehi manti........phir kaise?but i loved dis change in geet.............


lovely update.................


loved it................

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Posted: 4 years ago

itni bhi kya behchaine geet?.........u dont like maan na..........iss ehsaas ho pehchano geet.........maan k bina ur life is nothing..........u r in love but yet to realise................


lovely update.................


loved it.............

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part – 64

Maan is talking on the phone… he doesn’t realize that Geet is looking for him…

Geet keeps running like a fool, scared like a lost kid….

She then finds Maan out in the garden…

Its dimly lit and it’s freezing out…

She goes straight to him…

Maan is worried looking at her coming running towards him…

She tries to stops only after getting pretty close to him…

She struggles to stop from hitting him and loses her balance…

With her both hands filled with mehendi she can’t even hold on to him… .

Maan swiftly moves and stops her from falling by holding her by the waist…

She is panting heavily from the running…

Maan: what’s wrong Geet?

Maan unknowingly looks at her zip… has it broke… no it’s fine…

Geet: why did you come out?

She asks as if he has done something wrong…

Maan stares her…

She stares him back…

Geet: don’t go anywhere leaving me alone, I don’t know anyone here

What? She was ready to come alone… but that was yesterday… things change so fast, and so is Geet’s mind.. it keeps changing by the hour…

She is not even aware that he is still holding her….

Maan: why did you come out in the dark like this?

He is worried about her only…

Geet: it’s all because of you, why did you come first?

Maan can’t believe that she always finds excuses for her mistakes by blaming him…

Maan tightens his hold and pulls her closer in anger…

Just then Geet realizes her position and is scared of his anger for the first time…

Maan notices her fear and releases his hold…

Maan: darne ki koi zaroorat nahi Geet, I’m not going anywhere, come, let’s go

Maan let’s her go and follows her closely till they reach the function hall…

Rohini is looking for Geet…

Rohini: tum kahan chali gayi thi?

Maan let’s her go then…

Geet goes to complete her mehendi…

Maan goes and sits just opposite her so that she can easily see him…

Maan was busy with work on his mobile for a moment and he finds Geet missing…

He is worried and he goes in search of her…

Just then Rohini comes with a thali and calls Maan…

Maan: aunty, Geet kahan hai?

Rohini: upar kamre mein hai, tum please take this for her, she must be very hungry

Yes, they didn’t stop anywhere after that brunch as they were late….

Maan stares the thali… does he look like a butler in this outfit?

Rohini: what are looking at? Haven’t you seen a wedding thali before?

Rohini thrusts the plate I to his hands and leaves…

Rohini: I’m also starving

Maan has to go meet Geet anyway or she would be scared again…

Maan goes upstairs and finds a lot of rooms filled with girls…

How will Maan find Geet?..

Rohini has made all the arrangements…

A little girl comes and takes Maan to Geet…

Geet is waiting along with another girl…

That girl leaves giggling after seeing Maan…

Maan gets in… Geet is sitting… she tries to get up seeing Maan…

Maan makes her sit comfortably…

He tries to give the plate to her but she can’t hold na…

Maan now understands his plight…

Geet: mujhe bhook nahi hai

Maan: are you sure?

Geet’s eyes are on the scrumptious thali only…

Maan: I don’t think so

Geet gets up and goes to the washroom…

Maan: where are you going?

Geet: to wash my hands

Maan: but you just applied mehendi

Geet: but, I want to eat, I don’t care about the mehendi

Maan: par I care na

Geet: what?

Maan: Geet, how much hardwork has gone into that, you have to give it some respect

Geet: what shall I do? Spoon bhi nahi hai

Maan shows his fingers…

Maan: aaj yahi tummare spoon hai

Maan washes his hands and comes….

Maan: chalo, bathao Geet, pehle kya kaoge?

Even when her sister fed her last time like this during their wedding she just gave Geet whatever she got her hands on…

Geet keeps looking at him astonished…

Maan: Geeeet

Geet comes back to her senses…

Geet: laddu

She likes to start with the sweet… her favorite…

Maan takes the laddu and puts it in her mouth…

Geet takes a bite and a few bits scatter on her dress…

Maan picks them up and clears it…

Geet is surprised to see that MSK who keeps ordering others usually serving her without any problem…

Maan patiently feeds her every item on the thali..

Geet is a good eater… she doesn’t waste food…

Finally it’s the kheer…

Geet spills the kheer as she sips and it drips down her neck…

She is scared that Maan would get angry…

But Maan takes his rumal and starts wiping the kheer…

Geet is startled as he pauses for a moment, Geet moves back and Maan takes off his eyes off her immediately…

Maan: I’ll get you water

Maan leaves suddenly not able to stay further as he is losing his control… after all he is also a human…

These ladies are after poor Maan as they think that the problem is with Maan, but little do they know that they are only making it harder for him…

However it does have equal effects on both sides…

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 64

Aww 🥰 they keep taking turns playing cat & mouse game

They are starting to become inseparable b/c they are so habitual of each other.

How will they separate for life if they can’t stand being apart for a few minutes

Glad that maan’s charm is working in geet

But just wondering when she will start understanding her emotions

Thank you 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

hi thanks for the pm and update


Part 64

wonderful update.... nicely written

of cos Geet is relieved seeing Maan

liked his concern for her

sweet of Maan to feed her

Geet is indeed awed

can Geet not see that he loves her?

looks like Geet is falling for Maan

update soon

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