MG OS - The Kidnapper... Updated last part Nov 10 pg 4

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The kidnapper…

Geet opens her eyes hoping that her nightmare would have ended like a miracle….

Geet looks to the left not wanting to look at the other side…. She hates to look at the kidnapper….

She doesn’t like the way he looks at her… How would she give him the chance herself…

The kidnappers eyes are already on her…. He is gazing her through the rear mirror….

Geet gets a glimpse of his reflection on the mirror…

Geet glares the mirror and looks away into the woods ..

Geet panics as it is already getting dark and they are in the middle of nowhere…..

Her hair falls infront of her eyes, getting into her eyes irritating her and she can’t even push is aside…

Her hands are tied and she tries to push it back using her shoulders….

A hand comes to her help….. It’s him… She would prefer to be left as such rather than getting help from him…

Geet moves away only to hit the door…

He smiles, what an evil smile, and puts her hair aside….

His smile turns into a big victorious laughter….

No villian could match this devil……

He finds her cheeks turning red with anger…..

He enjoys her angry look as she stares him to express her dislike and frustrations….

The more she revolts the more he loves her, he gets pleasure in her pain, what a pathetic creature….

He definitely belongs to these woods, but Geet, she is the eternal princess of the Handa house….

She is the darling sister of Pradeep Handa, the scian of the Handa group of companies…

It’s her ill fate that she was born as his sister…. Sometimes too much of anything turns out to be a curse…

Geet literally got everything unlimited…. Her brother would even buy the moon for her if that is what would make his little sister happy….

Pradeep is four years elder than Geet, they lost their parents when Geet was just twelve, from then on Pradeep dedicated his life to keep his sister happy….

He pampered her so much that she never had the opportunity to regret the loss of her parents….

She hardly remembers them, for her Pradeep has been the world….

Everyday was like a dream come true for Geet…

Whatever she wished for, her brother gave it to her….

Maybe babaji is testing her again… the first time babaji snatched her parents from her, Geet didn’t complain for babaji has given her Pradeep….

This time babaji is trying to snatch Pradeep too from her so that she will be left alone finally… Geet is not going to give up easily…. No one( the kidnapper), not even babaji could succeed in taking her brother away from her….

Geet closes her eyes and pretends to be sleeping again….

She thinks about her life, she thought God is too kind to her for he gave her more than everything she could wish for though He took away her parents from her…

Geet never had the opportunity to complain to her babaji until this happened….

Geet feels guilty that she has finished using her quota of happiness for this life time already….

The car slows down and comes to a halt….

Geet knows that as the engine goes off….

Geet hates to open her eyes…. But she has to find out where he has taken her to keep her in captivity….

She partially opens her eyes and looks out….

They are in front of some sort of a rest house in the middle of a jungle….

Geet wonders if there would be any form of communication even possible from this place….

How cunningly he has planned everything?

She hears him open the bootie and take off the bags….

He was kind enough to save her the trouble of packing, which she actually hates, Sam, her BFF, does it for her always, but he got her things along when he kidnapped her….

It doesn’t look like Geet’s nightmare is going to end any sooner….He has planned everything to perfection, he has chosen the time when her brother is out of town to kidnap her….

Geet must stop thinking about the past and start thinking about how to escape…. There has to be a way out of this mess…

Geet quietly tries to open the door using her tied hands but can’t do anything….she moves over and tries using her toes to open but the door is locked…

She then turns to the driver’s side to try and unlock the door…

By then the kidnapper arrives… He unlocks it for her… niw she doesn’t want to get out of the car…. She is ready to stay inside the car itself rather to co-exist with the kidnapper….

He opens her door and gives way for her to get down ..

Geet uses the opportunity to kick him on his weak spot and run to her safety….

Unexpecting such an attack from her he almost falls on his knees but even then doesn’t fail to catch hold of her tied hand…

Geet bends down and bites his hand to free herself…. He leaves her hand for a fraction of a second and off she runs away from him…

He takes a moment to compose himself and easily chases her down… it’s not that easy to run with your hands tied, Geet blames the knots for her defeat for she won’t accept that he is better than her in anyway….

He then carries her to the rest house and takes her straight to the bed room….

Geet is scared that she has unnecessarily triggered him….

Kidnapper: Honey, it’s my fault that I left your mouth untied, I thought it’s not necessary for you never open it to speak with me, I should be careful for you have got the shark’s tooth…

Geet keeps staring the other side not interested in his speech…

Kidnapper: if you think you are irritating me by doing all this then you are mistaken sweetheart, I am bored of being served without even having to ask for anything, just like you, I too am used to getting things done with the blink of an eye lid..

Geet has to listen to his boring lecture for one can’t close his ears like one closes his mouth… how good it would be if we can do that… there will be less noise and even lesser conflicts…

Kidnapper: You know what, I like challenges, they make your life fun filled and interesting, I like the way you keep challenging me every time, in fact, that is why I like you more and more

Geet can’t give up just because he likes her fighting spirit… it’s only logical to try not to do something that he likes, but what about her dignity and honour….

Moreover that would be like a surrender which is not an option for Geet right now….

Kidnapper: the more you ignore me the more I want to make you mine, he gets closer to her and kisses her forehead…..

Geet would have kicked him to his death if only he had not held her legs down with his hands…. He has learnt his lessons from his previous encounter….

Geet, who had kept her eyes closed tightly, slowly opens them for he has released his hold….

She thinks he might have left…. But he is still there gazing her intently…

Geet regrets opening her eyes just to catch a glimpse of his dirty looks…

Kidnapper: I’m pretty hungry Geet, I think you should be hungry too my love?

He removes his shirt to tease her…. Geet closes her eyes again… it’s better to keep her eyes closed permanently…

Kidnapper: I think you are not happy when your darling baby is all sweaty, I’ll be back in a moment… I promise I won’t keep you hungry for a long

He then leaves to take a shower…

Geet can’t stop imagining what would happen when he comes back….

She gets on her feet, reaches the door which is locked and tries to find the keys…

It must be in his shirt…. She quickly searches his shirt using her feet and finds the keys…

She then grabs the key with her toes and reaches the door…

Geet tries to lift her legs so that she could put the key in the keyhole but that looks impossible….

She then takes the key with her mouth and is about to put it in the keyhole when the washroom door opens and he comes out….

He knows she won’t remain still waiting for him… he then finds her struggling to open the door…

Kidnapper: if you want to open the door you should have waited for me, meri jaan, or you should have called me, I would have come running to help you even if I might have been in the middle of my shower sweetheart, why do you have to trouble yourself so much? I’m always at your service jaanu

He tries to get the keys from her and then pauses….

He looks at her naughtily… : imagine that my hands are tied too, how would I get the keys from you then? That sounds interesting, haina darling?

Geet stares him….

Kidnapper: maybe we’ll try that later

He takes the keys from her and patiently unties her hands…

That’s so kind of him… he finds them pale with the tied marks… he pulls them to take a better look as he didn’t want to hurt her like this…

Kidnapper: you don’t realize how much it hurts me to do this to you my love, why can’t you just chill and spare me from hurting you like this for which I hate myself, why can’t we keep the game fair and just without any risks

He didn’t tie her hands in the beginning…. He just carried her from her house and forcefully got her in the car…

Geet kept hitting him but it was just like ticking for him…

She tried to stop him from starting the car but he is much stronger for her… she is not used to this kind of wrestling…

She always gets what she wants without any effort…

As he starts driving she kept disturbing him by not letting him change the gears, but he toggled to auto gear mode and managed to drive smoothly…

At one point Geet tried to open the door and jump out risking her life to save her honor …

He was likely anticipating that from her and so he caught hold of her and stopped her in time…

He then decided that it’s too dangerous to leave her hands free for she is hell bent to irritate him to the extent that she is ready hurt herself by that…

He then pulled the kid’s lock and stares her…

Kidnapper: are you kidding me? What the hell were you trying to so? So you think you are smart enough to pull out such stunts? No sweetheart, you are too fragile to even think about that

He then snatches her duppatta and tied her hands till the very end so that she won’t have a chance to use her fingers… he knows that it’s not that easy to keep her quiet…

He is just reminding her about her failed plan..

Geet thinks she should have jumped little faster so that he could not reach her… she was too scared and so she was slow to act….

Kidnapper: look at what you have done to yourself?

He keeps staring her hands…

Geet pulls them and hides them in the back…

He immediately grabs her hands and brings them front…

Kidnapper: it should be pretty painful

He genuinely feels bad for what he has done…

Geet who is thinking about how to hit and run isn’t bothered at all… he then places a few kisses on her palms to soothe the pain…

Geet feels his cold lips hovering over her palms… Geet tries to pull back when he thinks she is trying some other trick to escape and catches hold of her…

Kidnapper: you know there is no escape, look at your hands, it’s enough for today, we’ll continue this tomorrow, fresh hokke aaram karo sweetie

He then pushes her in and locks the door behind as he leaves her to get some rest…

Geet falls on the bed and lies there like a piece of wood… she is scared that this is the end of it, there is no light at the end of this tunnel… it’s all dark everywhere…. Only babaji could save her from this hell….

Geet prays to babaji to send her brother to her rescue…

Or someone unexpected would come as her savior??

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Interesting start

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Awesome. Really curious who the kidnapper is, can i imagine him as maan. But why he kidnapped her. waiting for next part.

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Y he kidnapped her now how geet will free from his clutch

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very interesting

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Congrats on the OS! thanks for the pm!

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Part 1

Captivating update.....

oh Geet is kidnapped... of she is scared....

who kidnapped her and why?

she tries to escape but unsuccessful as he is one step ahead of her.

will she be saved?

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Hmm why do I feel it is maan. Or is it??

geet does not like this person but he loves her. Like her he too has been handed everything easily. Let’s see what happened. Can she escape or ??

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Part – 2

Geet is so angry with her brother right now…

It all started with Pradeep befriending this stupid kidnapper at the business conference in Dublin…

Geet still can’t understand how the kidnapper fooled Pradeep and Geet is facing the consequences of Pradeep’s misjudgment….

Poor Geet was happy to enjoy her life after Pradeep’s marriage in the company of her best friend Sameera…

Geet has been living alone with her brother and she never had any female members as such in their family, it’s only their bachelor uncle and their Nanaji who were close to them and visited them often….

Geet is very choosy when it comes to friends… she rarely trusts anyone other than her brother … Both Geet and Pradeep stayed away from the so called relatives who were only worried about the Handa property left in the responsibility of little Pradeep with their drunkard uncle as their guardian…. Everyone who shared their love with the kids was only eyeing a share of the property…. Geet lost trust in relationships and people in general from then on….

Luckily Nanaji took care of them until recently when he left them….

Geet’s friendship with Sameera started with a tough competition between the two as to who would be the Queen of their batch ….

Sameera is also a spoilt child of the Khanna family, but she was raised by her single father who pampered her so much with all the best things in the world without realising that all she needed was someone to love her, care for her and teach her the ways of the world like a mother or elder sister….

Geet atleast had her brother who transformed into a mother, father and friend whenever she needed their support….

After getting to know about Sam's background Geet felt very bad for her and immediately made her one of the family …

Sam shifted to the Handa house from the hostel and the two ruled the Handa house from then… Pradeep was happy that Geet got a new friend at her service while Pradeep could breathe easily for a change….

Everything is spoiled after Pradeep got acquainted with this Kidnapper… Pradeep wanted a friend like Sam and chose the wrong one in the end….

Geet wished that Pradeep never met this devil and fell into his trap like this ….

After a while the door opens and the kidnapper comes with her dinner…

It’s just instant noodles… but that looks tempting, piping hot and juicy with more sauce the way Geet likes her noodles…

Geet is on a hunger strike though…. She is also famished but not ready to give up….

He locks the door and comes with the food….

Geet doesn’t even cares to turn around and look at him as she has turned her back to him…

But the sight of the lovely noodles is still in her eyes… she wants to have them right now when they are hot and non-sticky… Right now she is even ready to eat it cold and sticky too… she’ll wait for him to finish his bashan and leave… then she’ll eat her food peacefully….

To her surprise he leaves the plate on the table and leaves without turning back…

Geet runs and picks up the plate…

She sits and enjoys the noodles like she always does….

She has to be strong and be prepared to continue the battle next day haina?

She is too exhausted to think about what to do next…. She’ll wait for his move before she can plan her next move… she falls asleep as soon as her tummy is full….

Kal ka toh kal dekhlenge…

Next morning Geet wakes up early hearing some noise outside …

Geet is happy that someone has come and she could seek their help….

Geet runs to the window, opens the screen anxiously, only to find her beloved kidnapper cutting some logs at the backyard….

He seems to be venting out his frustrations on the poor logs…

Geet is happy that she gave him back tight at the right spot for he couldn’t even think about doing anything bad last night …

But looking at him now, Geet is afraid that she would be spared tonight …

He must be working out regularly, his biceps are proof to his workout regime …

Geet didn’t realise that he had such a muscular body, he never showed his strength when she revolted …

He always handled her with utmost care for he knew Geet is as gentle and soft as a flower …

He was pretty surprised when she hit him, he was impressed that she is strong enough to manage tough times …

He was not expecting something like that from her else she is not an equal competitor, physically speaking…

Geet keeps staring him forgetting that he is her kidnapper…

He lifts his head and looks at the window when Geet hurriedly closes the screen …

She doesn’t want him to know that she was staring at him …

Geet then enters the washroom to brush…. She gets angry not finding anything there… no toiletries… what kind of a place is this?

Geet doesn’t realise that this place is someone’s private rest house and not some five star hotel and that she has been kidnapped and held hostage, she should know that this is not one of her vacations….

Geet hears the room door being opened but prefers to stay I side the restroom itself… she knows who has come, she hates to see his face….

But He likes her so much that he keeps looking for the chances to get a glimpse of Geet ….

He comes straight to the washroom where Geet is without even having the basic manners to knock before entering…. Geet had left the door wide open… but still he should have knocked….

Geet looks the other way while he comes and keeps the toiletries for her…. He doesn’t miss the chance to gaze at her through the mirror …

He is smiling all the while looking at her dramebazi, he sure is having a great time troubling Geet….

As he leaves Geet slams the door behind him angrily….

He is not much bothered by her anger, he knocks again and Geet loses her cool completely…

Geet: stop bothering me now and get lost

Kidnapper: Breakfast is ready and it will be available only for the next half hour, I don’t want to face a hungry monster early in the morning and spoil my day, hope you understand

Geet: monster? Whose the monster?

Geet opens the door and shouts at him....

Geet: I may be a monster when I’m hungry but you are always a monster, sabse bada DD

He catches hold of her and pulls her closer….

He: so you agree that I’m your DD, you are right Geet, I’m your Darling Devil! You are my MM

Geet stares him hearing that …

He: you are my Mad Mishty, but I love the craziness, it makes you more sexy, I’m bored of the typical ideal types

Geet: Dhust Danav

DD: I'll be waiting

So you all know who the kidnapper is…..

Now on we'll call the kidnapper DD….

DD looks at Geet sending a strong message about his actual desires….

Geet pretends to be unaware of his intentions and goes in to brush…. She is starving like anything… first she needs to have something to start thinking clearly….

Geet gets ready in a jiffy which is unusual for she is constantly reminded of his warning about the timing…

She knows he too is as stubborn as herself….

DD is waiting for her patiently…

As she arrives he gets the toaster ready…

Geet grabs the bread and puts it in the toaster herself… she doesn’t need anyone’s help for this….

DD waits till the bread is ready and he snatches it from Geet …

Geet doesn’t want to fight with him and give him the pleasure of victory for he is just expecting her to fight back …

Now is the time to follow Gandhigiri to irritate him …

He is still looking happy to have the bread toasted by her …

Geet is helpless, what should she do to make him angry …

He seems to be loving anything and everything she does …

Poor Geet is frustrated seeing him enjoying so much ….

She hates to see that lingering mischievous smirk on his face …

How dare he?

Geet has to get her mobile from him somehow … it’s like she has lost her personal security ….

Once she gets it she can easily contact her brother ….

Geet deliberately eats her food very slowly so that he would leave her alone, he kept looking at her for a while and left the house locking her inside …

Geet waits for him to leave the campus, as soon as his car's sound fades away Geet jumps into her mission to find her mobile….

But she couldn’t find it anywhere…. Instead she gets access to his family albums, pretty old ones where he and his little sister are with his parents …

Geet wonders how could he behave like this with her when he has also got such a lovely sister …

Geet is surprised that he seldom speaks with his sister unlike herself and Pradeep who keep chatting all day…

She has rarely seen them talking, what a strange brother? His sister is really unlucky to have got such a loser as her brother ….

He has got a beautiful family, but only his sister is with him now just like Geet’s family …

Maybe that’s why he is like that, so moody ….

But he seems to be in a happy space in her company, no matter how much she tries to irritate him …

Geet has forgotten about her mobile and is thinking about how he came into their life …

Pradeep is also like Geet, he too doesn’t trust anyone that easily… but unlike Geet he is very soft spoken and amicable, he met this stranger at a business conference and got familiar with him as he was the only other person from India, that too Delhi…

Pradeep had already heard about him from the business fraternity through his sister’s wedding …

At that time his sister’s wedding was the talk of the town, everyone was literally raving about how he turned the wedding into a carnival since it’s his beloved sister’s wedding, she is all he got as a family, he chose a family with a lot of members for his sister… he wanted her to have everything she missed out at her maikka… every relationship she could possibly get…

Then itself Pradeep was so impressed by his love for his sister and wished that he too found something like that for Geet …When Pradeep met DD in person he almost became his deciple, he kept chanting DD's praise throughout the entire trip…

That’s all fine, but for Geet there is no better brother in this world than Pradeep …

Pradeep would do anything for her….

Pradeep married the girl of her choice…. Geet wanted her bestie, Sameera, to be her babhi for then she wouldn’t feel distanced from her brother….

Sam is just another slave of Geet you should say….

Sometimes Pradeep is left to wonder if Sam has got married to him or his sister….

The two leave no stone unturned to trouble him….

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Its very very nice and different and I’m so looking forward to reading this

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