" The Last Love" , part 10, 7/4/23, pg 23 - Page 13

Chapter 2: again lovely .. so well written

Uff Geet badly in love… Maan has not realized it yet

I loved the part where both would fall in idea of falling in love

Part 3

Reality check of falling in love

Many things matter in society and if one partner gives up so easily, they are not worth getting so much attention

Part 4

Now the realization hit him that Geet is gayab

Hi there

any idea if you will update?

will an update be posted soon?

please do try and update

Part 8

How was the paper? Maan asked her while he rolled his question paper in ball and tossed behind.

Ok ok types? Just gonna get passing marks. Geet replied taking a glance at the question paper. He just snatched the paper and tore it mercilessly.

"Just forget it"

"Yeh sab bas pyar vyar ke chakkar mein hua.."

he started to walk, he had been waiting for Geet. He wrote whatever he knew and came before the time.

"Sach mein iss pyar vyar ki hi wajah se sab hua" Geet said they as a they took a turn towards canteen.

Maan looked over his shoulder at Geet briefly. His problems are affecting Geet too. He felt more guilty. He shouldn't have told his family matters to her at first place.

"Jab khub pyar hua tab samajh aya Dev Bhai aur nayantara bhabhi ko kaisa lagta hoga."

What? His foot halt and he turned toward her.

"Tujhe pyar ho gaya!!!

She wanted to ran away. What did she say? Is she out of her mind. Can she escape Maan. No.

But she could not meet his eye.

"Bol Geet"

It felt he would kill her if she confessed her crime. The crime of falling in love.

She raised her eyes to look at him. His eyes were burning and he was trembling in anger.

But she looked straight at his eyes.

"Haan ho gaya hai mujhe pyar"

Hey dears .... writing LL after a long... I hope u still remember me and LL...if u do; don't forget to shower ur love.

Thank you. Was waiting. Great update. Hoping to see a jealous as well as angry Maan.

thanks for updating and for tagging me

Part 8

Outstanding update.... eloquently written

so Geet did not do to well in her exams

Maan feels bad

of cos he is astonished hearing what she said

as expected he confronts her

Gosh she admits she has fallen in love

will she confess that she loves him?

update soon

part 1

Why is maan so depressed if Dev and Naintara have made a good match?