MG FF: In the dark between stars||Note page 38|| - Page 10

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 2

Superb update. Geet is a grown up girl and beautiful also but her brother's fear didn't allow anyone to come near her. Prem is so protective for Geet. Geet saw someone behaving badly with Maan in his house. She also saw sleeping bag outside his home for him. She is shocked to see this. Geet felt bad for Maan. Maan does not want Geet to tell this to anyone.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Fabulous update. Maan took a promise from Geet not to tell his secret to anyone. In return Geet also took a promise from Maan to open up before her. Maan agreed.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Ramadan Mubarak!!!

Lol I have been waiting for u to reply back on the messenger😉

Loved the third chapter ❤️ but it’s gnawing at me as well. Makes me really sad to know about Maan’s predicament 😭 He’s been going through the worst form of abuse all by himself Not only is his dad beating him but starving him as well. It’s sad beyond words! I just hope that he wouldn’t have to go through this any longer.

Geet is truly mature enough for her age and this seems to be the beginning of their friendship.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Geet is so concerned for maan. After knowing that how maan is being beaten by his father , made geet so worried for him. Maan wants to hide it but geet couldn't leave him alone to suffer. She took promise from maam to talk with her whenever it is needed. Waiting for next dear

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hi,

Thank you for updating during this sacred time of prayers...

Loved the update...,the understanding of two teenagers and their maturity... Geet’s promise to keep his secret and Maan’s promise to share his pain with her... so genuine and so pure... this will help Maan’s burden which he carries on his heart and it will be more bearable to bear as he shares it with his new found friend...

Thnx

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Lovely update. So heartbreaking to see how much Maan has to endure at such a young age.

Now Maan and Geet's equation changes slowly.

Please continue

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This seems to be a start of something new. Geet is right, Maan should share his ordeal with someone. Anyways, looking forward to see how this shapes up.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wonderful update the way geet understood maan is superb waiting for next to know wat will happen in future

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Posted: 5 years ago
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What lovely story, read all the parts together. Really loved the way everyone in the house loved and pampered geet especially her Prem Bhai. I thought the story is about all happy souls and geet having crush on maan and one day maan falling for geet. But the twist was unexpected and i feel so sorry for Maan. I don’t understand why his father is like that and what maan is putting up with. Out slot all this I think atleast he got someone share his pain with now.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Finally maan confronts geet..


And as expected he didn't want to tell anyone about this nor he want to shate his feelings or pain to her..

I really wonder how can his dad do this to him and no one around there neighbors know about it..

Now that I think how he always pretend to b cool guy hiding his pain I really felt sad...and staying hungry all night on top of getting beaten is really cruel to him.

And I really like how geet won't let him to keep pretending like this but make him promise to share it with her ..

Though she has a crush on him but her feelings r not mere passing by bit they r deep ..it's just she don't show it to him..

But she really cares for him...

I hope she can help her in anyway so that he not get out of this but also don't feel pitied .

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