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Posted: 5 years ago
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Chapter 4


she closed her eyes due to fear as she thought she is going to slip on floor.. when she feels sum one is holding her..

she slowly opens her eyes one by one.. and luk up.. she saw two anger filled eyes luking at her.. then she luk down again luks up try to luk at his face.. when he shouts..

andhi ho kya dekh kr ni chl. sakti..

she gets angry and shouts..

tumhare pass ankhien hai ya button tum dekh kr ni chl sakte..

everyone luks at her with shock expression.. lyk she is sum alien.. who doesnt knw with whom she is messing up.

that person again shouts.. how dare u to talk to mee lyk That.. do u even have any idea who I am..

and stare at her with angry eyes

Geet- kyun tumko nhi maloom tum kaun ho??

he is shocked

he again shouts - I'm maan..Maan singh khurana

before he could say anything else Geet interrupt him.

Geet- to arti uttaru tumhari.. ya tumhare nam ka Prasad bantu.. she luks up.. and say baba ji kaise kaise namune bnaye hai apne..

now maan is super angry -

he shouts - kya kaha tumne

dekho tum bhot galat insaan say panga le ri ho..

tumhe pta ni hai mai tumhare sath kya kr sakta hu..

Geet - irritated.. she saw a boy is drinking coffee.. she grabs his mug and pour it on maan head :P

before he could realise what is happening..

he shouts ouchh..

Geet laughs and runs from there..

maan to his friends (cabir mukti dhruv alia navya) I'm nt going to leave her...

and everyone broke into laughter...maan pass angry glares to them and they al shutup at once

cabir was the frst one to ask.. yr waise maan thi kaun jo tere the maan singh khurana ki band bja gyi...

maan luks at him nd says I don't knw nd I'm nt going to spare her... nd they al leaves from there..

precap - hospital :P

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Chapter 4 b

they al reached near that man who was standing there holding fab 5 name plate...

and told him they r fab 5

nd leaves from airport..

they ar seating together in car..

when cabir ask maan where they ar going to stay..

maan told him that he have a appartment in London.. they al ar going to stay there..

MAAN SINGH KHURANA INTRODUCTION

he is lyk a coconut.. rude arrogant stubborn from outside.. Sweet caring loving from inside.. his soft syd is preserve for only few ppl.. for cabir mukti dhruv alya... then few years back navya came into there lyf she is cabir girlfriend from past 3-4 years.. she is very sweet by nature.. totally opposite from cabir.. maan sumtym wonder how can they both fell in luv.. being so different from each other.. and luv is blind he always thought while luking at them.. and navya she is nt part of there group she is jaan of there grp.. everyone needs her help every now and then.. she also become part of maan lyf.. maan is very protective for her.. for him they ar there only family.. he never feels lonley when he is with them when he alone he miss her sister roshni the most.. he had only few memories with her.. he was 10 yr old when his mom dad got separated.. roshni was 5 yr old that tym... the reason of there separation mom dad split was her mom.. he hates his mom.. alot... reason is unknown only maan knws.. roshni lives with his dad in London.. nd he lives with her mom anushka in Mumbai.. he never calls her mom.. he hates her somuch that nw it was getting impossible for him to live with her in same home... so he decided to move from there.. so he nw decided to move to London permanently... with his friends...

he is going to be the next md of khurana construction.. khurana construction is a world famous construction company.. khurana construction has two head office.. one is in London.. and second one is mumbai.. maan is joining London company from next week.. he only met with his dad when ever he cum to India for buisness deal.. they hardly talks with each other on ph.. but he never talk or met his sister ever.. he doesnt knw anything abt her lyf this thing always makes him sad.. he miss his dad sis alot..

he runs a music company along with fab 5.. do concerts with them..

he doesn't believe in luv at al.. his fans go gaga over him but he dont give a damm..

precap - same


Edited by masoomii - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 3fab update. Geet is a foodie. Like her name for her car. Eager to know who is the fab 5. So she bumped into Maan. Awaiting next chapters

Updated 2 more chapters

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Chapter 5



AIRPORT

Geet was laughing continuously when she again bumped into someone..laddoo dekh kr chla kr tujhse kitni br kaha hai.. abi gir jati to.. a lady in her 50's started scolding her.. then a man speaks up- offo giri to ni na dant kyu rhe ho aap usko

Geet- shouts in excitement bhua fufu and hug them..

they too happily hugs her back.. when her bhua start scolding her husband apne he bigard rakha hai isko..

Geet- giggles..

jai-isko bigardna ni,kehte lad pyaar say palna kehte hai

pooja- rolls her eyes

jai- achha laddoo tu itna kyun hass ri thi.. kya kr k ayi hai ab..

Geet-.. narrates,whole incident to them.. how she throw cold coffee on sumone head..

pooja- looked at her with shocked expression

jai- start laughing

pooja- ye jo tere logo ko sahi raste pe lane ki adat hai na ek din tujhe achha fasaygi..

Geet- mujhe kuch ni ho sakta bhua mere sath ap log ho mujhe bchane k liye.. then she again hug her..

nd says chalo sari batien yahi thodi karni hai chalo ghr chale.. mere tosty bechari kbse bhr dhoop mai akele khadi hai.. chalo chale and they leave from there for home..

KHURANA MANSION

maan nd al ar luking at a big appartment.. when navya ask they ar going to stay here?.. maan nods his head in yes.. he took out his ph nd dialed sum one num told him to bring keys.. they al standing outside of the house waiting for that person.. and then that person reached there.. he was the caretaker of khurana mansion.. he hand over keys to maan.. and left from there maan opens mansion doors. and went inside every one follows him..

he was luking here nd there.. lyk he was in search of something.. cabir notice this and ask him what happened to him

maan was luking al lost.. mukti dhruv ask him if he is ok.. he nods his head in yes.. nd again start thinking. abt sumthing.. navya put her hand on his back gently rub it and ask him to speak.. he smiles nd put his head in her lap.. closed his eyes nd start blabbering.. when we were kids we cum here for holidays.. that rooms he indictes to a room.. me nd roshni use to stay there.. wo uska fav room tha.. nd thn dad moved from Mumbai then they shifted to Australia..

he stops and open his eyes.. everyone has tears in there eyes.. he indicates everyone nt too cry.. nd ask them too choose there room... nd he is going to stay in roshni room.. he took his bags nd guitar nd left from there..

..

GEET HOME

THEY reach Home.. every one hugs them.. nd told them how badly they al r missing them.. pooja nd jai said they al r missing them too.. nd indicates towards a bag.. there gifts ar in it.. everyone got excited.. they handover there gifts to them.. andstart chit chatting..

they were so engross in there talk they didn't realise.. abt time.. when badepapa cums and inform them abt dinner.. they al went on dinning table.. after there dinner they went to sleep

MAAN HOME

maan refused to have dinner.. he said he is nt feeling hungry.. nobody force him.. bcz they knw he is missing roshni today he won't eat.. he was in his room nd playing guitar.. he didn't realise when he injured his hand.. but he kept playing.. in moring around 8'o clock cabir entire in his room he was shocked.. maan was sleeping.. nd blood was dripping from his hand.. he wake him up make him wash his hand.. nd drag him to the nearest hospital.. maan protest but he didn't listen to him..

HOSPITAL

a nurse did bandage to his hands.. doctor prescribe him painkillers they ar coming out from hospital when he again bang into sumone..

precap- no precap.. bcz u guys cn guess :P

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Chapter 4 a n b

so they meet and got off the wrong foot.

Maan shouts at Geet!

great that she was not scared of him.

wow she poured coffee on Maan.

his friends laugh but Maan is angry.

so Maan hates his mom, eager to know why.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Chapter 5

Geet happy seeing her bua and fufu.

Maan emotional as he is at KM!

sad seeing Maan like this.

oh no Maan's fingers are bleeding

Thank God they took him to the hospital/

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 4 a n b

so they meet and got off the wrong foot.

Maan shouts at Geet!

great that she was not scared of him.

wow she poured coffee on Maan.

his friends laugh but Maan is angry.

so Maan hates his mom, eager to know why.

She is not scared of anyone 😂

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Will try to update today .. depend upon response I'm getting for my story..

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Posted: 5 years ago
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read all parts in one go

very interesting story

maan shout on geet when she bump with him but geet also answer in her way to him

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Chapter6


Geet was coming inside.. she was reading sum..file nd thats when she bang into sumone she didn't realise it..bcz she was busy in reading files..due to this al her files dropped on floor from her hands.. but maan didn't let her fall he was holding her waist from one hand.. geet face was covered with her duppata so maan didn't realise whom he was holding.. he removed duppata from her face.. nd was shocked to see her.. geet was equally shocked.. both shout on same time TUM :P.. maan drops her on floor.. bcz of sudden shock.. geet in pain shouts OUCHHH..

Geet gets angry on him and shout

Geet-mujheneeche kyu fainka.. u monster

MAan-he didn't do it intentionally nd was feeling guilty for that nd was going to apologize to her.. but after listening to monster word he again gets angry..

Maan-kya bulaya tumne mujhe ..

Geet- MONSTER she said dis with a smirk..

Maan- if I'm monster then ur nt looking less than a chudail.. he too said dis with a smirk..

Geet gets angry she tumne mujhe chudail bulaya.. haww do I luk lyk a chudail??

Man do I luk lyk a monster..

Geet- yes..

maan-u

Geet- ha mai.. kya.. bolo

maan-chudail..

Geet-don't call mee chudail

maan - u don't call mee monster then

and their tu tu mai mai starts.. whole scene is witnessed by cabir.. he was sitting on bench and enjoying..there fight..

maan and geet were fighting lyk Tom nd Jerry.. forgetting there surrounding..

suddenly sumone hide behind geet.. she didn't realise bcz she was busy in her fight..

when a nurse came near geet nd calls her...

NURSE- geet baby-

After listening to her name geet cum back to h er. senses and luk at the direction of vvoice.

marium- head nurse was standing there nd calling her..

mums geet whisper her name..

maan to luks in that direction..

marium cums near geet and indicates her with hands that sumone is behind her..

Geet- understood at once whom she is talking abt

Geet- achha mums.. arohi uth gyi kya..

maan nd cabir was listening to there conversation

mums- ha bete it uth gyi.. uski medicine ka tym ho gya hai or wo pta nhi kaha jakr chup gyi hai..

both mums nd geet knws she is behind her..

Geet- then little loudly said achha chup gyi mil ni rhi..

theek hai.. mai to uski fav choclates layi thi.. ab to wo yaha hai he. nhi to mai kisi or ko De dete hu...

Geet pretends she is going from there..

suddenly they hear voice no ye mele choclate.. slf mai khaugi.. a 4-5 year gal. cums out from behind she was holding geet duppata..

along with a teddy bear ..

to be continued...

Edited by masoomii - 5 years ago

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