Maneet: MADLY IN LOVE chapter6,7,8page3

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9 years back when I used to watch geet that time I thought about this story .. but thn I wrote it for other show on different forum.. now I'm back here on this forum so I thought to share it with you ppl .. i 'll start with introduction.. please tell me should I continue with story or not ..

P.s - I'm not a professional writer nd I'm writing it after almost 5 years ..ignore my grammatical mistakes..


Index:

Geet introduction page 1

Chapter1 page1

chapter2 page1

Chapter3 page2

Chapter4 page2

Chapter4b page2

Maan introduction page 2

Chapter5 page2

Chapter6 page3

Chapter 7 page3

Chapter 8 page 3

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Introduction : Geet Handa :

she is a cute bubbly gal. full on chatter box,prankster,down to earth, humble,Sweet, full of lyf.. love to dance. very good singer however she sings occasionally. but only for her family nd friends. and for some selected ppl whom are close to her heart whom she lyk only for those. nd for rest of world she is strict, rude,nd arrogant .nobody ever want or try to mess with her. bcz she never spare anyone who try to trouble her.. and that person who try to mess with her regret his / her whole lyf for trying to messing up with her.. only her best friend can handle her.. she along with her best friend runs a music company.. which is actually started by her best friend sidharth kapoor.. but later he get busy with films.. nd music .. so Geet alone handle his music company .. Birds wings. but sumtyms he pay visit to birds wings.. bcz he don't want to handle angry Geet .. 🙄 .. she also handle sum ngo's, childern ward in her uncle hospital.school which is started by her chachi.. for poor kids whose parents can't afford school fee.. and a old age home.. which was started by sidharth grand father. now she look after that ashram. her other best friend tanushree is one of the top model in fashion industry.her cousin sister is London's top fashion designer . her name is ishika kapoor she is sidharth bhabhi.. and she lives in a big fat happy joint family with her cousins , uncle and aunts , her grandfather best friend families also live with them . They all are living under one roof since ages . From the time they all put their first step in London when they where in their adulthood. And they all came to London with hopes nd dreams in there eyes. For better future for their kids and family..


P.s- more characters will be introduced as story precedes....

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Chapter 1:


Geet puttar uth ja..subh ho gyi hai... dekh 8 bj gye hai babuji tyaar ho gye honge.. dekh tujhe maloom hai na 9 bje tk unhe sb breakfast table pr chahiye.. hote hai.. warna tujhe maloom hai na bauji gussa ho jate hai.. chl uth ja ab warna aj earthquake yahi humare ghr ajyga.. Geet chachi. .. soumya Handa was continuously trying to wake her up.. but Geet being a kumbhkaran is not listening to her.. . yeh abtk uthi nhi chachi suddenly a voice came from behind.. chachi turns around.. looks at person .. veer (veer singhania owner of singhania hotels nd chain in London and Mumbai. he is part tym chef .. hehe actually only at home.. Sweet guy luv his family alot nd he is dating geet Chachi's daughter alvira) -! He is also geet's best friend and was standing with two cups in his hands.. chachi... looks at him with worried expression... nhi puttar mai dekh isko kbse utha ri hu yeh sunn he ni ri.. ab tu he utha mai neeche kitchen mai jari hu.. tu isko utha k neeche le a.. veer nods his head in disbelief.. its his daily routine.. to make her up in morning.. when he is out of home for work commitments.. then it's their other friends duty to look after geet.nd make her up in morning any how.. geet geet laddoo uth ja.. remember tere aj ashram mai meeting hai.. said veer.. knws nw she 'll definitely cum out from dream land.. ohh freak geet get up with a jerk.. start scolding veer.. tune mujhe pehle kyun ni uthaya ab mai pakka late ho jaugi meeting k liye.. said with sad face.. madam ladoo raat ko 2 bje sone jaoge to subah tym pr kaise uthoge.. said veer while controlling his laughter..

just. for info.. tell u guys Geet grand parents are not only friends there kids are also friends nd know their grand kids are also best friends ..

to be continued..

precap - breakfast table


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Chapter 2:

veer- ok mai jata hoon.. ready hone see u at breakfast table and plz ready hoja jaldi.. warna mogambo gussa ho jayga..

and left from there..

Geet nods her head nd rush to washroom..

she wore.. baby pink colour anarkali suit.. nd check watch..

9:10 am.. ohh shit 10 min late ho gyi ..bhago

she runs from there..

every one already started eating breakfast..

Geet to herself mar gye ajto..

then a voice .. breaks geet thought..

10 minutes late.. said surrender kapoor.. ( he was army before coming to London .head of the family.. love's his family alot.. very strict man.. maintains discipline in family. which everyone has to follow..every one is scared of him no one dare to speak in front of him.. in code language every one calls him mogambo.. )

Get- sorry badepapa.. mai na late uthi aj isliye late ho gyi breakfast k liye.. she said with cute innocent pout..

everyone smiles at her..

surrender kapoor too smiles at her.. pulls her ear.. tujhpe koi kbhi gussa kr sakta hai kya..

Geet- soch kr btati hu pretends she is thinking.. koi ni nd side hugs badepapa.. everyone start laughing..

drama queen said sunita kapoor ( better half of surrender kapoor.. she is a very sweet lady.. loves to cracks jokes, simple house wife always obey her husband a true Punjabi from heart every one calls her badimummy)

Geet- gud morning bade papa badimummy.. she wish them and every one else who were present their

nd ask.. her Chachi... abt breakfast menu..

Geet- breakfast mai kya bna hai aj

Chachi - aloo k pranthe..

Geet- wow chachi.. plz jaldi do na bhook lg ri hai aloo pranthe ka nam Sun kr..

chachi- laughs bcz she knws how much geet is crazy abt aloo pranthe..

nd serves her..

Geet- garam garam aloo pranthe ko kisi or k hath say khane ka maza he kuch or hai..

nd pass her plate to her chacha..

just for a change aj mai chacha k hath say khaugi..

her chacha (vikram Handa owner of Handa constructions)

starts feeding her..

surrender kapoor then ask.. -geet beta tere bhua or fufa kl kitne bje ki flight say wapis are hai...

Geet-sham ko 6 bje..

surrender kapoor- acha kaun jara hai lene..

before Anyone could say anything geet interrupt them

mai jaugi..

surrenderkapoor- theek hai puttar dhyan say jana..

precap- maan 🙄


Edited by masoomii - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hi

Nice start please update remaining parts

Waiting....

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Congrats on the story. Lovely start. Awaiting Maan's entry. Please post further chapters n cs.
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Thankyou ..3 threads hai 🙄... I'm reading it all over again ... Nd doing correction al along ... mujhe bhi ni pta abhi kitne chapters Maine likhe hue hai nd story is still incomplete hopefully ab complete hojay 😅

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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Congrats on the story. Lovely start. Awaiting Maan's entry. Please post further chapters n cs.

thankyou I'll try to post atleast 2 more chapters today

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Chapter 3:



After breakfast everyone leaves for there respective works..

Geet had a car which also has a name Tosty 💕

she just simply love herer car..she has a small refrigerator in her car (let mee tell u guys geet is a foodie.. and she carries full kitchen in her car :p)..

she,hates when sum one calls tosty.. a car.. :-P

Geet was searching for car keys suddenly sumone pulls her duppata.. she turn around.. nd shouts not again leave my duppata.. oscar chodh mera duppata.. (her dog he luv to play with her duppata) dekh Oscar mera duppata chodh de plz aj mere bhot important meating aj ren de.. plz mere baat Maan ja.. plz but Oscar was in mood to listen to her he was running in whole house .. and geet is running behind him.. it took almost half an hour ..after lot tantrums geet was able to get back her duppata.. then she leaves for ashram.. for meeting..

it was 5 pm in evening when she cum back home

full tired.. she went to her room.. nd fall asleep..

it was 8 pm.. when she woke up.. after having dinner.. she again went to her room.. nd start reading sum files.. when her ph rings it was sidharth call she at once pick her ph.. she talk to him for sum tym then fell sleeps..

NEXT MORNING

she woke up early in the morning after hearing sum voices cuming from living area..

she woke up nd cums out from room.. and saw her Chachi nd badimummy standing in living area and giving instructions to servants.. today her bhua pooja nd fufa jai iyer is coming back from Canada after attending sum medical conference.. .. there.. so Chachi nd Dadi ar doing arrangement for there welcum.. she smiles while luking at them.. and went to washroom.. she wore peach colour suit.. and went for breakfast.. after breakfast she went for shopping with alvira ( she is medical student). it was 4 pm when they cum back.. drops alvira home.. and drove. for airport..

AIRPORT-

she reached airport..

checks her watch

not bad geet 5:30 u reached on tym..

parks her tosty..

nd enter in airport..

she saw a man was standing there with a name plate.. And is luking very tense..

she read name plate.. it was written FAB 5 ..

she thought how strange.. name k place p fab 5 likha hai.. aur ye fab 5 kya hai.. then she thought chado mujhe kya lena.. and she moves from there.. nd start luking here nd there for her bhua nd fufa..

when she bumps into sumone..

precap-

anyguess who might that person be?? ;)

:D


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Chapter 3 fab update. Geet is a foodie. Like her name for her car. Eager to know who is the fab 5. So she bumped into Maan. Awaiting next chapters

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