Oneshot - Teri khata hai mere jiya...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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She had never thought that she would meet him ever again in life!! Least she imagined meeting him in her own cousin's wedding.


The shock she felt would have been well mirroring on her face, for she saw that familiar smirk on his face as if he was expecting the same reaction from her.


She was blank for a second, not knowing what to feel, to react. Then a small part of her felt excited, alive again, seeing him after so long, the part she had tried to bury deeper somewhere. Her heart picked up speed, as she stare at his handsome face, doing a quick re- memorising of his features.


But it lasted only until her brain started working again. She came back to her senses and with that came back all the unpleasant past memories too.


She tried to shun them away, she had moved on from them, from her past. No point in holding on to it.


Instead she tried to behave normal with him.


The next 20 minutes which she had to spent talking to him were the hardest for her. Each & every moment, she had tried so hard to erase from her mind & heart, of their past, of them together, he brought them alive by reminiscing the old days. In his words, " They were the best days, truly unforgettable"!


She had to agree with him on that, those days are truly unforgettable indeed. She had been trying to forget them, forget him for last 8 years now. She had even started to believe that she was achieving that. But this one chanced meeting with him have cleared her illusion!!!


She forced a smile with great difficulty, it was not a pleasant realisation, not at all. What was more painful, was that he only had good memories to recall, of happy times, of fun & mischief.

While she could only remember the pain she had gone through. The heart break, that constant heart ache, those silent cries....Which he had, may be unknowingly caused her.


she had never told him that in past.


And she still was unable to tell him the truth, that how he, in his immaturity, had spoiled her for love!!








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Usse toh ahsaas hi na tha mere jazbaton ka,

wo unki gehrai kya samjhata!


Ke Jisne kiya na ho sacha ishq kabhi,

wo mohabbat me meri ruswaii kya samjhata!!


- Shona (original work) 💞.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It was more like a situational scene where geet sees her past and remembers her past.

Would be waiting for next.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Kab unres hoga ye 🙄

It's hard to wait, posting after a long time na..

Edited by Shonameet - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Beautiful OS



Geet meets Maan after 8 years

and she remembers the pain she went through

while all he remembers in the good times


there should be a second part to this story

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Love ur works...

Happy to read again of ur stories...

It's beautiful,is it has further parts..

😍♥

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hi shona thanks 4 posting. Will comment later
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Usse toh ahsaas hi na tha mere jazzbaton ka,

wo unki gehrai kya samjhta!


Ke Jisne kiya na ho sacha ishq kabhi,

wo mohabbat me meri ruswaii kya samjhata!!


--- shona. 😉☺

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Lovely OS ........beautifully written

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Posted: 5 years ago
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hi Shona...


beautiful update....

feeling for Geet.... her feelings are justified....

8 years have passed but the pain is still there.

just as she is trying to forget him they meet again.

sad that Maan broke her heart....

kudos to her for behaving normal...


waiting for next!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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beautiful but sad

liked very much

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