My Innocent Surrender 3 updated LAST PART on Pg 90 / 16-8-2020 - Page 33

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 7


Hey!! don't stop updating this one...readers are always gonna have different views. and there's a difference between reading something at one go and reading it in a serialized manner. however, I also understand that as an author, you want them to trust the plan. however, we don't have the big picture yet. And I agree that, like you said, if the name was changed to sam all our assumptions would have been the same as maan.


loved the update.


like how well you have portrayed the conflicted maan. wants to humiliate her and yet feel that it is not the place or time.


geet's courage is admirable. in a roomful of strangers, she is standing up against her brother . the handa land is now with khurana. will he demand the same incentives that aman talked about? waiting eagerly to know what have you planned for next

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 5

Ufff Yeh misunderstanding kab khatam hogiii

Yeh MSK thoda dimag aur kyun nahi lagataa 🤣🤣

If she is not spending money on her self toh kuch toh

Reason ho saktaaa hai direct 1 plus 1 : 4 kar diya 😡😡

Thank you for the pm

M Little bit behind 🙈 jurno life

Do send me the password for part 6

Thank you 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

thanks for the pm!

Part 7

Dynamic update. greatly written.

how will Geet meet now make the payment?

Maan's questions are reasonable....

Geet should tell Maan everything.... this lies are just piling up.

sad that Geet again accuses Maan. she should not judging Maan. he did tell her why he left his family.

Her brother is the author of his own demise.

agree with Maan about Aman.

Maan is a perfect position to exact his revenge. but he is worried about Geet.

Geet adamant on going to Chandigrah.'

Maan did not have to but great that Maan took Geet to Chandigrah.

liked that Maan respects woman.

feeling for Geet... finally she sees the reality! Aman will never change.

as expected Aman humiliates Geet.

well Maan is upset seeing this.

at least Maan wants to protect Geet. she stirs up emotions in him.

wow Maan bought the house.

Geet is upset with what is happening.

can understand Maan's feelings.

he has Geet at his mercy but does not feel victorious.

what will Geet do now? what will be Maan's next move?


continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice update

Geet took Geet with him to chandigarh

But there she got betrayed by her own brother

He humitale her it really broke her

Maan want to see Geet in this situation

But he didn't liked seeing her like this

He brought her home

Let see what will Geet do

And what's Maan next move will be

Thanks for PM

Update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nic pt

Geet trust her brother

How is gambler

Her brother lost her land In gambling

And still he has guts to humiliate geet is public

But maan come on time and save her

One side maan want to take revenge from geet

And but other side he attract toward her

Hope geet tell maan truth soon

Before she get in some serious trouble

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Gurti_Maaneet

Sweety don't take on your heart... I mentioned it because many readers commenting in that way... I said all because last time one reader got disappointed as I blamed her particularly... Jabki last time bhi note uske liye nahi tha. I said in casual...

Sure dear no worries I can understand but for a moment I thought My science teacher is scolding me for not writing the correct answers ;)

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 6. Very nice and sensual as well as interesting update. Geet spills the tea & takes a shower in Maans bathroom as she thinks she wl finish before Maan comes but luck not in her favour and he comes there sees her & desire erupts in both. Maan kisses her & Geet also likes it. Both doesn't want to loose control but both looses it

Maan takes Geet for dinner & her cousin had to come to give the money but Maan tells her that he lost too much money in gambling . Geet comes to know that Maan knows everything abt her. Geet becomes very sad that now what she wl do. Maan gives her pain but he is not feeling happy .

His nephew already passed away but whose daughter is Myra?


Pls share password for part 7

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome update.

Geet is waiting for his cousin to give her money back but he does not care and is playing. Hate his attitude. Poor geet, first she did not believe maan but that's the truth. Like the way that maan helps when she is so desperate to meet his cousin. Finally he bought the land for her, hope it isn't gaming plan.

Eager to know what he will do now.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome, Geet,s brother is more than Ka*****, how could he raise his finger on Geet,s character like this, by humiliating Geet publicly Aman fulfilled Maan,s wish but Maan was not happy with all this and hell angry on Aman

Loved Maan,s body,s reactions when he is around Geet always goes on overdrive in Geet,s close proximity and poor Geet is all unaware, eagerly waiting for nxt

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Posted: 5 years ago

may i get the PW of part 7

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