MSK'S LOST BRIDE . NEW MG SS. UPDATED PART 19 @ P.N.78 @ 18/1/2020 - Page 54

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice update.

Waiting for next.

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PART 17


Geet was in dilemma now, she was not able to think, what she would do now.

Maan saw her face, flow of emotions passing through, he let go of her, taking each steps back , still waiting for her one word.

Geet look at him going away from her again, his face that reflected only pain and hurt.

No.. she couldn't let him go or certainly can't make him stay hungry just for her stubbornness. She can't.. her heart screams .

Tere bina zindagi se koi… Shikhwa… Tho Nahi
Shikhwa nahi… shikhwa nahi… shikhwa nahi…
Tere bina zindagi bhi lekin… zindagi… tho nahi…
Zindagi nahi… zindagi nahi… zindagi nahi…



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Edited by Mg13 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Lovely update

Love it

Lovely maaneet passionate moments

Waiting for next update

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Posted: 5 years ago

hi i like your stories very much . so pls provide me password for your update

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Amazing updat 😍 comment on blog

And thanks for password 👍

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Beautiful update. Geet got restless seeing maan going and couldn't see him sad, so stops him and breaks his and her own fast. Maan is overwhelmed and happy to see that even though his mishty has forgotten everything yet her pure love and heart cannot see him in pain or sad. Both have their dinner together and spend sometime together before maan decides to leave but geet doesn't let him go as she herself didn't know the reason behind her feelings for him but she wanted him near her today as she felt safe and at peace with him. Maan knew what her closeness does to him but still he gave into his mishty's demand and stayed back with her and they became one in all senses. Wonderfully written and beautifully described their moments together. Hope geet will not regret their moments now as it can break maan's heart and make him guilty too. Eagerly waiting to see her reaction. Continue soon and thanks for the pm and password dear😃

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Posted: 5 years ago

I tried posting my comments on the blog but there was some error so couldn't post it there. Hope that's fine because it was a password protected update.

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Posted: 5 years ago

thanks for the pm!

Part 17

remarkable update! superbly written!

Geet's dilemma is well portrayed!

of cos she cannot see Maan sad. at least she said so much.

can understand Maan's tears.

aww they both feed each other.

Geet's questions are reasonable.

wow she realises she is falling in love with MSK.

nice that she does not want Maan to leave.

great that he assures her.

beautiful moments.

they both become one!

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interesting precap! hope that there will be no regrets

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Lovely update dear

Maan and geet scene are too good

Watting for update

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