Mannet ss : saaya pt5 page 41 / tsr pg49 - Page 8

Congratulations for new story. Maan as angry young man and geet with him. Living together. Maans dad do not seems to like or trust maan. Interesting concept. Update soon

Awesome 👍 seems to be different concept geet can't speak and maan geet love each other and maan father don't understand him why waiting to know what happened in past in maaneet life so update soon 👏🙂

congrats on new story amazing prologue and cs loved it maan and his dad having fight i take it he dosent want a mute dil aka he is against geet being maan wife

awesome update maaneet love each other both live a happy life maan asusual too possessive and caring towards her both have a peaceful life together maan dad dosent trust him and blames him for everything geet so cute angry at maan for not waking her on time and now he is late but maan pacifys his jaan making her understand he can handle anything geet is happy as maan has been with her ever since she lost her loved ones he is her only support

Congratulations on your new story

Character Sketch is Interesting

I like their ages Maan 22 years and Geet 20 years

Prologue is Captivating

It seems like Maan and his father don't have a good bond

but worst he feels his mother was alone too just like him

Part 1

Fabulous and so Intriguing Start

Maan stays with Geet at his farmhouse

and he has been with her since the day she lost her parents and it seems

she had also lost her voice then

so Maan's business is what he has worked hard and bringing his business to where it is

but why is his father is so much tension surely Maan knows he has important meetings

and he is responsible

Nice update

Good start....loved maan and geet love and affection

Wat happened between maan and his father...why he left the house and where is his mother

Waiting for next update